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In Progress More than just a kit. ( A Warriors fic. )

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Starshine

Starshine

Jayfeather FTW! :D
It'll be better than the last one, I assure you. It may not make much sense in chapter one, but you will understand later on in the story.

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" No Sammantha, it's too dangerous! "​

" But mom,we can't lose her! "​

" Your father will look for her. "​

" I know I can find her! Or at least... I have to try! " I took off running out of the Hare Hill campsite, and I didn't look back. I couldn't. My little sister- Victoria - had disappeared this morning, and was probably still wandering near camp. My parents never let me do anything, and this was a chance to show them I'm responsible. Victoria was probably near camp- I would just find her and bring her back. That's what I thought anyway.​

I soon lost track of time, and where I was as well. I was sure I had ran near to Hare Hill by this time- and that was a long ways away from the campsite. I wandered back, but it seemed my foot was caught in a pile of rocks, sticks, and mud. I struggled to get free, but it was no use. I fell into a tunnel!​


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Chapter 1​

It seemed I had only slipped into the tunnel- a NETWORK of tunnels - a moment ago, but somehow I knew time had passed. I saw millions of exits to the small room I was in. Or were they entrances? I couldn't tell. I headed for the nearest exit. Entrance. Thing. But first, I wanted to see my reflection in a puddle, to make sure I hadn't gotten dirt all over me.
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A pair of wide, seafoam green eyes stared back at me. They belonged to a small brown and white kitten, about five moons- err, months- old. I stepped back in shock, but I wasn't sure why. Somehow, it didn't surprise me. I tried to remember what had happened just a day before, but it was all a blur. I headed for the outlet and didn't want to be interrupted again.​

I finally climbed my way up to the outlet, just to find it was a dead end. But I know I can dig through. I can sense it. I thought. I started to dig, and dig, and dig some more. I was exhausted by the time I broke through, but I had to get back to the surface. I could feel the grass under my small claws. But then,I collapsed.​
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