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In Progress The Kidnapping

DarkAura

loves terra "brain cells? idk her" kingdomhearts
(Note, "***" means the end of the chapters)

AAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The sound of a howling wolf woke Zoey from her slumber. She thought she was still at home in bed, until she sat up. She hit her head on a low, steel enforced ceiling. As she winced in pain, she studied from what looked like a miniature prison cell. As she studied the cell more closely, she realized it was not, in fact, a cell, but it appeared to be the back of a minivan.

Zoey tried to move her hands and feet, but they were bounded together by a tightly tied rope. The rope looked as if it couldnt be untied

The trunk, as what Zoey believed the back of the minivan was, was filled with untitled boxes, varying from small to medium sizes. There were only four boxes, since the trunk didn't have enough room. The trunk had velvet carpeting that had noticably not been vacuumed in ages.

Zoey's hands were bounded by one rope, while her feet were tied by another. Just to see how long the trunk actually was, she was able to lie on her back and stretch her whole body from the trunk door to a wall that seperated the trunk from the front of the van.

Zoey saw a small rectangular window on the trunk door. She scrambled to her feet, careful not to tip over. She looked out the window. The night sky lurched over a murky forest. A abnormally tall tree stood smack dab in the middle of the forest. A cliff that was twice as tall as the aforementioned tree stood right behind the forest. A lone wolf stood at the tip of the cliff, the moon's light illuminating its shadow so that many could see it as it howled its song of loneliness.

A thought struck Zoey's head. How did I get in this trunk? Who brought me here? She gasped in horror. She had been kidnapped!

She was reluctant not to scream, but what if the kidnapper was right outside of the minivan? What if he or she was in the minivan? All of Zoey's body shuddered, except for her hands and legs, since the ropes were preventing blood from circulating to them.

Zoey tried her best to stand up, but with those ropes preventing blood from getting to her feet, she wouldn't be expected to stand up for a while.

On instinct, Zoey pulled the ropes with all her might. After what seemed like hours, but was only a minute, Zoey gave up using her hands and instead used her teeth. She was somehow much better at using her teeth, which was very odd.

Alas, Her teeth have failed her. She slumped down and put her back on the wall pararrel of the trunk door. She started to whistle like a chirping bird, which she was good at. When she got bored, she looked at her long skinny legs. Oh, how she wanted to run out in an open field again!

Zoey was a tall, skinny, blond haired girl. Her pale skin looked vivid in the dark, terrible trunk. Her two upper front teeth had a strange resemblance to squirrel's teeth. Her deep purple irises gave off a sense of calmness, like an ocean does. Most people made fun of her teeth and eyes, calling her, Bucky, Purple Freak, and other names.

Her arms were useless in most scenarios, so she counted on her legs on many situations. Her legs weren't of any use today.

Zoey pondered what her kidnapper would look like. Would he or she be a psychotic man or woman with a chainsaw, or a gentle person who had a good reason for kidnapping? Zoey pondered at this until another howl snapped her out of her daydream.

She felt her heart beating out of fear. Blood circulated throughout her torso, arms, legs, feet- wait.....the ropes were tied by the ankles and wrists, but she had blood pumping in her feet? The rope must have been loose!

Hastily, she scrambled her feet out of those retched ropes. She felt more blood getting to her feet, rejuvenating the life inside her feet, which has happened in only two minutes.

She stood up, wobbly at first, but then steadily on her feet, she looked back outside the window. Still the same scenery, except the sun was rising. The wolf had apparently left, seeing as his shadow was no where.

A thunp hit the window that Zoey was looking through, which caused her to whisped a shout in surprise. "Ahh!" She moved back from the window a bit. She gradually went back to the window. She saw the same wolf from last night, gazing at her purple colored irises.

The wolf had silver colored fur. It was impossible to tell what breed it was. One part of it it stood out from the rest, however. The wolf's irises were the same color as Zoey's!

The wolf raised one paw to the window, desperately wanting something in the trunk. Zoey thought that the wolf was wanting Zoey so it could eat her. Instead of the wolf having a hungry look on it's face, there was one look that she hadn't expected a wolf to have; a face of dismay and sorrow.

Zoey felt compassion for the wolf. She wanted to welcome it inside the trunk, but how could she? There was still a rope tied to her wrists.

The wolf clawed at the trunk door for five minutes, until it left. Zoey was hoping to have a friend. Being "Bucky", she never actually had friends!

While she was thinking of this, a gruff voice said something. "Hello, runt!"

Zoey was appauled at this voice. This man, obvoiusly a man, had sounded threatening. He most likely was, considering he would go to extremes of kidnapping a 12 year old!

"Enjoy your last meal, twerp!" the gruff voice said as he opened a slot and put a dish with a hamburger inside it. Zoey had identified a few things. The hand was a tan colored beefy hand. The hand had a few scorched marks. She realized this could be her last meal unless she got out of here. She gulped.

The man left soon after, and five minutes later, the wolf came back. Zoey felt comfortable with the wolf around. Maybe it could help her escape?

"Err, hello?" She asked the wolf, feeling pretty stupid.

"Hello!" the wolf barked.

Zoey was surprised! This animal could speak english fluently. Zoey thought she was imagining it. She stared intently in the wolf's eyes. It's eyes told the truth. Zoey decided to ask another question.

"Uhh.....Can you open this door?" She asked it.

The wolf didnt answer. Instead, Zoey heard a slight creaking sound. The trunk door suddenly swung open, with the wolf jumping in the trunk. Zoey, expecting the door to stay open, but it closed as fast as it opened.

"Why didn't you keep it open? Now we're stuck here forever!" Zoey angrily yelled at the wolf.

"The kidnapper's out there!" The wolf warned.

The wolf's voice seemed compelling, and Zoey knew it was telling the truth.

"The kidnapper took you last night while you were asleep!" the wolf continued.

Zoey's mind was to busy thinking about his speech before her mind registered the sentance. She suddenly found herself to be tired, feeling weary.

"Hey...can...can you sleep with me?" She hesitantly asked. No one would see her sleeping with a wolf for protection, but she still felt a little embarressed.

Without saying anything, the wolf cuddled next to Zoey and they both drifted off into a wondrous dream.

***

It was still day by the time Zoey woke up. The wolf was apparently still asleep. Zoey scrambled to her feet, hands still bounded by the rope.

She looked out the same window once more. She marveled at how nature can be either beautiful or ugly. This setting was definitely beautiful. Zoey would have looked at the forest all day, but she didn't want to stay for whatever this maniac has planned.

She stared at the tall tree that was still in the middle of the forest. The tree gave her a warm feeling. All she could do was stare.

Just stare.....

Suddenly, she got an clear, but instant picture in her head. From what she deciphered, it was a scene showing an animal that had a vague ressemblance to the devil running from something. The animal had blood-red fur, and two large fangs from its mouth. Two curved horns grew on the monster's head. Its feet were exactly like wolf paws, and it stood on all fours.

At first glance, Zoey thought this monster was a vampire/Devil mix, but then she saw the eyes. She gasped, because the eyes were a purple color.

Like the wolf's eyes.

Like hers...

The scene continued, and it showed that the animal was running from a poacher. The picture faded from her mind as quickly as it faded in.

Zoey wondered why those images were shown to her. Had she imagined it? Or did she really see it? She continued thinking about this until the wolf whining snapped her out of it.

Apparently, the wolf had woken up. It stretched its body so far it took up most of the space, making it hard for Zoey to breathe. When the wolf sat back down, Zoey was still finding it hard to breathe.

The air was growing thinner. Every gasp of air barely made it to her lungs. She looked at the Wolf.

"Yes, the air is thinner," the wolf said, as if it read Zoey's thoughts.

Zoey didn't answer. she couldn't. She was still thinking about those images she pictured. her mind registered the wolf's sentance. "We need to open the window!"

Zoey had expected the wolf to panic. Instead, the wolf calmly said, "We cannot. If we do, the kidnapper will get us. If we don't, we'll suffocate. The end is inevidable."

Zoey wasn't about to give up. "I don't care! If we open the door, we can make a run for it!"

The wolf didn't say anything. It didn't have to. It just waited for the truth to hit Zoey like a speeding truck.

Zoey slumped down and laid her back on one of the walls. Zoey started to think. Why did she trust this wolf so much? She didn't know anything about the wolf, so why was she so compelled to trust it?

Zoey sighed. "Hey....why not tell me a little bit about yourself?"

The wolf looked somewhat surprised. "Well, I have no definite gender, so you may refer to me as he, she, or it. My name is Ritsen. I learned English by tending to an L.A. girl who got lost in the woods." Ritsen stopped suddenly. He (or Zoey guessed Ritsen was a he) was unable to complete another sentence. The end was drawing near.

Zoey watched as the sun set and the illuminating light surroundd the forest once more. It was a shame this was most likely her last time to see it. She wasn't going to give up easily!

She peered out the window. The kidnapper was leaving, however still in Zoey's view. Zoey turned to Ritsen. "Hey, can you bite these ropes off of my wrists?"

Ritsen looked offended, probably because most humans thought wolves always had sharp incisors. This was true, but still. With a quick snap of his mouth, Ritsen bit the rope clean off, then spit it out.

Zoey looked out the window once more. The kidnapper was going over to what appeared to be another minivan. Zoey must not have noticed it because she always looked at the forest, and nothing else.

The kidnapper drove off, which gave Zoey a chance to escape. Zoey pulled a latch that opens the trunk door. Her lungs, starved from no air, gave out after two seconds of Zoey's depserate pulling. She had grown too weak. She looked in some of the boxes for some duct tape. After searching through the third box, she found a roll of duct tape. Perfect!

She ripped a piece of the tape off and stuck it on the handle, which made it so even knocking the door with enough force would cause it to open. This is what Zoey had exactly in mind.

She ran to the back of the truck, bending over a bit since she couldn't stand up in the cramped trunk. She ran for only two feet. She tried to bust the door down with her shoulder, but ended up falling on her face, door still closed.

At that moment, another image came to Zoey's mind. A picture of her, with her right shoulder blodied, was sitting right in front of a tree. She was on her knees, trembling, as a shadow lurked over her. Her clothes were muddied up. She had one hand on her bloddied shoulder, which blood seeped through.

The image showed her screaming in terror. An item swiped on her head so fast, the image dissolved because of it.

Zoey gasped in fright. What was with these....vision? She couldn't fathom how she had something like this, as she had first experienced them yesterday. She shook her head and then got up.

"Ritsen, can you op-open t-th-this d-door?" Zoey stuttered, having a scare supply of air now.

Ritsen pushed on the door with all his might. He tried so hard, it was as if his eyes came out of his head. At last, the door gave away.

Zoey bolted out, smelling the sweet freedom and oxygen. She felt her lungs feeling much better. Zoey looked behind her. Ritsen was emerging out of the trunk. He closed it with his head to make it look like they never left.

She recalled the phrase 'Run for Your Life', and that made her chuckle, seeing how that phrase was happening to her.

Zoey ran over to the forest, with Ritsen running right behind. At an instant, something held onto Zoey's collar. It jerked her backwards. She was terrified because she thought she was being kidnapped again. She was thrown vertically in the air, landing on a patch of fur.

The 'patch of fur' was none other than Ritsen. Zoey never realized it, but Ritsen was almost double her size, making it easy for Zoey to ride on him. Ritsen jumped high in the air, looking like a majestic race horse.

Zoey had a confident look on her face. She knew one thing; To run from this wretched wasteland. To never come back here. To go home.

With that thought Ritsen and Zoey rode along to the forest, in search of Zoey's home.

***

They entered the forest. Even from the inside, Zoey could still see the tallest tree exactly how it looked in the trunk.

Ritsen was running with the wind battering at his face. His fur managed to get tangled with the wind. Ritsen had to swerve constantly to prevent hitting trees.

The ride wasn’t comfortable for Zoey, as she was moving to the left and to the right the whole time. Ritsen jumped over a tree stump, which made Zoey fall of his back.

Zoey rolled down a somewhat steep hill. As she landed on a patch of grass, extreme pain bursted through her body. She tried to get up, but her hands and feet wouldn’t allow it.

At that moment, another image came to her head. It showed the same demon animal from her first vision still running. The demon stopped abruptly. It turned around and saw what was chasing it.

The poacher, for that’s the person who was chasing the demon, was wearing casual clothing, just some blue jeans and a T-shirt that said “Got Fish?”. The poacher’s hair was dark brown, almost black. Half of his face was scorched. On his hands were blue knuckleless gloves. His irises were red with fury. Wait, no, his irises actually were red. A scarlet red, to be exact.

The poacher held a sharp, curved scythe behind his back. The demon’s fur pricked up, and it ran off into a forest before the poacher could bring out the scythe. The demon fled to a forest with a very tall tree in the middle.

The vision stopped, giving Zoey enough time to gasp. She was in the same forest….

She shook her head, trying to get the images out. One image would not go. The scythe seemed to be the same object from her second vision. She gulped as she climbed back up the hill.

Ritsen was waiting for Zoey to come up the hill. Ritsen caught a glimpse of Zoey’s head and he went next to her, checking to see if she was fine.

“Are you alright?” questioned Ritsen.

“Yeah,” Zoey answered. Zoey was terrified. What if these visions would happen? Or have they already happened? Ok, it’s nothing. It’s fine.

She put her hand on her left eye. Her eye had a type of liquid on it. Retreating her hand, she realized it was blood.

She gasped it horror. WHY WOULD THIS HAPPEN TO ME?!?

Ritsen noticed Zoey’s eye, and then her facial expressions. From denial to anger. Ritsen realized he was going through the five stages. Next is bargaining, if Ritsen remembered right.

As Ritsen predicted, Zoey was thinking about bargaining. Please, please don’t let me go like this! I’ll always be alert when falling off a hill!

“And here comes depression,” Ritsen foresaw.

Zoey was clueless at what Ritsen was talking about. She didn’t think about this too long, for she was overcome by great sorrow. Oh, what’s the use! I’ll never get home with this injury!

“And finally Acceptance!” Ritsen exclaimed.

Zoey couldn’t fathom how Ritsen knew her emotions, but then she thought, I’m ok with this now……weird….

Zoey stared at Ritsen. “Are you some kind of mind reader?” she asked.

“No, I just looked at your facial expressions. You went through the five stages, and hastily too!” He explained.

Zoey gazed at the night sky, which illuminated several paths for the two to follow. She found herself being hypnotized by the beautiful awe this moon gave off.

She snapped herself out of it. The moon reminded her of something she so wanted: Acceptance!

All her life, no one has accepted her for her teeth or eyes. Yet people stared in a trance-like state at a huge rock in space! If people stare in awe at a freaking rock, then why don't they accept Zoey for who she is?

Ritsen whistled, snapping Zoey out of her thoughts. She climbed on Ritsen, and he bolted away, farther and farther from the kidnapper's house and the somewhat steep hill.

Zoey wanted to look back, but at the same time, she couldn't! Some type of force was preventing her from looking back, making her curiousity grow.

Zoey gave up looking behind her. She didn't think it was that important.

That was one big mistake.

***

As Ritsen grew weary, so did Zoey. Even though it's been an hour, the sparkling moon forced people to feel tired.

Zoey's spine had a sharp cold feeling come down. She recalled the superstition where if someone steps on your future grave, your spine tingles. Part of her believed that, but another part of her didn't think it was too rational that at an exact moment in the future, it would happen at a random time in the present. Or maybe it was exact in the present? She wouldn't know at all, because by then, she would be in her eternal grave.

Zoey thought of why Ritsen was helping her out so much. Ritsen could have just continued with his life, leaving her to rot. Well, then why did he help? Zoey had to know.

"Ritsen," She said, "Why did you help me? You could have just left me there."

"Well, remember when i told you about that girl who got lost?" He asked. "Well, you remind me of said girl."

Zoey was somewhat confused. No girl could ever be the same as her. Or could they? Zoey decided to ask another question. "Can you tell me the story about it? First, stop near a tree."

Ritsen obeyed as he stopped and sat next to a tree. Zoey sat down soon afterwards. The tree had a dark brown stump with a variety of colors on the leaves. Zoey never payed attention to the seasons, but because of the color of the leaves, she deducted it was autumn.

"Well, it was a night where the moon was full. The moon seemed to illuminate everything as if it were day, rare in this forest, and has never happened anywhere else. I was in my home, trying to sleep. It's hard to sleep when everything looks like day, you know. My home was a small bush, nothing special. Think of the home of a family who can only buy one loaf of bread a week. That's basiclly the same as my home. Anyway, then, a small girl, about two or three years younger than you, stumbled right next to me. Her forehead was bleeding, and her face was strucken with fear. She started cuddling to me, for protection. She soon fell asleep, right in my soft fur. After a short while, i fell asleep. When i woke up, she was gone. To this day, i never knew what she was mortified of, or where she went. You remind me of her, so that's why i wanted to help. Even though i wount be able to help that girl again, the least i can do is help someone else in dire need." Ritsen replied.

Zoey was reeling all of this in her mind. So Ritsen only helped because she bore a similar ressemblance to the aforementioned girl? Had Zoey misjudged Ritsen? Ritsen seemed like he would have just left her there if she wasnt like the other girl. Zoey felt disheartened.

She didn't say another word to Ritsen. Instead, she laid on the cold, hard ground as she tried to sleep through the night. It wasn't an easy feat sleeping on the soil, but after counting three hundred thirty seven sheep and repeatingly turning from side to side, she finally fell asleep.

Ritsen glanced at Zoey. Why didn't she answer him? Ritsen just shrugged and fell asleep, with his soft fur acting as a pillow.

Zoey awoke one hour later, seeing Ritsen asleep. She started to yawn, but something clamped her mouth. For a second, she thought it was the kidnapper, and she almost voided her bowels out of fear.

She couldn't turn her head, so she peered behind her with her purple irises. A short, blond haired girl was behind her. The girl had purple colored eyes like Zoey's, but the girl's were a deeper shade. The girl had an intimidating look on her face as she drew a weapon from her fanny pack. (Yes, a fanny pack)

Zoey had enough courage and stupidity to speak. "W-what are you doing?"

The girl rolled her eyes. Or, at least, that's what Zoey thought the girl did. Zoey couldn't see half of the girl's face, so it was hard to tell.

"Keeping you away from Risten. Didn't you notice me coming behind you while you were riding him?"

Zoey gulped. She realized her curiousity should have been let out then. Something was keeping her from looking, however, but what?

"W-why d-do you wa-want to k-keep me a-away from R-Ritsen?" Zoey asked, stuttering in fear.

The girl rolled her eyes once more, giving Zoey a look that said 'Are you serious? By now, you STILL don't know?'

"Duh, cause he's gonna hurt you!" She said.

Zoey stood there, still as a statue, frozen stiff by fear and confusion. Her body tingled. Not like a chill down her spine. No, it was a warm, tingly feeling. It's as if a presense was nearby, and Zoey could sense it.

Then again, it might not be a 'what if'.

Shaking this feeling from herself, Zoey slowly turned around. Zoey could now see the girl fully.

The girl had long blond hair that reached her ankles. It was much longer than Zoey's, since Zoey's only reached the middle of her spine. The girl wore blue jeans that reached her ankles, like her hair, and a ocean blue long sleeved shirt. Her face look weary, like she might pass out, but at the same time, she looked rather intimidating. Basiclly as intimidating as the Empire State Building when up against a flea. The girl's fanny pack seemed full, sinced it bulged out with outlines of items. In one hand, the girl had a small but sharp knife clutched in it. The girl's eyes were purple, like Zoey's. Zoey grew irritated that everyone she have seen since being kidnapped had purple eyes. However, on closer examinaton, the girl's eyes were a deeper shade.

Zoey then had more stupidity to ask another question. "Why is Ritsen going to hurt me?" she spoke firmly, but on the inside, she felt like running around like a maniac, screaming for help.

Instead of speaking in a witty comment, the girl said "Ritsen is a premonition seer. He can see in the future."

Before the girl could say another word, Zoey's throat became dry in an instant. She knew what the girl would say next.

Only two more words almost gave Zoey a heart attack. "Like you."

***

"You see, very few animals and people possess purple colored eyes, and even fewer have the power. The power to see in the future." the girl continued.

"Wait, how do you know know i have premonitions?" Zoey questioned.

"Puh-lease! Everyone I've met that has purple colored irises can peer into the future. You might think i see into the future as well, right?"

Zoey didn't speak. The silence allowed the girl to continue talking. "Well no, I cannot. My eye color is slightly darker, so while i cannot see the future, i do possess another power. I can change my appearence to anything I so choose."

Zoey felt unconvinced. However, in the back of her mind, she knew this was all true. "Like you'd expect me to believe eye color determines my powers? AND you expect me to believe you came, how should I say, morph?"

The girl glared at Zoey. "Your eye color doesn't determine your powers. Your powers determine your eye color. And I'll prove it to you."

To Zoey's amazement, the girl started to shrink. Her hair started to dissappear, but orange fur sprouted on her body. Her arms and legs began to even in size. As her ears grew in a triangular shape, her nose grew whiskers. The girl had transformed into a cat. Zoey was speechless, so the girl reverted back to a human.

Zoey had a questionable look on her face. "Umm, so getting back on the topic, why does Ritsen want to hurt me?"

"Oh right! Well, you see, Ritsen, while he was taking care of me, he saw a vision. A vision of him harming a girl with an eye color like his. A girl with blond hair, that reached her spine. Remind you of anyone?"

Zoey gulped. Let's see, who was a girl with blond hair that reached her spine and had ocean blue eyes? she thought sarcasticlly. She knew it was herself. (Who else?)

"Just to be clear, he doesn't want to hurt you, but that's your fate. Oh, by the way, I'm Kiara. It's pronounced KEE-ar-UH."

This time, Zoey rolled her eyes. Zoey knew how to pronounce that name. Kiara was speaking as if Zoey was an idiot. Zoey glanced around, careful not to make eye conact with Kiara, worrying about the worst case scenario.

Worst case scenario would be that Kiara's eyes did something to Zoey that would kill her. Crazy, yes, but then again, Zoey had been kidnapped, has found out she sees visions from the future, and meets this psychotic girl. At this point, Zoey would sooner believe Dracula would cough up a kitten than believe that everything would be normal after this night.

As Zoey glanced around the forest, she spotted something that shone from underneath a bush. Thinking about what might happen if Zoey left her spot right in front of Kiara, the girl in front of her with a knife in her hands, Zoey stood still in her spot.

Zoey pondered on something. "Hey...do you know who kidnapped me?"

Kiara turned her head sharply so her eyes met Zoey's. Not only did the girl look intimidating, but her eyes did as well.

"There is only one kidnapper I know of. He lives over there," she said as she pointed a direction away from the moon. The direction where the kidnapper's house was.

"That guy was in a bomb explosion several years ago. His hands, face, and torso had been severely burned. He used to be loved by many, and was a very handsome man. However, after the explosion, he had become, well, ugly. All of his friends couldn't stand to even be near his totally unattractive face. He then started to exclude everyone out of his life, thinking they all hated him. After a year since the explosion, he had grown hatred for everyone. He just wanted beauty and friendship, but thinking that he had neither, he started to kidnap people just to fill the void. He wanted beauty, and his little sister, having the same power as you, foolishly told him of her power. The next day, the sister turned up dead. He then started to kidnap people with that power so he could see his future, knowing if he would be given beauty once again. He had no luck until his last kidnapping, where a girl that had the power had escaped and ran to the forest. Care to take a guess?" Kiara rambled on.

Zoey thought of how sad that was. Her miseries of everyone calling her names were as tiny as a chihuahua compared to the kidnapper's mammoth misery! Another thought dawned over her. "How do you know so much about this guy?"

Kiara had a forgetful look on her face for a split second, then finally said, " It was all over the news. Well, except for the sister revealing she had the power. I researched the rest of the story on the internet, and I found out she had purple eyes as well!"

After hearing that, Zoey soon got distracted and sidestepped to the aforementioned bush with the shining item. She bent down, pushed the leaves away, and found something that made her gasp.

If Kiara's weapon was a gun and not a knife, Kiara would have pulled the trigger out of surprise of the sudden gasp, with it pointed at Zoey. Fortunately, this was not the case. Kiara just stumbled with the knife out of surprise.

"What's that?" Kiara asked.

Zoey stared at the object that illuminated even more brightly than the vast light reflected by the moon. The object...it was beautiful! The magnificent light made Zoey's eyes not wanting to look away! Picking it up, she realized it was a...bracelet? Just a bracelet? Zoey didn't care if it was an ordinary bracelet, the glow on it was too beautiful to resist.

Zoey put the bracelet in her pocket and turned to Kiara. "Just a bracelet. Now, I'm just going to go, so see you later" she said, trying to run away from all of this. She just wanted to go home!

"No, you cannot leave alone," Kiara said coldly.

"But I want to leave!"

"You CAN'T!"

"Ok, I'm just sick and tired of this. I don't want to do this anymore. I am a human being, so I can leave if I want. The exit's close, I know it. So leave me alone." She snapped. She didn't want to do this any longer. She stormed off into the forest, leaving Kiara like stale bread.

***

The moonlight no longer illuminated the forest. This part of the forest had higher trees that blocked the light. It was so dark, Zoey could barely see her hands infront of her face. However, despite there being no light, the land had short blades of grass in a circular formation.

Zoey became a little frightened. The thought of something taking her and she couldn't see it terrified her. She immedietly felt calm, since this scenario JUST happened and she didn't feel anything when she was taken. She sighed in relief.

Her relief changed back to fear as she heard a 'WHOOSH' sound right next to her right ear. She stood stiff. Her mind hadn't processed that she should move, and another 'WHOOSH' went by her ear again. She jumped back on instinct, but other than that, she stayed still.

A third 'WHOOSH' went by, but at that moment, Zoey felt excruciating pain. She peered at her shoulders. Her left one was perfectly fine, but her right one had a hole in it. Blood squirted everwhere. Zoey's eyes became wide, as she passed out.

A lone figure emerged from the shadows. This man, who had burnt marking all over his body, was clutching a shotgun. He whispered to no one in paticular, "Gotcha."



Kiara, standing at the same spot she was before when Zoey stormed out, stomped her foot in frustration. She never got to tell Zoey why she never saw the man when she escaped, because he was going to create a trap at a part of a forest she would probably go through. Ok, she knew because she was following Zoey and stumbled upon a sheet of paper with the guy's plan, and if she told Zoey, she'd find out Kiara was stalking her. Kiara thought it would be best not to tell her though...

Kiara plopped onto the ground from sheer exaustion. Today had been very long with many surprises. She just hoped nothing else would happen. Yawning a hefty yawn, she decided to go look for Zoey. Better than doing nothing, right?

Hopping up from her little spot, she ventured through the same path Zoey went through. After walking for about seven or eight minutes, she found a small clearing. It was too dark to see anything except for the fact it was a clearing, so she decided to turn back. Upon turning back, Kiara glanced at something shining in the middle. She carefully trekked over to see what it was.

As she got closer, she saw a lump of a shadow, with the light at one spot of it. Getting closer still, she realized it was a body. After getting next to it, she bent down and examined the body. Purple eyes, blond hair...great scott, it was Zoey! After looking at her a bit more, she realized that Zoey's shoulder had a hole in it with blood trickling out.

Kiara panicked a bit, and then she glanced downwards at the item that was shining. There, on Zoey's wrist, was...the bracelet? It was no doubt the same bracelet she had picked up. If it weren't for that bracelet, Kiara would have never found Zoey!

Kiara got her trusty knife out and cut off a huge chunk of her sleeves. She put the piece of fabric on the wound on Zoey's shoulder.

Zoey's eyes slowly opened. She started to stutter some words. "K-k-kiara...."

"Shhhh, just relax Zoey. I'll be here to help you," Kiara said reassuringly. "Just relax."

A rustling in the bushes made Kiara alert for danger. A 'WHOOSH' sound went past Kiara's ears. Thinking a bit more rationally, she jumped in a nearby bush, hidden from view.

A shadowy figure emerged from a bush parrarel to the one Kiara was in. Kiara could only see the silhouette, since it was so dark. The figure walked up to Zoey's body.

Zoey had enough willpower to scurry away, but only got to a tree close to her. The figure merely walked closer and drew a long item that was hidden in the shadows. Zoey's bracelet glistened far more than normal as it gave light about five meters around Zoey. The silhouette became clearer. It was now a tall man. Nothing bad about that...except the man had burnt markings on him.

The kidnapper's (For who else would it be?) long item was actually a scythe. Zoey's eyes widened in horror as she realized that scythe was in her vision. And this vision was happening in reality.

Kiara was too far away to stop him in time. However, Kiara thought rationally an started to transform. Her skin turned pink as it covered with feathers. Her body shrunk as her hands became wings. Her feet became harder and lost two toes on each foot, making the remaining toes talons. Her mouth sprouted into a beak as her hair was replaced by more feathers. She had transformed into a hawk.

Flying as if she were a jet, Kiara had attacked the man with her fierce talons. The kidnapper stumbled back, screeching in pain. His scythe dropped out of his hands, swooping down to the ground. It landed only inches from Zoey. Zoey gasped in horror as she realized what was happening. Her vision came true...

The kidnapper stumbled in the bushes and ran off, cursing as he sprinted. By the time Zoey had stood up, Kiara had reverted back to normal human form.

"Are you ok?" Kiara asked.

Zoey looked at her shoulder. Part of Kiara's cut off sleeve was still on it, absorbing some of the blood. Zoey still felt a little weak, but she figured she could go on for a little while longer. "Ehh...Maybe" Zoey replied.

"Good," Kiara said.

Zoey pondered something for a moment, something Kiara had said before. "Hey, before, when you said Ritsen was going to hurt me...well, how and why do you know that?"

Kiara never expected this question, so she hesitated before answering. "Err, well, you see...Ritsen has visions of the future. Well, he told me, while I was with him, of one vision about a girl with blond hair and purple eyes just like his. Of course, that's you. His vision shows him...err...biting off some of your fingers..."

Zoey looked appauled. Ritsen wouldn't do such a thing!...Would he? "He'd really do that?" she asked.

"Well, visions don't always show the full story. Sometimes something else happens that prevents it."

Zoey thought of her vision that had just happened. She thought the scythe would fall on her, but it fell next to her. She could see what Kiara meant. "Kiara...where should we go now? The kidnapper might come back, so we need somewhere safe to be."

Kiara looked at Zoey's face. With the bracelet giving off light, they could see each other just fine. "We go to Ritsen. He'll protect us."

"Wait, you said he was going to hurt me!"

"Oh, well, he'll protect me." Kiara smirked. "Don't worry, if Ritsen tries to hurt you, I'll go Grizzly Bear on him."

Zoey could help but giggle at Kiara's comment. The two then walked down the path they came from, certain Ritsen would be there.

***

As they went down the path, the light started to reappear, so the bracelet didn't have to glow anymore. Still, it would be foolish to ditch the bracelet now, as it could be useful in the future.

Kiara decided to make some conversation. "So, what visions have you been having?" she said casually.

"Well, there was one about a devil/wolf demon running from a poacher, which I assume was the guy who kidnapped me. Another was what just happened, with my shoulder blodied. There was one other like the first one, although it was much quicker and didn't show much." she said.

"Devil/wolf demon?" Kiara warily asked.

"Umm, yeah" Zoey answered.

"That's what Ritsen is."

"No, he's a talking Demon wolf, not a devil demon wolf."

"No, half of his family was devil wolf, the other half demon wolf. Ritsen possesses mostly wolf and a bit of demon, though no devil."

"And how do you know this?" Zoey asked.

"He told me," Kiara said bluntly.

Why did Ritsen tell this stuff to Kiara? Or is Kiara just making this stuff up? Nevertheless, Zoey decided she should trust Kiara. Kiara had said for her not to leave, and when she did leave, Zoey almost died. It would be a good idea for Zoey to listen to Kiara for the time being.

Zoey's feet kept on wobbling, in which she fell a few times. Her shoulder was still stinging with pain. She couldn't take anymore of it.

"Kiara," Zoey said as she plopped on the ground, "I think I lost too much blood. I'm too weak to walk anymore. We got to rest somewhere for the night."

Kiara had knelt down and picked Zoey up, carrying her to a spot with soft, red leaves. It amazed Zoey that Kiara could actually pick her up so easily. Or it could just be her getting thinner and thinner from lack of blood, making her easy to carry. Nevertheless, Kiara had set Zoey down on a bed of leaves, showing no sign of a struggle while carrying her.

"Zoey, relax and stay there. Ritsen can't be far now. I'll be back as soon as I find him." Kiara said bluntly.

"Wait, what if the kidnapper comes back?" Zoey asked, her eyes trickling with tears, though Kiara couldn't see it.

"Relax, I just Talon Slashed his head. He'll most likely go home for the night and heal his wounds." Kiara reassured her.

Zoey's eyes were wide with fear. "Most likely?" she asked, now trembling with fear.

Kiara just ignored this and left looking for Ritsen. Zoey was there, in a sheet of plush leaves, scared to death by a "Most likely".



Kiara jogged down the pathway to where she had confronted Zoey. The trees were beautiful at the time of night, sparkling with dew as a bit of sunlight completed it. Wait, sunlight? Kiara looked over at the horizon; a strip of red sunlight was encircling the darkness that was called night. Morning would come in about an hour or two. A beautiful time of night, no doubt about it!

Kiara had finally made it to another small clearing. A patch of fur was in the middle of the short cut grass. Kiara quickly deduced it was Ritsen. Walking forward, she spoke.

"Ritsen, I've come back. Zoey needs your help." she said calm and bravely, as though making an epic entrance.

Ritsen just rolled around in his sleep. Kiara shook his back. "Wake up you piece of fur!"

More rolling. Kiara started to kick him. "Ritsen, GET UP!"

"Whu?" Ritsen muttered as he started to stretch out.

"Ritsen, I've come back and Zoey needs your help." Kiara said again, a little quicker than before.

Ritsen was instantly alert by the voice. He stared at Kiara for a long hard minute. "Y-you..."

"Yeah, it's me, now c'mon. Zoey needs your help." she repeated yet again, trying to make haste.

Before Ritsen could answer, Kiara was running off back into the path, and Ritsen had no choice but to follow her.

Ritsen caught up to Kiara in a snap. "What's wrong with Zoey?" he asked worriedly.

"The kidnapper shot her. She's too weak to travel. We got to get her home or at a hospital." she yelled. Her face was no longer fierce and intimidating; it was worried and full of empathy and sorrow.

Turning her gaze forward, she sprinted faster and faster towards where Zoey was. Ritsen followed quickly behind.



Zoey grew more and more afraid as the time passed. The kidnapper could be anywhere in the forest. He could even be right next to her...she sharply turned her head behind her. All there was were some trees and a large wolf. However, the wolf didn't even look like a normal wolf. The fur was red while two horns grew from its head. Zoey gasped, as she knew where this figure was from.

It was from her vision, and it was coming closer to her. When it got only five feet of her, it disappeared into the night. Zoey started to pant heavily, wondering if it'll strike from the shadows.

"Zoey!" a yell came from the darkness. Zoey jumped in fear and hid under the blanket of leaves.

The 'yell' was none other than Kiara, who had spotted Zoey trying to hid in the leaves.

"Zoey, get up." Kiara said bluntly. "I got Ritsen here now."

Zoey stood up, though she wobbled at first. "Kiara...I saw a red wolf with devil horns..." she said, with a look of discontent on her face.

"I'll tell you what you saw. Right now, just ride on me. you are too weak to walk yourself." Ritsen offered.

Zoey didn't argue and climbed on his back. "Where are we going to go?"

Kiara rolled her eyes, her usual expression back on her face. "Out of the forest. We're going to take you home or to the hospital."

The three ran off in a direction that they hoped would lead out of the forest.


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Yay! You used my suggestion with ze wolfie!! :D
As stated before, nice beginning. Be sure to make a rational reason why Zoey was kidnapped and it'll be the CUSTEST THING EVA!
 
Reviewing this now.

The sound of a howling wolf awoken Zoey from her slumber.
"Awoken" should be "woke".

Zoey tried to move her hands and feet, but they were bounded together by a tightly tied rope. The rope looked as if it couldnt be untied.
"Bounded" should be "bound". "Couldnt" should be "couldn't".


The trunk, as what Zoey believed the back of the minivan was, was filled with untitled boxes, varying from small to medium sizes. There were only four boxes, since the trunk didn't have enough room. The trunk had velvet carpeting that had noticably not been vacuumed in ages.

This paragraph sounds awkward. I would consider rewriting it. Perhaps like this:

Zoey came to the conclusion that she was in the trunk of a minivan. The trunk was filled with four unlabeled boxes, varying in size from small to medium. The velvet carpeting was filthy. Zoey assumed it had not been cleaned since this van came out of the factory.

Zoey's hands were bounded by one rope, while her feet were tied by another.

"Bounded" should be "bound".

Zoey tried her best to stand up, but with those ropes preventing blood from getting to her feet, she wouldn't be expected to stand up for a while.

Here Zoey is assuming that the kidnapper would show some compassion towards her, as in not forcing Zoey to stand up when her feet were asleep. It HURTS. BAD. Assuming this person is evil, I don't think they'd want Zoey to be comfortable. We haven't met this person yet, so it's best not to characterize him/ her yet. I would replace "wouldn't be expected" with "wouldn't expect herself".

She felt her heart beating out of fear. Blood circulated throughout her torso, arms, legs, feet- wait.....the ropes were tied by the ankles and wrists, but she had blood pumping in her feet? The rope must have been loose!

You only need three periods for an ellipsis. There also needs to be a space after it.

Hastily, she scrambled her feet out of those retched ropes.

Okay,then... it didn't underline "retched"... *looks up*

The dictionary said:
to make an effort to vomit. She retched at the sight of blood.

... Okay. That should be "wretched". Just wanted to make sure.

She felt more blood getting to her feet, rejuvenating the life inside her feet, which has happened in only two minutes.

Awkward wording here. Perhaps it could be:

Zoey felt her feet warm up as blood began circulating through them. The life-giving fluid rejuvenated the life in her feet quickly, taking only two minutes.

A thunp hit the window that Zoey was looking through, which caused her to whisped a shout in surprise.

"Thunp" should be "thump". "Whisped" should be "whisper". However, I would consider simply make Zoey gasp in surprise here.

She wanted to welcome i inside the trunk, but how could she? There was still a rope tied to her wrists.*

Delete the "i" before "inside" and this sentence is fine.

Zoey was appauled at this voice. This man, obvoiusly a man, had sounded threatening. He most likely was, considering he would go to extremes of kidnapping a 12 year old!

I would replace the first "man" with "voice".

The man left soon after, and 5 minutes later, the wolf came back.
As a general rule, spell out numbers that are below 100. I also make it a rule in my writing to spell out all numbers below 120, and spell out numbers above this limit that can be said in two or less words.

This animal could speak english somewhat fluently.

The names of languages are proper nouns. Capitalize them.

It's eyes told the truth.

You don't need the apostrophe.

the wolf continued, saying some wrods with R's, kinda like Scooby Doo.

Delete everything after the comma.

Zoey's mind was to busy thinking about his speech problem before her mind registered the sentance.

"Sentance" should be "sentence".

No one would see her sleeping with a wolf for protection, but she still felt a little embarressed.

"Embarresed" should be "embarrassed".


Other than the occasional typo, it was a very good beginning. I personally like how you ended this chapter. Very cute.
 
I dont use microsoft word, so i dont notice the errors. I was actually improvising making the wolf speak perfect english instead of somewhat fluent, but i forgot to take that out, X|!

Almost done with the next chapter, giving a hint about something, ;)
 
Still see a lot of mistakes...But I like it nonetheless.
I suggest entering the whole thing into an online spell/Grammar checker? There's a lot of free ones out there.
And the name Ritsen is unusual... Just what a good novelist calls for, my dear. >:D
 
(Oh cool, i got sigged with a quote! >=D)

O RLY? kay.

Still, i think there's something better than ritsen, so if anyone has a suggestion, then throw it at me.

Chapter 3 done!
 
Chapter Seven DONE! Two chapter's done in one day. Hey, please post comments on here!


Seriously, post critisism. I know you all can see this. I know more people have been viewing, so for the love of god, post!
 
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