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Bayleafqween
08-21-2010, 03:43 AM
Welcome to my art thread, which is full of art. I guess this is the part where I post links. Please do comment on how to improve my drawings


An anime girl that I made (http://bayleafqween.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d2wn8g1)
Rena from higurashi (http://bayleafqween.deviantart.com/#/d2ww4kw)
Yotsuba from Yotsuba&! (http://bayleafqween.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d2wj8r8)

All the picture's outlines were made in paint.Net and were colored in photoshop. I'd like some advice on drawing bodies.

Saith
08-21-2010, 03:48 AM
I like your Rena where's the hat?.
If there's one thing, I'd say that the highlights in the eyes aren't proportional. That's just my opinion, though. Maybe scale up the dodge feature or something? : )

Bayleafqween
08-21-2010, 04:10 AM
Daa daadaa (http://i37.tinypic.com/30c4yuc.jpg)

Does this look any better?

Saith
08-21-2010, 08:06 PM
Yeah it does, even though I was referring to the white circles :L