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NaNoWriMo 2010

If my story doesn't his 50,000 words, which is actually questionable, I'll just start on the sequel right away.

Also, suffering from writer's block in the middle of a chapter is very aggravating. :/

You think that's annoying, try having writer's block on the final chapter! That happened when I was writing the rough draft.
 
what isn't the goal today 5001 words?? I updated my wordcount a few seconds ago to 6060 and it tells me 'YOU MUST WRITE 698 WORDS YOU ARE ONE DAY BEHIND SCHEDULE' and I'm like 'okay jesus christ'

shitty excerpt:
‘If you fall, there’s no one to help you!’

Everyone had gathered outside the shack to watch as Grigori expertly climbed the tree, clawing his way up like a little monkey. His small size made him the lightest of the group, and he was quite good at climbing, so when Yuri said they’d be having meat that night to finish the bag before it started rotting, he’d been the first to dart out and jump for the bag.

‘He fell once already, had to lay flat in bed for two weeks,’ Ilya said to Vsevolod, ‘I guess it’s lucky a branch broke his fall, and that he hit the roof. He could’ve died easy as nothing.’

Vsevolod spotted the broken branch, a few metres under the meat bag. Grigori didn’t seem at all deterred by his past fall, and had already reached the bag, hauling it up on the thick branch he had straddled.

‘You want somethin’ specific?’ he called, peering at the meat. Yuri told him to just get the biggest hunk and cut the bag loose after that. They’d gotten a double supply of both fresh and dried meat via the supply train, so the dry stuff had taken longer to consume. Grigori reached inside and took some choice pieces under his arm, letting the bag drop to the ground with a heavy thud. He slithered down the tree quick as a snake, pouncing on the ground, and passed the food to Yuri. Ilya clapped and cheered, and Stanislav grinned. Grigori smiled briefly, donned his jacket, picked up his rifle and went back to do his last hour of guarding, reaching into his inside pocket to grab his little sculpture.

I'll edit it etc etc next month okay ;;
 
I see everyone posting excerpts and I'm just like "D:" because my entire thing is mostly dialogue at this point and my main character freaking out because he got tortured and then treated to a nice lunch. ; ; STILL, I AM AHEAD OF THE CURVE by sixteen words oh god I have coursework to do today aaaaaa
I'm at 2400 or so and it is all stupid. Okay, I have like 300 words of plot that aren't concentrated stupid, but the rest of it...?


ALSO I am le late but I am sort of interested in joining the word war. :D?
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UGH I HATE YOU GUYS I GO TO SLEEP AND SURSKITTY IS ACTUALLY DOING WELL
WHAT IS THIS??

*writes like a mofo*
 
GO SURSKITTY AND TAILSY!!!

YOU CAN DO IT THIS YEAR!!

no srsly you can actually do it this year i believe in you \o/

EXCERPT:

[FONT=Liberation Serif, serif]After lunch Damien found himself sitting inside an almost too-spacious room with a very modernist décor. The table itself was made of glass, with long, thin steel legs, and the walls were a clean, crisp white. He felt a stark contrast between himself and the room, with its polished glass and decorative items, but even more disconcerting was the knowledge that he was sat in Katheryn's office. [/FONT]


[FONT=Liberation Serif, serif]A computer terminal was set against the wall bearing a window, and around that sat a number of hard drives and odd-looking pieces of electronics. Damien recognised the Geiger counter device from earlier, and he saw what he thought was a printer, but everything else was totally alien. He'd been told to sit quietly and not to touch anything at all, but curiosity, as curiosity was wont to do, got the better of him and he ended up peering at a ticking instrument sat on a smooth black table.[/FONT]


“[FONT=Liberation Serif, serif]Don't touch it,” said Katheryn, entering the room and closing the door behind her. “You'll not like what happens if you do, and I'm afraid that I won't be able to heal you and Megan has gone home.”[/FONT]


[FONT=Liberation Serif, serif]Damien withdrew his fingers instantly, cradling them in his hand.[/FONT]


“[FONT=Liberation Serif, serif]Now, then, if you'll sit yourself down in front of the computer we can begin the testing.”[/FONT]


“[FONT=Liberation Serif, serif]What are you actually looking for?” he asked, slipping into the chair, mindful of the fact that anything in the room was potentially a weapon and something that could kill him. Katheryn didn't answer him promptly but instead busied herself with the various cables and bits and pieces that were scattered around the room or held inside ultra-modern casings.[/FONT]


“[FONT=Liberation Serif, serif]You're quite clearly magical. We don't doubt that at all,” she said after a few moments of silence, “but the nature of your magic has so far eluded us. You're inactive, which means you aren't echoing, but in theory my magicounter will tell me how magical you are.”[/FONT]


“[FONT=Liberation Serif, serif]There's a scale?” he asked, looking down at the counter she held in her hand. The screen was totally blank.[/FONT]


“[FONT=Liberation Serif, serif]Yes. I devised it myself, oh, around forty or so years ago. Until then we used the outdated and frankly ridiculous system of 'witch', 'sorcerer' and so on and so forth, but my method makes everything so much more precise,” she replied, tapping the magicounter with her index finger. [/FONT]


[FONT=Liberation Serif, serif]The machine lit up with a faint buzz, and quickly Katheryn plugged it into her computer using a long, thin cable.[/FONT]


“[FONT=Liberation Serif, serif]I'm sorry,” said Damien, “but did you say forty years ago? You can't be more than thirty,” he said incredulously, frowning after he'd said it. Katheryn didn't look a day over thirty, with smooth skin and thick, blonde hair.[/FONT]


“[FONT=Liberation Serif, serif]The more powerful a mage is, the older the mage can become. Robert (or as some will call him Lord Black) is far more powerful than I, and so he will age far more gracefully. My scale goes from zero to nine, with nine being the weakest and zero being the first; there are no zero-order mages currently alive in the world to the best of my knowledge, but there are at least a dozen first-order mages. In the old parlance we would call them Lords and Ladies, but since some of us have moved beyond that it makes more sense to call them first-order mages.”[/FONT]


“[FONT=Liberation Serif, serif]What's the difference between each level?” he asked, looking at her warily as she placed electrodes on his temples. [/FONT]


“[FONT=Liberation Serif, serif]An entire order of magnitude. I am a borderline second-order mage, which means that my power is very nearly third-order, and Robert is first-order. His power is approximately double mine. And so on and so forth until ninth-order mages, who really aren't very powerful at all... Now, just sit there and relax.”[/FONT]


[FONT=Liberation Serif, serif]Katheryn stood several feet away from him and then pointed the magicounter directly at a small potted plant in the corner of the room. The only response was a slow, quiet beeping. She swept the device around the room, pausing occasionally to register increased beeps or decreased beeps depending on the object at which it was pointed, and then finally brought it to rest in front of Damien. The device, which had been beeping consistently until then, simply stopped beeping at all.[/FONT]


“[FONT=Liberation Serif, serif]That's not right...” said Katheryn, frowning down at the magicounter. She tapped it again and then restarted it. Then, once again, she swept it around the room registering the same levels of magic as she had done before. When the device reached Damien it fell silent.[/FONT]


[FONT=Liberation Serif, serif]She stood there for a few moments ignoring Damien's look of confusion until she clicked her fingers and pushed him, complete with the chair, away from the computer. She knelt down in frotn of the terminal and, brushing her fingers across the screen, turned it on.[/FONT]


[FONT=Liberation Serif, serif]She navigated a number of different screens and programs before typing furiously into a text-box. Damien had no idea what she was actually doing, but he thought the program was some sort of database. His thoughts were confirmed when Katheryn spoke again.[/FONT]


“[FONT=Liberation Serif, serif]I knew I'd seen this before,” she said, “so I checked my database... and I think I know why the magicounter's not working at all on you. You're not giving off any echoes, which are residual traces of magic that occur naturally for all living mages, so naturally I assumed that you were inactive; I made an erroneous assumption. It's rare, and I have at least one example of it in my database, but sometimes an active mage will be naturally cloaked, or shielded, from outside tampering.”[/FONT]


“[FONT=Liberation Serif, serif]So, what, I'm insulated?” he said, raising an eyebrow. [/FONT]


“[FONT=Liberation Serif, serif]There are two other explanations,” admitted Katheryn, “but I don't consider them to be important here. You're either too weak or too powerful for my magicounter, and I've calibrated it to be several times higher than a potential zero-order mage could ever hope to be. The most likely explanation is that you, Damien Archer, are a natural shield.”
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You got, like, the last bit of chapter two. ITC Damien is a little bitch and Katheryn is expogirl.
 
Quite honestly, everyone's excerpts are wonderful. How can I compare to this?

Superbird said:
You think that's annoying, try having writer's block on the final chapter! That happened when I was writing the rough draft.

I stand corrected, that would be way more frustrating. :( But something tells me that's gonna happen to me. I've found that once I get stuck, I immediately go back and read everything that I have so I can get the pace right. Because, well, I suck at pacing things and tend to make everything happen quickly.

Also, how does everyone stay motivated to keep going? I'm surprised I've stuck with it this far, even though I have someone acting as my NaNo cheerleader who is encouraging me to hit 50k.
 
Quite honestly, everyone's excerpts are wonderful. How can I compare to this?



I stand corrected, that would be way more frustrating. :( But something tells me that's gonna happen to me. I've found that once I get stuck, I immediately go back and read everything that I have so I can get the pace right. Because, well, I suck at pacing things and tend to make everything happen quickly.

Also, how does everyone stay motivated to keep going? I'm surprised I've stuck with it this far, even though I have someone acting as my NaNo cheerleader who is encouraging me to hit 50k.

I just sort of ... keep writing. I'm still interested in the project, and it's going in a direction I'm quite enjoying, so it's actually a joy to write. I think it's also helpful that NaNo serves as a nice distraction from university and socialising. Living with my friends basically means that whenever I get bored of them it's difficult to get away, but now I can just go write for a bit and then come back when I'm ready to be friendly!

So it helps.

In other news I've just hit like, 7300 (also, the NaNo word counter turns back like, a hundred fewer words than the LibreOffice one) and I'm fairly pleased. My project's taken a turn for the darker side of fantasy, and apparently healing magic requires actual blood transfusions and surgery and whatnot. I've been steadily integrating magic with technology throughout the preceding three chapters so it's not a surprise.

... also I totally didn't blow up my university and claim it was a terrorist attack. ... okay so I did, but there's a reason! There was a magical battle there and it had to be covered up as a terrorist attack! see, darker. ALSO several characters have died already, and one of them returned from the battle with her hair and half her face burnt off.

Like I said, it's taken a darker turn and this is only chapter three. I'm sort of hoping it doesn't get darker chapter by chapter because by the end of the novel I'll be raping kittens or something.
 
At least you'll want to cuddle the kittens afterwards.

I'm doing fairly well. Not as fast as all of you, of course! But I'm truckin'. I've gotten to an awkward scene so I feel awkward writing it, and I'm not sure if that's a good thing or not, haha.
 
Doing this now.

Hooray! I feel loved. Or something.

I... started today! :D Yesterday and before were holidays, in my defense, which /does not mean/ what you may think it means - here I'm pretty much always hounded to get out and do stuff, so my days were full and on Monday I didn't even get to bed until like one. But today I had school, so I got some writing done! Isn't opposite day nice.

I have finished the prologue to my first chapter! It is 1572 words. Not that I'm counting. Although, I dunno, I may end up joining anyway. Can you officially join late in the game? I might not. It'll depend on how fast I get this chapter done. But I can feel my interest just starting to ebb away, as it is wont to do! D: Seriously, every single idea I get that just feels so awesome, and I start it, and it's awesome... I get, like, the first chapter down if I'm lucky before I'm like OKAY more trouble than it's worth! And that's why I don't call myself a writer. :x

I looked at Butterfree's writing guide and the bit about "don't start a story unless you absolutely passionately want to finish it!!" didn't help matters at all.

BUT that is why I called it /finish something/ month. Finish these ten chapters, self! It is really not that much!

COME ON

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I-I'm really not as slow as the counter says! Really!

Also I have decided that most of the people in Iopolis (scienceland) are going to be named after elements. Elements make nice names!
 
I got up an hour earlier than I wanted to because I did not check my alarm for mistakes, but maybe I'll be more inclined to go to bed! Maybe.

I obtained a nice 2022 words yesterday, for a total of 5404. Look at these numbers, you guys. 3377/2022/5404 Why is it that I always get so many repeat numbers when I'm writing? I'm not sure what that means. I could have written more, but I have a class today so I absolutely had to go to bed, although I at least ended chapter two, which is nice I guess. I did get ~600 in my English essay and ~100 in my notebook, as well as some other useful homework assignments, so it's not like I was slacking or anything. I'm super productive! Yayyyyy. (Also my mom is super productive! And my dad is still way behind but he wrote more! :D )

I'm really tired right now but who cares about that!

Let's see, I can't be bothered with quotes, but I think there are some people I wanted to say things to.

@Vladimir I'm pretty sure the statistics just update late! Are you sure they were showing your word counts correctly? When I edited my word count last night, the statistics still showed I was at 3377 and hadn't done anything useful for the day, but now it shows that I'm a superhero who is two days ahead! But if you got some more words out of the error, then, you know. It's not all bad.

@Harlequin Don't worry if it's mostly dialogue. If that's easier to write, then go for it! Also congratulations on being a few words ahead, that's excellent! Also your excerpt is actually pretty good. I'm always super interested in magic that's talked about in weird ways. Also lots of dialogue. I'll admit, I like reading dialogue.

Surskitty (and also Tailsy!) You guys are doing super excellently! :DDD I've heard you talking about your silly past NaNoWriMo years, but at least one of you has already beaten a record and you're both still going strong! Keep doing your best! :D

@Midnight You should still be able to join at any time! Even if you're not quite up to an entire fifty thousand words, you should still sign up so you can look at your bar going up and up and feel proud of yourself. Also, maybe it will make you feel like doing more words to be on the site with everyone!

Kratos said:
Seeing how well everyone is doing this year makes me :D :D

Me too! :DDDD Last year's thread seemed a bit blah, but this year everyone is doing super and everyone is super excited!

Those writing programs look mostly wholly excellent and I should absolutely try them sometime, but I really like OpenOffice for right now.

Also I totally forgot that you were writing that legendary/human fanfic. Looks like it's going pretty well there! I like Virgil's reaction to the idea of genders.

MidnightSaboteur said:
I looked at Butterfree's writing guide and the bit about "don't start a story unless you absolutely passionately want to finish it!!" didn't help matters at all.

She says the same sort of thing on websites, and I think it's best if you take it a little less literally. I'm pretty sure - since she goes on more like this later in the guide - that what she really means here is that it's a little silly to write for the sole sake of writing. Writing to show off to your friends, or to call yourself a writer, or whatever, isn't really the same as writing because you legitimately enjoy it.

And a story you love is obviously the best kind, but the love grows as you work on it! When I put my first word to the paper a long time ago for this story, I really didn't care that much about it, but then I kept working with it and talking about it, and it's basically the best ever now, and I'm pretty sure Butterfree began similarly with The Quest for the Legends.

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(I kind of love this gif by the way)

Mercy said:
Also, how does everyone stay motivated to keep going? I'm surprised I've stuck with it this far, even though I have someone acting as my NaNo cheerleader who is encouraging me to hit 50k.

Actually! What motivates me is to keep a tiny calendar on the bottom of my document. Looks like this:

11-1-10 3377 words
11-2-10 2022

If I get a word count that makes the calendar uneven, like if I get 2000 one day even though I did 3000 before (this actually makes me super sad but I needed to get over it so I could get sleep!), then that makes me feel kind of annoyed and maybe OCD. So I'm like "come on, it's only x more words!!!" This is pretty much the primary reason why I am still writing in my notebook even though I am super busy for November.

It also helps to have friends or some random people on a forum who are doing stuff. Zeta and his ridiculous 100k goal, in particular, really make me feel like writing a lot.

Also cookies?

Also, it's always easier to figure things out when others are having them as a problem! I feel a lot better about my own NaNoWriMo when I do this:

You guys can do it!!! :DDD
 
Actually! What motivates me is to keep a tiny calendar on the bottom of my document. Looks like this:

11-1-10 3377 words
11-2-10 2022

If I get a word count that makes the calendar uneven, like if I get 2000 one day even though I did 3000 before (this actually makes me super sad but I needed to get over it so I could get sleep!), then that makes me feel kind of annoyed and maybe OCD. So I'm like "come on, it's only x more words!!!" This is pretty much the primary reason why I am still writing in my notebook even though I am super busy for November.

It also helps to have friends or some random people on a forum who are doing stuff. Zeta and his ridiculous 100k goal, in particular, really make me feel like writing a lot.

Actually, I took your advice and created a new document and put down "Okay [Mercy]! You can do this! Write like a madwomen! :]" And then I have "November 3rd: Goal: 6,000 - 7,000+, etc..." Which is helping considerably.

Most of the day I was just staring at my word processor, not really knowing what to write because it was mostly just filler. But now that I've gotten to a battle scene I'm just on a roll. It feels pretty good :] And I've just now gotten to 5,000 words. Just 1,000+ more and I'll have gotten my goal for today!
 
I haven't started my words today because I had to do a critique, and someone's been begging me for a thread on a different forum, so I'm trying to do that before I get sucked into killing people off.

...That gif is the most beautiful thing. EVER.

AND I LOVE NANO EXCITEMENT AND ENTHUSIASM. THERE'S SO MUCH OF IT. GROUP HUG, GUYS. :DDDD
 
[17:47] <midnight> OKAY
[17:47] <midnight> I AM
[17:47] <midnight> signing up
[17:47] <midnight> hiikaru is a nice person
[17:48] <midnight> and has persuaded me
[17:48] <midnight> though god this site is slow

...

...

That was over half an hour ago.

I will link my account once I can log into it.
 
Hiikaru: I'm actually at 8000 words now! It's pretty hench, not going to lie. I'm really enjoying writing this so it's pretty easy and I absolutely adore my magic system and all of Katheryn's definitions and whatnot. She's wonderful, I love her.

I'm having slight problems with my actual writing because I haven't written in quite some time and this is written in a completely different style to the one I usually use so I'm pretty "aaaa" about the whole thing.

I love NaNoWriMo.
 
OKAY here I am; #757843 for whatever reason you'd want that. 'm not 'MidnightSaboteur' 'cause I'm trying to change that. Cookie points for reference getting.

I have added everyone who linked their profile!! though not those who just left names cause I am ~just that lazy~.

... The stats page makes me sad. It wants me to write like two thousand more words bawww. CAN I DO IT YES I probably.


Anita Roberts is a normal ten-year-old girl from Kanto. Like every ten-year-old, she leaves her home village to explore the world.

... But catching pokémon? Battling them? Earning badges? Who would ever want to do a thing like that? What Anita's passionate about isn't /training/ pokémon.

She wants to /cook/ for them.

And so, she sets out to attend the Haines Institute for Higher Learning in Goldenrod City, a place that attracts the best and the brightest kids who just don't especially care for training pokémon. While there, Anita will make new friends and face greater challenges than she ever has before... while still leaving room for dessert!

man this sounds so A rated. I can already tell from #tcod that my English is sucking from being in a foreign language country (WHAT'S THE PAST TENSE OF "SEEK"? IT'S SOOK, RIGHT self you are. so smart.) and besides that it's the foreign language country where you like to party all the time~ (little duck duck goose boy?) so I am under like a bazillion handicaps besides ... not being able to write.

I WILL TRY

SOMEHOW

/o/ YOU \o\ CAN /o\ DO \o/ IT


ETA: I love my nano avatar.
 
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FUCK YOU, STUPID MOTHERFUCKING BUS DRIVER WHO PRIORITIZED DRIVING ALL THE WAY BACK TO A HIGH SCHOOL TO DROP OFF SOMEPNE WHO WASN'T SUPPOSED TO BE THERE AND COMPLETELY FORGET THAT YOU COULD HAVE DONE IT AFTER ALL THE FEST OF THE STUDENTS GOT OFF. THANKS FOR MAKING ME HAVE TO TYPE 25 WORDS PER MINUTE IN ORDER TO FULFILL MY NANO GOAL TODAY!

^I put all the cussing and annoyances in spoilers so that you all don't have to look at it. Anyway, some person on my school bus got on when she wasn't supposed to. Forty minutes into the bus ride, we were so close to my stop, the bus driver realizes, drives ALL the way back to the high school, forces the girl back off, drives back, and continues. Why she couldn't have just waited until her route was done I'll never know. It cost me an hour of NaNo time.
...Which I just made up by typing a good 25 words per minute for about an hour. Thankfully I had some written this morning, so I didn't have to do the full thing tonight, but...Seriously? We have LIVES, bus driver.

...See above. I just finished or today.
 
Can you officially join late in the game?

I know you already did, but I am amused by it, so let me quote the official FAQ answer (possibly paraphrased: this was five years ago):

When is the deadline for signing up? 23:59, November 30th. Hope springs eternal!

(I also enjoy "Can you write the same word 50,000 times? No. Well... no.")
 
Just finished typing my first thousand words! :D ONLY 49,000 TO GOOOOO

Yay! How's your notebook page count doing?

Typing from paper is probably my least favorite part of writing ever, but then you get to write during school and stuff, so, that's kind of important I guess. Oh! Are you going to keep notebooking over your breaks, or will you start typing then and go super fast?

Actually, I took your advice and created a new document and put down "Okay [Mercy]! You can do this! Write like a madwomen! :]" And then I have "November 3rd: Goal: 6,000 - 7,000+, etc..." Which is helping considerably.

:D Yes! Always encourage yourself! Having your goals and everything written down is great. If it's only in your head, I think people tend to go (I do, anyway), "well, I was just kidding about that goal. Maybe tomorrow. ...maybe."

AND I LOVE NANO EXCITEMENT AND ENTHUSIASM. THERE'S SO MUCH OF IT. GROUP HUG, GUYS. :DDDD

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(I'm pretty sure group hugs look basically like a pile of circle shapes with words floating above them)

Hiikaru: I'm actually at 8000 words now! It's pretty hench, not going to lie. I'm really enjoying writing this so it's pretty easy and I absolutely adore my magic system and all of Katheryn's definitions and whatnot. She's wonderful, I love her.

That is a lot of words! You're ahead of me now. I'm enjoying writing mine also, I'm just slow. Keep going, Harlequin! You can do this!

[the bus driver extended the ride by a lot]

...Which I just made up by typing a good 25 words per minute for about an hour. Thankfully I had some written this morning, so I didn't have to do the full thing tonight, but...Seriously? We have LIVES, bus driver.

Aww, don't feel too terrible toward him. He probably thought he was being a superhero by going out of his way to take care of that mistaken kid.

Anyway, now you know that you can be really, really fast at writing! You should join some of the sprints. I bet you could totally ace them.

[17:47] <midnight> OKAY
[17:47] <midnight> I AM
[17:47] <midnight> signing up
[17:47] <midnight> hiikaru is a nice person
[17:48] <midnight> and has persuaded me
[17:48] <midnight> though god this site is slow

...

...

That was over half an hour ago.

I will link my account once I can log into it.

<3

Gogogogogo! The statistics are super motivational. "Only two thousand more words!" That's totally doable. You may be behind now, but you can make it! You can definitely make it through ten chapters, and if you finish and you still have the energy for writing, well, write something else!

Also I like your piece there. You should have no problems writing ten chapters of something that fun.

You can do it!

:DDD
 
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