Suggestions terrible drawings inside (dont click)

[fresh fruit for Adol]

what are you even doing here i told you not to click
idek why i post these on the internet

http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/Aqua_the_Vaporeon/Photo02090130-1.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/Aqua_the_Vaporeon/hoohah.png
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/Aqua_the_Vaporeon/SOMASSIVE.png
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/Aqua_the_Vaporeon/kazuki-action.jpg
http://i54.photobucket.com/albums/g84/Aqua_the_Vaporeon/freya2-1.jpg

idk, i have a lot to improve upon. constructive criticism and all that shit, just as long as it's something other than FINISH YOUR DRAWINGS, it'll be appreciated

 

[Dar]

Why do you think these are terrible? Often my stick figures don't turn out right >.<

 

[Zero Moment]

Hopy shit these are waaaaaaaay better than my stick figures

Good job

 

[K'yoril]

Terrible? Do you wanna trade skills? Then your terrible would really be terrible...

 

[fresh fruit for Adol]

lol if i seriously thought these were terrible i really wouldn't bother with putting them on the internet

but thanks though gais. some constructive criticism would be nice if possible though ):

 

[Homikachu]

Wow, these drawing are really gorgeous! Very good details too! :)

 

[fresh fruit for Adol]

thaaaanks hahaha

but seriously nobody has any suggestions or criticism to give ):
c'mon guys, i need more motivation T_T

 

[Monoking]

FINISH YOUR DRAWINGS

No, but seriously. I'd love to see these colored in.

 

[fresh fruit for Adol]

oh gee
coloring

i'm so terrible at it T_T i'd rather wait until i eventually get a tablet to work on that :<

 

[Blastoise Fortooate]

I'll be going by file name!

kazuki-action

Quite nice, and I like the expression! But. The pose is verrrry awkward. Knees do not bend like that when people are fighting unless something knocks them off balance, and even the the legs both seem to bend forward, which is a wonderful way for a person to fall on their behinds. The way that the arm is drawn implies that its extending behind the figure, but the sword is in front of them despite pointing straight down.

SOMASSIVE

*immature giggle*

Anyway, only problem I see here is that Mr. Scarface's sword is not convincing me that he's blocking anything with it.

 

[fresh fruit for Adol]

^this guy knows what's up

i kinda felt that about kazuki-action, i was planning to redraw that soon anyhow. the issue with the sword is actually incredibly goofy; like an idiot, i drew the sword before the legs and just said 'fuck it' and went and finished it anyhow lmao.

and with the other one uhh, yeah. i screwed up on the foreshortening for his hand and the sword T_T i don't plan on redrawing it though, considering i never even planned on finishing it in the first place.

thanks for the tips though, haha. i'll be sure to keep those in mind~