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10-31-2008, 12:49 PM
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I will continue, and STOP COMPLAINING!
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10-31-2008, 01:34 PM
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Celestial Blade, please listen to us. We're trying to help you. Criticism is a form of help. Please use enter when it's needed, and please add more description. If you want your writing to become better, then you should write it properly.
I'll say it again - please use our advice. Really. No-one's going to read your work if it's just a wall of text. I'm not trying to be mean or anything, I'm trying to help you make your writing better. It could be genuinely good with paragraphs and description, but as of yet it's... not. I'm sorry. Yet again, please. You'll probably just completely ignore this post, but I'll do it anyway. Remember, criticism is a form of help.
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11-01-2008, 01:15 PM
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(ok, fine! I'll TRY to improve, but stop nagging about my writing style!)
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11-01-2008, 09:09 PM
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They were not nagging you; they were simply giving you criticism on how to improve your writing. They were giving you simple suggestions, which you seem unable to handle.
Am I the only one that votes we infract people that can't take criticism in the writing/poetry/web advertising/artwork/other creativity threads?
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11-02-2008, 07:57 PM
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11-05-2008, 11:28 PM
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Still. Trying to think of Episode 2.
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11-11-2008, 03:09 PM
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Hey guys. Two words.
Duracell. Bunny. Thank you.
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11-13-2008, 12:57 PM
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Technically it's the ENERGIZER bunny. Duracell doesn't have a bunny.
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11-13-2008, 06:14 PM
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