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Old 10-31-2008, 12:49 PM
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I will continue, and STOP COMPLAINING!
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Old 10-31-2008, 01:34 PM
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Celestial Blade, please listen to us. We're trying to help you. Criticism is a form of help. Please use enter when it's needed, and please add more description. If you want your writing to become better, then you should write it properly.

I'll say it again - please use our advice. Really. No-one's going to read your work if it's just a wall of text. I'm not trying to be mean or anything, I'm trying to help you make your writing better. It could be genuinely good with paragraphs and description, but as of yet it's... not. I'm sorry. Yet again, please.

You'll probably just completely ignore this post, but I'll do it anyway. Remember, criticism is a form of help.
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Old 11-01-2008, 01:15 PM
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(ok, fine! I'll TRY to improve, but stop nagging about my writing style!)
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They were not nagging you; they were simply giving you criticism on how to improve your writing. They were giving you simple suggestions, which you seem unable to handle.

Am I the only one that votes we infract people that can't take criticism in the writing/poetry/web advertising/artwork/other creativity threads?
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Old 11-02-2008, 07:57 PM
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They were not nagging you; they were simply giving you criticism on how to improve your writing. They were giving you simple suggestions, which you seem unable to handle.

Am I the only one that votes we infract people that can't take criticism in the writing/poetry/web advertising/artwork/other creativity threads?
No you are not the only one.
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Old 11-05-2008, 11:28 PM
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Still. Trying to think of Episode 2.
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Old 11-11-2008, 03:09 PM
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Hey guys. Two words.

Duracell. Bunny.

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Old 11-13-2008, 12:57 PM
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Technically it's the ENERGIZER bunny. Duracell doesn't have a bunny.
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Old 11-13-2008, 06:14 PM
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oh ye of little faith
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