Renteura's Horrible Attempts at Drawing :D

Renteura · Aug 23, 2008

Mewtwo · Aug 23, 2008

You're pretty good!I like Mudkip and Typhlosion :P
Try a Pikachu,or Mew and Mewtwo fighting!That should help you improve,as Mewtwo has a lot of lines you have to draw!

Renteura · Aug 23, 2008

I made it, but I made them too close together. And it's not too good in the first place. :/
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q224/darkclaw2007/DSCN0139.jpg

Renteura · Aug 25, 2008

5 new pics, the Eeveelutions are 2, then Drifloon, and then Spheal/Swablu, then Dragonair.

Oh, and notice the Suggestions tag. ;_;

edit: oh come on, 3 more people just viewed the thread and didn't suggest a thing. X3

Flora · Aug 25, 2008

Pachirisu's adorable. :D

cheesecake · Aug 25, 2008

I think your Drifloon and Dragonair are cute ;3

Renteura · Aug 26, 2008

Thanks. :D I think the Pachirisu is a bit to tall or something. :/

Crazy Linoone · Aug 27, 2008

Hmmm... Suggestions, huh....

I would suggest you to work on anatomy a bit more; some Pokemon are good, while others are a bit weird. Also, your lines are a bit shaky. And try to make the coloring smoother.

I like how your art is really clean. There's no extra pencil marks to be found. And the outlines are pretty good, too.

Here's a challenge that'll force you to work on anatomy: draw a Linoone playing a DS. I would suggest you doodle a few random Linoones in different poses first before attempting that~

Renteura · Sep 15, 2008

Oh
My
God
An
Update

Gible

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q224/darkclaw2007/DSCN0213.jpg
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Marril

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q224/darkclaw2007/DSCN0212.jpg
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Turtwig

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q224/darkclaw2007/DSCN0211.jpg
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Milotic

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q224/darkclaw2007/DSCN0210.jpg
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Pikachu

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q224/darkclaw2007/DSCN0209.jpg
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...am i any better? :c

Oh, and Linoone, here's your linoone. It's dreadful. ;_;
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q224/darkclaw2007/DSCN0217.jpg

Crazy Linoone · Sep 16, 2008

Fwee~ Linoone~

I would suggest using thinner pens to outline your art instead of using markers. And you still have anatomy problems. Your outlines are a not as smooth as your old stuff... Try using pencil first to get the outlines and such, then trace over the pencil very carefully. Take some time in drawing and don't rush, since rushing makes the art really messy.

Really, get a thinner pen. It'll help your art by quite a lot.

Renteura · Sep 16, 2008

Crazy Linoone said:
Fwee~ Linoone~

I would suggest using thinner pens to outline your art instead of using markers. And you still have anatomy problems. Your outlines are a not as smooth as your old stuff... Try using pencil first to get the outlines and such, then trace over the pencil very carefully. Take some time in drawing and don't rush, since rushing makes the art really messy.

Really, get a thinner pen. It'll help your art by quite a lot.

Er...I do. O_o

I wouldn't just draw the outline in Sharpie.

Crazy Linoone · Sep 16, 2008

>.< Sorry. I didn't see any pencil marks... So I just assumed that you didn't use them...

Renteura · Sep 22, 2008

Hey, requests are open. :D

And new pics in a sec.

EDIT: I finished the Raquaza. :D
http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q224/darkclaw2007/DSCN0223.jpg

EDIT again:

fine, i'll stop whining, but just suggest for once
</3

Dannichu · Sep 23, 2008

Aww, they're so cute! :D

They remind me a little of what my earlier Pokemon pictures looked like (only better), especially that Pikachu with balloon. They're cute as hell and the poses you draw them in are original and cool; the best advice I can give you is to practice as much and as often as possible :3

Can I request an Ampharos, please?

Renteura · Sep 23, 2008

:D

See, Danni is nice. :P

One Ampharos coming up.

Renteura · Sep 25, 2008

http://i137.photobucket.com/albums/q224/darkclaw2007/DSCN0229.jpg

Amphy :3

Dannichu · Sep 27, 2008

Eee, he's so chubby and cute <3

Thank you!

Renteura · Sep 27, 2008

No problem.

I just realized it was chubby too. :I

Spoon · Sep 27, 2008

Oh, I find your art adorable, it's so simplified, catching all of the major details, too, but really adorable. One thing in general that's bothering me with your art, is that it is a bit atamonicly-off, even for simple drawings. If you wouldn't mind could you show me how you draw step by step so I can see where you make your mistakes (and corrections, and what you're skilled at, too.)

Out of all of them, I like Pikachu with the '2 balloon', Amphy, Linoone which has a really wonderful shape and perspective, and Pichu.

Renteura · Sep 28, 2008

Ok, I'll try a step by step thing.

Not right now though, my camera is being a useless piece of crap that I shouldn't have payed $300 for.

:/

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