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This is just a rhyming short story I wrote once when I was bored, but it came out pretty good.
--------------------------------------------------- A Big Little Guy Once, I was walking about, Because the sun had just come out, When suddenly, I saw a plant, Who had the voice of a giant! “I’m an Oddish! I am strong, Though I’ve not lived very long! Battles I could win with ease, So someone come and battle, please?” After I heard this Oddish cry, In the corner of my eye, I spotted someone gray and rough, A Rhydon! He looked pretty tough. Up to the Oddish, Rhydon went, Then he stopped, and over he bent, And laughed at Oddish with all his might! The ground was shaking, what a sight! He said, “Oddish are so weak and small! Unlike me, who’s strong and tall! Yes, when Monday morning rolls around, I will crush you into the ground!” Rhydon left, then, and to my surprise, There was a feiry look in Oddish’s eyes, I expected something that seemed afraid, So I ran over, to be of aid. “Little one, don’t be so dumb, You’re the size of Ryhdon’s thumb! Now before a slaughter has begun, I would get up now, and run!” But Oddish just stood and shook his head, He then looked up at me and said, “He is big; I’m smaller than an elf, But I can win by believing in myself!” Sooner than I thought, Monday came, Oddish hopped up, he looked quite lame. Rhydon stomped, he shook the ground! I suddenly wished I wasn’t around. But again, I saw the fire in Oddish’s eyes, And though Rhydon was 10 times his size, I somehow knew Oddish could do it, I still hoped he wouldn’t take the first hit. Rhydon charged! He used his horn! I was sure we’d have a death to mourn, But wait! Oddish jumped over Rhydon’s head! The little fellow wasn’t dead! Rhydon tried again, this time faster! And again I feared a great disaster, But no, Oddish was just too quick! He jumped up and delivered a kick! His foot jabbed Rhydon in the eye! And surprisingly, he began to cry! “Ow, ow, ow!” Rhydon shouted, Oddish was winning, though I had doubted! Oddish then used Giga Drain, And inflicted excruciating pain! Rhydon ran, he’d had enough, So much for looking big and tough. I ran over to Oddish and said, “I figured you should have fled, But you most definitely proved me wrong! You had it in you all along!” Now there is a lesson to be taught, Did this turn out like you had thought? See, little ones can do big things, No matter what this life brings! |
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this came out really good! i want to see more of your work soon. Keep it up!
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Very good, creative. Some of the rhyming, at least in my mind, is a bit of a stretch, but that's a pretty common problem.
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This is... Really good. I love how your were able to find nice rhymes, but keep the stroy flowing smoothly. That's a tough thing to accomplish. Kudos.
I feel the need to ask though, should this be in poetry? The ryhming, verses, and rythem make it seem an awful lot like a poem.
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This would make an excellent children's picture book. <3
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