ClockworkJB
Aspiring Spacenoid
A while back I had a vague idea of writing a Pokemon fic in a detective/mystery style. It got me thinking about Pokemon in a more real-world setting and how the law enforcement agencies of Kanto might actually deal with Pokemon related crime.
I started writing, but for whatever reason, I just kinda trailed off after the first paragraph:
For Jonathan Grey, it was that odd stillness. It was always that odd stillness that made the hairs at the base of his neck stand on end, a creeping shiver that ran all the way down the length of his spine. Even with the noise and movement of the forensic team, the snapping of cameras, the flashing lights, the pulsating energies of psychic Pokemon, there was still that permeating feeling that time was suspended, a silent lingering of something just beyond human perception. The lingering sensation of death.
Comments? Ideas on where to head from here?
EDIT: so I suddenly overcame writer's block and continued on, but feedback and ideas are still welcome
I started writing, but for whatever reason, I just kinda trailed off after the first paragraph:
For Jonathan Grey, it was that odd stillness. It was always that odd stillness that made the hairs at the base of his neck stand on end, a creeping shiver that ran all the way down the length of his spine. Even with the noise and movement of the forensic team, the snapping of cameras, the flashing lights, the pulsating energies of psychic Pokemon, there was still that permeating feeling that time was suspended, a silent lingering of something just beyond human perception. The lingering sensation of death.
Comments? Ideas on where to head from here?
EDIT: so I suddenly overcame writer's block and continued on, but feedback and ideas are still welcome
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