Once again, the paying viewers of the Metronome Contest rallied around the stage, eager to watch some further random action. Once the room plunged into darkness, the audience sighed with relief, knowing that there would be no intemperisms being flung onto them, but, most importantly, that the lighting was going to stay consistent.
That would be because, this time, the appeals had already taken place and had already been judged. They were going to be played back, along with their rating, with the trainer and the Pokemon used sitting at the stage to watch it all again as well.
Big Red Cherry Bomb's Alphonse and Katniss
The first filiming showed images of a massive chasm's mouth, whistling as the sandy winds blew through some of the tighter slots with impressive force.
A small bird was revealed to be flitting about, careful to avoid being carried away by the powerful air currents. She looked around, not as though she were searching for something, but rather, wary of something.
All of a sudden, a massive updraft of rock bursted out. A gigantic, metallic snake slithered out of the hole produced. He let out loud roars and at one point seemed to have tried a lunge, but missed whatever it had been aiming at completely, unless it was the debris swirling above the ground, which was starting to bunch up on his armor.
Flapping her wings in preparation for the incoming strife, Katniss took a moment to gauge the direction the vicious winds were swooshing towards, then positioned herself properly and unleashed a thick dash of fluffy down in a spinning motion. The feathers struck Alphonse right on the face, giving him several moments of distraction before his apparent enemy could tackle him with the velocity of the winds on her side.
With a grumble, the Steelix started to make a mad rush for the Taillow, trying desperately to clamp his rectangular fangs around her puny torso, but the swallow nimbly avoided each lunge.
Eventually, the steel serpent seemed to have become too worn down to keep it up. It could only stare hopelessly as his minute nemesis took on a dim glow, then fired off a bright, searing beam. With one last roar, he finally succumbed and collapsed, his massive weight rumbling the ground and making the final image of the video blurry.
Metallica Fanboy: 6.9
Having the two Pokemon fight each other is pretty much the first thing that comes to mind when you think double appeals in Metronome Contest. Nonetheless, I suppose the matching of a tiny, defenseless-looking bird against a metallic humonguous beast provided the appeal with an idea that was at least nice. However, it took a little bit of stretching the suspension of disbelief to think of the small one winning without any particularly big moves, and even one move that's usually not very effective against Steel-types. I suppose people like seeing the underdog come out on top, though.
Meowth: 6.8
I'm disappointed you didn't work Softboiled in there somehow. :C
That was an okay appeal; I liked the idea of having a tiny bird fend off a Steelix. Alphonse wasn't really given that appropriate a moveset for such a set-up, but you managed to pull it off pretty well. Not really much else to say about it.
Kratos Aurion: 9.0
I liked the tension and conflict here, and both pokémon used their moves effectively. The only thing that bugged me a little was the sandstorm—obviously you had to use the stage you were dealt, but I don't know that it really had much to do with what was going on aside from that wind-boosted tackle. I guess I don't really know what else you could've done differently there, though, so... nice work!
ultraviolet's Cro and Xiaoyu
The scene was now within the old, visibly musty walls of a long-abandoned castle. Noticeably, despite the aging of the hall as a whole, the water filling the lake in the middle remained clear and pristine, even as moss gathered along the surfaces underwater.
The crowd's appreciation of the historical location, though, was cut short by a high-pitched caw. A small, black-feathered bird darted from offscreen, stopping above the lake to hover roughly above the middle.
With a shriek, Cro spat a thick, purple goop, desecrating the pure waters, much to the shock and disdain of the most history concerned among the viewers. The color continuously spread along the pool, and there even seemed to be a same-colored cloud of gas forming just above it.
For some reason, the Murkrow started to weave in and out of the smog, making loud noises frequently and overall seeming worked up.
Suddenly, two lights flared up from somewhere hard to see, beneath the gas and the water. The latter began to grow agitated, swirling wildly and even bubbling a bit. At one point, a tall wave rose up. The vulture Pokemon flew around the muddy, toxic column and perched himself at the top, busily spitting out what seemed to be electrical pulses while producing more annoying noise.
At that point, the liquid updraft crashed violently back to its proper place, as many chunks of the worn bricks and rock ripped themselves out of their own proper places to circle around Cro. Some of these chunks were vital for the walls' keeping straight, and thus, many parts of it collapsed, and even some bits of the roof gave way. At that point, all history lovers watching were nearly disgusted enough to puke, and many were resorting to firing disrespectful language at ultraviolet.
Also disgusted seemed to be the several spirits that sprang to "life" at that moment, no longer able to rest peacefully. "DOOOO NOOOOOOOT DESECRAAAAATE THEEEEEE CASTLEEEEE" and similar dragged-out screams filled the air of the now more than ever ruined hall, leaving the Murkrow to flee very fast toward the fourth wall. The very last glimpse of the appeal was that of the bird's legs about to pull above the camera, as the rest of the body had done, while the background was filled by a mob of angry ghosts.
Metallica Fanboy: 6.7
For an appeal aimed at siccing the angry dead, it sure it took long to start tearing the hall apart. Besides, most of the initial actions didn't seem to have that much rhyme and reason to them. The epic finish can salvage the appeal, but still, I think it could have been done better.
Meowth: 7.9
The moves didn't really flow, but given that the theme you were going for was pretty much "CHAOS" I'd say that worked out quite well for you. The appeal did a good job of generating a creepy atmosphere, though maybe it would have been better to summon the ghosts earlier and try to weave the appeal around them. That said, this way you get a nice buildup. Both approaches would have done pretty well in my books, so I'm just going to stop nitpicking and give you 7.9.
Kratos Aurion: 7.8
Haha, this was cool. Very flashy and showy and messy, and I do enjoy flashy and showy and messy. That said, though, the nature of the showy mess didn't seem to have anything to do with your intended result (disturbing the ghosts). Perhaps it would've been a bit more connected if you'd intended it to look like the ghosts were being summoned or something, and the poison gas, glowing lights, etc. would've helped on that front; otherwise just straight-up destruction would've gotten that across more directly, granted that you weren't dealt much in the way of moves conducive to that. I'm also a little torn by not being able to see Xiaoyu: on the one hand I'm not really sure what seeing a chinchou in such a scene would've accomplished, but on the other hand she was supposed to be on display and instead ended up almost being a non-entity throughout the whole performance.
Blastoise's Mort and Wiggles
Next up, the background was highly sophisticated, with fine art dotting the walls and tastefully decorated tables dotting the floor, each one surrounded mostly by suit-clad fatties and middle-aged women in elaborate dresses. The crowd was quick to notice that even Blastoise had gone to the stage in a tuxedo, and so had his Magikarp; as for his Gastly, a single bowtie seemed to be all the dapper wear he needed.
Said Gastly was soon spotted on the montage, giving the camera a smile that positively bordered between a trickster's and slasher's. Soon enough, he was once more impossible to spot.
The focus was shifted to a small fountain placed on one of the walls. Within it, Wiggles flopped about as uselessly as you would expect of a Magikarp. Except it was suddenly flopping uselessly as it hovered around the air.
A catchy beat could be heard. Many of the viewers seemed to recognize it. The melody steadily rose, and then, as a louder noise was produced, the carp Pokemon spat out a steady stream of well-aimed seeds, tipping over and breaking numerous wineglasses, spiling several drinks on the fine gentlemen's suits and the fine ladies' dresses.
The Magikarp's hovering soon began more mobile. At first, he approached one fine replica of Pokemona Lisa, and it was torn apart by some invisible force. Then, the orange fish moved towards the distinguished folks' tables, spilling positively toxic goo upon the meals that for non-rich eyes seemed inedible to begin with and irritating many a kind fellow with flops to the face, often knocking hats and wigs away to unveil reflective heads, devoid of any semblance of a hair.
Many fine works of art were desecrated along the way. Poor The Uproar. Poor generic basket of Berries. Even the pieces beyond painting were receiving heavy damage, as The Calm Minder's neck would soon know.
The audience's sides were already hurting, and the mob of profoundly aggrieved gentlemen had become thick. Mort could tell that was the time to hit the stride. Wiggles was hovered all the way up to a large chandelier's range. So many little lights anywhere, such a convoluted design. Too bad its fragile, golden suspension cord had to be powerfully slugged and thus destroyed. The duo separated; the fish went crashing down with the chandelier, and the phantom went to topple anybody who was still seated by that point, plowing the legs off their chairs.
For the finishing moment, Mort revealed himself, cackling aloud as his partner in crime flopped uselessly over a pile of debris.
Metallica Fanboy: 9.3
This is hilarious. I particularly like how you found a way to anger the costumers at as many ways as possible, and how you made it all amazingly ridiculous while secretly ingenious by employing a "floating" Magikarp.
Meowth: 7.5
Again, I'll let you get away with the lack of any sort of flow due to the chaotic angle you were shooting for. Props to you for coming up with a comedic slapstick appeal, that was pretty original (even though I suppose there's little else you could do with such a setting but shush). 7.5, much as I want to mark you down for utterly ruining everybody's evening.
Kratos Aurion: 9.0
Awesome. Undeniably very awesome. My only minor gripe is that I'm left a little confused as to whether Mort was supposed to be "possessing" Wiggles and forcing him to destroy the restaurant against his will, or whether Wiggles was actually complicit; it seems like the former, but if that's the case then, I dunno, a little something to help reinforce that probably would've made it even more amusing.
blazheirio889's Yukianesa and Khao
For the next appeal, entry shenanigans seemed to be out of the play, as the viewers' attention was drawn first to two Pokemon locked in a standoff that made them look very much about to lunge for each other's neck. It took the audience a moment to note the environment they were placed in: positively volcanic, complete with a bit of lava eager to pour out.
The dark-blue badger made the first move, spouting out a vicious flame on his back and making numerous snarls and growls. In spite of this, his enemy still seemed very much composed, if a little smug on the side.
The deep white creature proceeded to erect boulders from beneath the volcanoes. Magma ran along their surfaces as they hovered above the deadly, smoking mouthes. All the geological movement seemed to have agitated the lava enough to intensify the spouting a little.
Yukianesa then pointed forward with her arm, encouraging the red-hot stones to batter away at her target. He managed to get out of the way for the first few, but ultimately failed to avoid the attack.
It seemed that Khao was heavily affected by the blow, and laid sprawled at the ground, but still flaring out and letting out threatening snarls. Uneager to deal with the barking dog that was not about to bite, the ice ghost puncutred her own torso with her fingers, summoning mystical fires both unto herself and her oppositor.
The enigmatic flames were soon to leave their master alone, but pestered their true target for an extended period. He was clearly losing plentiful stamina; the flames he produced lessened, and his growls were being reduced to what seemed more like whimpers. Oddly, he even seemed about to cry. The sight puzzled the audience, but nonetheless inspired a tidbit of sympathy among most.
The ground beneath him suddenly rumbled slightly, seeming about to be updrated, but it stayed roughly in place. With a swinging motion of her arm, the Typhlosion's scourge jacked up the intensity of the strange blaze on his body, causing him to let loose and start crying visibly.
After a few more whimpers, the large mammalian succumbed to the bizarre flames as the Froslass elegantly but still clearly evily laughed.
Metallica Fanboy: 6.8
The beggining was particularly good in marking Khao and Yukianesa as enemies of sorts, but I'd have liked to see the former fail less at fighting. He should have at least made an easily dodgeable lunge at the beggining; you had moves like Skull Bash and Crabhammer for that.
Meowth: 6.6
Not a bad setup, but the fact that you re-used two of the moves makes it seem a tad repetitive. It would have been more exciting if maybe Khao attacked first, Yukianesa dodged it with Extremespeed, and then she Cursed him and finished it with Ancientpower. Even so it was pretty okay.
Kratos Aurion: 9.5
I really enjoyed this one—an interesting reversal of the whole type advantage thing, well-suited to the stage and nice and dramatic. Well done.
Squornshellous Beta's Ornithischia and Tibbles
To counterpoise the comparatively gloomy environment so far, the next appeal had been shot in a bright, sunny enviornment with clear skies. The camera was angled high, encompassing several islands, but limiting the visibility of the Pokemon performing. Still, the viewers could make out a cream-furred feline on one side and a gray-and-blue, prehistoric creature on another.
Tibbles braced himself, letting a peculiar liquid spread along his skin and quickly solidify, giving him a suit of armour. He seemed not be very accostumed to moving inside it. Meanwhile, Ornithischia plucked some drafts of rock from beneath the ground and tossed them skyward.
Then, the Meowth produced a string sharp-edged leaves and battered at the ground, using the force thus produced to catapult himself upwards. Still, his heavy protection seemed to betray him, as he didn't manage to stay aloft for long, being brought down by it. Still, he did manage to get enough airtime to put a few slices about.
With a sudden, rocketing leap, the Cranidos approached the falling stones and plew through them with an impressive punch, easily smashing them all to small pieces.
Somehow, from the ground, the cat Pokemon managed to rearrange the boulders into a star shape, fully surrounding a large island that the camera managed to fully capture. The pachycephalosaurus landed on the middle of said island, and immediately after, the rocks all banged the ground and the shallow seas, splashing up some minor waves. A few droplets reached the ancient one, but a higher water content would have been needed to ensure his proper wetting.
Metallica Fanboy: 6.2
Pokemon physics do work weirdly, but not enough to make it so something clad in iron would fall at the same rate as a Cranidos, or even go up that far with hardly that much impulse.
Meowth: 5.4
This would have been okay had it worked quite as you intended. Sadly, it, well, didn't, and the end result was somewhat underwhelming. Props to you for trying, anyway, and what you ended up with was still a passable appeal.
Kratos Aurion: 7.5
This was an interesting idea, and while the "smash stuff and make it look pretty" thing is pretty well done to death, the end result was just different and impressive enough. The biggest problem I have here is the iron defense: not only did it hinder Tibbles's ability to perform the leaf blade, it had absolutely nothing to do with the setting or the rest of the appeal. You would have been better served by attempting to use pluck in... some way (maybe flinging a few extra rocks around? can't come up with anything really interesting off the top of my head) or, better yet, just going with a non-move action and finding a way to have Tibbles lead into the rest of the appeal more appropriately
sreservoir's Nenya and Vilya
Once more, stark contrast was portrayed; this time, the sunny and cheerful environment from before had been followed by a barred, icy landscape with a snowstorm actively blocking visibility.
Thankfully, a sudden change in the winds managed to redraft the snow, clearing up just a certain radius. A tiny, childlike Pokemon quietly watched a swirling surface on a mostly frozen lake. Tiny bits of crushed ice floated aboard the spinning water. The air's movements somehow gave Vilya wiser an appearance.
At one point, two glowing spots were visible beneath the transparent ice covering most of the lake. At that point, the psychic creature made a commanding motion, moving the winds toward the lake. It seemed to do little to swirling waters, as moving waters are difficult to freeze, but the surrounding vicinty was positively solidified.
With sudden motions, the Ralts started punching and kicking away at the frost, breaking off the thinner bits and leaving large cracks at the others.
All of a sudden, the temperature changed. The cold landscape bursted into a hellish spawn of magma, spreading and engulfing the environment almost completely.
Metallica Fanboy: 7.4
A good appeal overall. Built up sagely, except maybe for the part where you tried to freeze moving water, which is pretty hard. What really made it good, though, was the finish -- a massive draft of lava engulfing an icy landscape is the sort of reason why we all love the RNG. (or maybe it's because he/she/it could screw us over)
Meowth: 7.5
Good job getting eruption, it contrasted quite nicely with the scenery. Not sure what Vilya cracking up the whirlpool was all about- a volcanic eruption should be more than enough to destroy a frozen whirlpool- but you had to use the move up somehow, I guess. All round quite a good effort.
Kratos Aurion: 8.5
Always with the fire and the water with you. It would have been nice if Nenya could've been more visibly involved than just the tail glow, but aside from her apparent absence this was cool. Shame the tailwind didn't freeze the whirlpool the way you wanted to, but it seems to have gone off okay. The brick break/ice smashing felt a little unnecessary, though.
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Blastoise: 25.8
sreservoir: 23.4
blazheirio889: 22.9
Big Red Cherry Bomb: 22.7
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Ultraviolet: 22.4
Squornshellous Beta: 19.1
Skylark: --
Walker: --
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Congratulations, Blastoise, sreservoir, blazheirio889 and Big Red Cherry Bomb! Ether by pure skill, pure luck or pure "two people didn't send their appeals in time", you have advanced again, and toward the critical point.
As for Ultraviolet and Squornshellous Beta, I guess it kind of sucks, losing when there were more spots for winners than for losers, but still, somebody had to lose, right? Seeing as the double appeals have given the contest a whole new layer of awesome to work with. So, literally, better luck next time.
Third round rules recap and the next batch of Metronomized moves coming soon.