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05-24-2012, 12:15 PM
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The One of Silver Wing
"The One of Silver Wing"
written by: Grim (E. Dunn) To the one of silver wing we the ancients sing beauty is the song of yours spare us of your deadly storm Far beneath the ocean tide hidden away from prying eye lay a creature few have seen Tis the guardian of all marine Legend tells us it once nested in the city known as Ecruteak Til' lightning set ablaze the tower upon which it rested. As myth would have it told The Whirl Islands, uncontrolled are said to be its hold travelers lost at sea swear it was the silver wing who guided them home to safety So next time you find yourself gazing out at the vast expanse you may just happen upon the chance of sighting the elusive soul silver To the one of silver wing we the ancients sing your melody alone can tame the titans of thunder, ice and flame beauty is the song of yours spare us of your deadly storm...
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~Wisdom begins in wonder~ Pokemon Friend Code: 2494-3484-1494 Name: Grim Last edited by Grim; 05-11-2015 at 06:59 AM. 
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05-24-2012, 01:41 PM
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Re: The One of Silver Wing
Y ALL UR POEMS SO GOOD?! I really like it. :D
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05-24-2012, 01:59 PM
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Re: The One of Silver Wing
Thank you, I'm really glad you like it lol. This one was the toughest to write because I had many thoughts I wanted to express about the subject and it was tough to put them into words that would do them justice. Probably my favorite one that I have written so far also. ^_^
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05-24-2012, 04:48 PM
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Re: The One of Silver Wing
Is it about some sailors praying to Lugia?
It seems like you always make the end good.
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05-24-2012, 05:00 PM
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Re: The One of Silver Wing
No not sailors. It is about the Pokemon Lugia, but no it isn't a sailor's prayer in the slightest. The poem is about the ancient people telling the legend/myth of Lugia, the beginning and ending I tried give a bit of a chant-like feel, guess it could be seen as a prayer but really I meant it as sort of a chant of praise or admiration. I'm glad you like the ending at least lol, the endings I always try to differ from the repeated verses, just to add I guess sort of a last kick to the poem.
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05-24-2012, 05:12 PM
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Re: The One of Silver Wing
Your poems could easily be incorporated into a fanfiction. Now you should make one about Ho-oh.
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05-24-2012, 05:23 PM
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Re: The One of Silver Wing
I might lol, at the moment I am choosing my next subject to write about and Ho-oh is one of the subjects I am considering. I research out of interest a lot into the myths surrounding Pokemon, both in game (such as Pokemon mythology) and out of game myths (like creepypastas and such) which is where my poetry spawns from.
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