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Flare
01-06-2012, 02:19 PM
Yes, I draw. I tend to draw 800*800px pictures. I feel like there's more room. Anyway, here are some things that I drew. I would appreciate critiques since I get showered with compliments. You can look at more pictures at my dA account (http://flarefugikage.deviantart.com).

The images might be a bit big, so I'm putting links to the big ones.
http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/355/8/f/jooolt_by_flarefugikage-d4jtgjl.png
http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/289/b/5/luxio_by_flarefugikage-d4d2m4p.png
http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/282/f/d/furret_by_flarefugikage-d4cc8fz.png
http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2011/270/1/a/floatz_by_flarefugikage-d4b2xtu.png
And here are a few more. [X] (http://th07.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2011/333/0/7/_sunrise_grovyle__by_flarefugikage-d4hphbl.png)[X] (http://th08.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2011/335/9/a/excadrill_dump_by_flarefugikage-d4hvskg.png)(Bad scanner is bad. V_V)[X] (http://fc04.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/307/4/d/__shiny_quilava___by_flarefugikage-d4f0e8w.png)[X] (http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2011/320/5/c/she__s_kind_of____odd_by_flarefugikage-d4gfbbg.png) [X] (http://th08.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/i/2011/319/6/3/zangoose_by_flarefugikage-d4gb72o.png)(Huge image is huge.)

Dar
01-06-2012, 09:14 PM
These are great. And I love your drawing style.

Superbird
01-07-2012, 01:11 AM
Same. I absolutely love both the styles that are displayed here.

Blastoise Fortooate
01-07-2012, 02:12 AM
These are very good. the coloring especially is great. Of course, you asked for criticism, so here goes.

Most of these seem to be quite loose anatomy-wise. This is alright to a degree but, for example, your jolteon up there at the top? Its arms don't really connect with the torso well. The luxio, while fantastically adorable, had pointy front paws but round, tiny back legs. Also, while varying the thickness of the lines looks very good, in some places it's too much, like on the jolteon's right ear and the top of its ruff.

Very good stuff, though.

Tomboy
01-07-2012, 04:13 AM
These are awesome and I love your drawing style! :3
If you want critique, though, maybe try rounding off a few of the longer edges, because there are some little corners that don't really belong.

ShinyEevee
01-07-2012, 06:37 PM
Your style is so cute!
I love your furret

DarkAura
01-08-2012, 12:42 AM
The arms on the Jolteon are disproportioned (meaning if you put them straight down, they'd be at a different level), but other than that, beautiful artwork. :)