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On the First Day of Pokemas...

DarkAura

loves terra "brain cells? idk her" kingdomhearts
Poetry? More like a little jingle, and I don't think jingles go in the general writing thread, sooo;


On the first day of Pokemas, my true love gave to me;

A Pineco in an Oran Tree.



On the second day of Pokemas, my true love gave to me;

Two Squirtledoves,
And a Pineco in an Oran Tree.



On the third day of Pokemas, my true love gave to me;

Three Farfetch'd,
Two Squirtledoves,
And a Pineco in an Oran Tree.



On the fourth day of Pokemas, my true love gave to me;

Four Celebi,
Three Farfetch'd,
Two Squirtledoves,
And a Pineco in an Oran Tree.



On the fifth day of Pokemas, my true love gave to me;

Five transform(ing) Mews,
Four Celebi,
Three Farfetch'd,
Two Squirtledoves,
And a Pineco in an Oran Tree.



On the six day of Pokemas, my true love gave to me;

Six Gabite biting,
Five transform(ing) Mews,
Four Celebi,
Three Farfetch'd,
Two Squirtledoves,
And a Pineco in an Oran Tree.



On the seventh day of Pokemas, my true love gave to me;

Seven Swannas swimming,
Six Gabite biting,
Five transform(ing) Mews,
Four Celebi,
Three Farfetch'd,
Two Squirtledoves,
And a Pineco in an Oran Tree.



On the eigth day of Pokemas, my true love gave to me;

Eight Miltank milking,
Seven Swannas swimming,
Six Gabite biting,
Five transform(ing) Mews,
Four Celebi,
Three Farfetch'd,
Two Squirtledoves,
And a Pineco in an Oran Tree.



On the ninth day of Pokemas, my true love gave to me;

Nine Pichus dancing,
Eight Miltank milking,
Seven Swannas swimming,
Six Gabite biting,
Five transform(ing) Mews,
Four Celebi,
Three Farfetch'd,
Two Squirtledoves,
And a Pineco in an Oran Tree.



On the tenth day of Pokemas, my true love gave to me;

Ten Marill leaping,
Nine Pichus dancing,
Eight Miltank milking,
Seven Swannas swimming,
Six Gabite biting,
Five transform(ing) Mews,
Four Celebi,
Three Farfetch'd,
Two Squirtledoves,
And a Pineco in an Oran Tree.



On the eleventh day of Pokemas, my true love gave to me;

Eleven Pidgey flying,
Ten Marill leaping,
Nine Pichus dancing,
Eight Miltank milking,
Seven Swannas swimming,
Six Gabite biting,
Five transform(ing) Mews,
Four Celebi,
Three Farfetch'd,
Two Squirtledoves,
And a Pineco in an Oran Tree.



On the twelfth day of Pokemas, my true love gave to me;

Twelve Ditto ruling,
Eleven Pidgey flying,
Ten Marill leaping,
Nine Pichus dancing,
Eight Miltank milking,
Seven Swannas swimming,
Six Gabite biting,
Five transform(ing) Mews,
Four Celebi,
Three Farfetch'd,
Two Squirtledoves,
And a Pineco in an Oran Tree.​




Is this good?
 
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I wanted to put Celebi at the last minute an forgot to change the rest. I changed it though.
 
The "two Squirtles 'n' Pidove" line doesn't sound right when you try to sing it- too many sylables. I suggest that you change it to "Blastoise" instead? It sounds much better.

Also, on the last verse, the "eleven Pidgeys piping" is changed to "flying."
 
I changed things at the last minute. Fixed them all.

I just got bored while doing this, so this might just be suckish.
 
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