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Name: Rena

Gender: F

Pokémon Species: Lucario

Personality: She has a temper problem, but otherwise tries to hide her emotions. She will break down at the thought of her friend Riolu, who was killed by a Gengar. She hates Ghost-types and doesn't make friends easily because she's afraid that another loss of a good friend would be too much for her.

Age: 11

Appearance as Human: black spiky hair, kind of pale, wears a bracelet with a diamond and one with a pearl, one rainbow arm warmer with a tear in it on her right arm, also jeans and a plain white t-shirt. She has a scar over her left eye. She has blue eyes.

Appearance as Pokémon: She keeps her hair, her scarred eye is blue and her other eye is red like a normal Lucario. She keeps her arm warmer, and wears her braclets on her tail.

Additional Characteristics: She believes that every family has a legendary to watch over it. Her family's legends are Dialga and Palkia, hence the bracelets.

Writing Sample: Rena walked the empty streets of the town. It had been recently deserted, as a few stray Meowth still roamed looking for food. She walked into what was once a grocery and stole a few Oran berries. Nobody was around to miss them, anyway. She then walked into one of the houses and found a knife. She walked into the second floor of the house and fell into a light sleep.

EDIT: Thanks! Fixed the personality for ya. I kinda sorta wrote this at 2:30 in the morning, so I guess I was tired.
 
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Looks good, except that the personality is kinda sparse; redo that, please.

Other than that you're okay.
 
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