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Warriors Fan Club

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I think if I ran markov chains on a Warriors corpus, I'd generate a better story than most of the fanfics out there. anyone have a warriors corpus?

EDIT: in fact, I will. when I find a good piece.
 
I also once saw a fanfic where Crowpaw (Crowfeather) had spontaneously fallen in love with a random WindClan apprentice named Bluepaw before TNP took place. The author's name was Bluefang.

EDIT: in fact, I will. when I find a good piece.

I can't wait. xD

EDIT: 'Then willowstar and dawnkit saw what she had brought back, it was Gingerlash's body.

"No"said dawn kit. How could it have happened, her mom promised to be back.'

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5892983/3/Dawns_spalsh

EDIT EDIT: 'I was so exited I nearly jumped out of my.'

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5892983/4/Dawns_spalsh
 
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Wind whipped through the trees, causing the few remaining leaves they had to rustle in the sky, you are superior?" His gaze was filled with disbelief. "I bet none of you have any experience with killing cats! We could slice you open as easily as we would a mouse." He flicked his claws, as if slicing them down the side of an imaginary enemy. "You are weak. You do not understand what fighting for survival means." "We fight the other cats. A few of the clearing. These five were talking quietly, their backs turned to the cats on the faces of some as they watched the enraged Clan cats. This will be on our side. They won't let us be driven out." The cats behind her yowled in approval. "So you'd rather place your trust into the moonlight. More strange cats followed behind him, their claws flashing in the pale moonlight. They greeted each other with mews and friendly nuzzles, all enmity forgotten as the tabby approached. A space was cleared for them by all of the clearing. These five were glaring with undisguised hostility at the tabby, although he seemed unfettered by the hatred the others were feeling toward him. He began to speak. "My name is Slash," he explained. "My cats come from the Clan cats standing in the pale moonlight. They greeted each other with mews and friendly nuzzles, all enmity forgotten as the tabby approached. A space was cleared for them by all of the cats behind them thrusting themselves forward to stand beside their leaders. The cats behind them thrusting themselves forward to stand beside their leaders. The cats behind Slash hissed in exasperation. "Fine. Fine. We will fight for ourselves. We are above all the rest. It was a faint, distasteful growling coming from the rock and stood there as the tabby - Slash, he had said his name was - made no move of any territory than lowlife like yourselves." "No," Slash replied. "You do not know what it means to be a good thing." The unfamiliar voice rang out through the trees, causing the few remaining leaves they had to rustle in the clearing, and the cats behind them thrusting themselves forward to stand beside their leaders. The cats behind her yowled in approval. "So you'd rather place your trust into the bushes, he turned back to the cats behind her yowled in approval. "So you'd rather place your trust into the moonlight. More strange cats followed behind him, their claws flashing in the light. There was even a hint of amusement on the ground below them. After a little while, one of your dead friends exist in the clearing, their Gathering broken by the arrival of Slash's cats. Above them, the full moon shone above their heads. Five cats were more well-fed than Slash's cats. "We need more," Slash growled simply. "The ranks of my cats are growing rapidly. Soon the rats of the leaders were standing so close together that their pelts were brushing. All five were talking quietly, their backs turned to the cats on the skills of your cats. Good night, Clan cats. We follow the warrior code, and we believe in StarClan. We are much more deserving of it. We will fight you, and we trust in StarClan, something you do not. We hunt and fight for it. We hereby claim it for ourselves." "What do you mean, we're not deserving?" hissed another one of the cats on the faces of some as they watched the enraged Clan cats. This will be of hatred for you for sacrificing them to try and save your precious territories rather than thinking in the center of the leaders, a powerful golden she-cat, as more yowls of outrage rose up around them. "We are Clan cats. "Leave?" One cry sounded out above all other cats in this world. We live in the night. Cold moonlight shone down onto the floor of a large clearing where a huge boulder in the wild, a luxury which kittypets are too stupid to agree with. We live in the clearing, and the cats on the ground looked around in confusion for the speaker. Bushes rustled at the tabby, although he seemed unfettered by the arrival of Slash's cats. Above them, the full moon shone above their heads. Five cats were more well-fed than Slash's cats. Above them, the full moon shone above their heads. Five cats were standing atop a huge boulder in the wild, a luxury which kittypets are too stupid to agree with. We live in the light. There was a place where you were able to sustain every cat. You depend on the skills of your presence for a while, and now we have right to any territory." Slash snorted. "You think that the spirits of your cats could have lost all four of his tail the other cats in this world. We live together, companionship being something which rogues and loners lack. We train our kits in the pale moonlight. They greeted each other with mews and friendly nuzzles, all enmity forgotten as the tabby approached. A space was cleared for them by all of the leaders, a powerful golden she-cat, as more yowls of outrage rose up around them. "We are the Clans. We follow the warrior code and we trust in StarClan, something you do not. We hunt and fight for ourselves. We are above all other cats in this world. We live in the ways of hunting and fighting. Our cats are growing rapidly. Soon the rats of the clearing. These five were talking quietly, their backs turned to the cats. "And when your Clanmates for survival. We do not. We are above all the prey in the clearing, their Gathering broken by the hatred the others were feeling toward him. He began to speak. "My name is Slash," he explained. "My cats come from the Clan leaders at these words, with many of the clearing. These five were talking quietly, their backs turned to the cats. "And when your Clanmates lie there dying, their last thoughts will be of hatred for you for sacrificing them to try and save your precious territories rather than thinking in the forest at your disposal, and you're not deserving of it. We hereby claim it for ourselves." "What do you mean, we're not deserving?" hissed another one of your Clanmates for survival. We do not. We hunt and fight for ourselves. We are tougher and stronger than you, and only we know what it means to be a good thing." The unfamiliar voice rang out through the trees, causing the few remaining leaves they had to rustle in the forest at your disposal, and you're not deserving of any sort. They simply stood there, their eyes flashing and their claws flashing in the center of the leaders, a powerful golden she-cat, as more yowls of outrage rose up around them. "We are Clan cats. "Leave?" One cry sounded out above all the prey in the center of the clearing. These five were glaring with undisguised hostility at the top of the slope, and before long a tabby tom stepped forward, his muscles moving smoothly under his thin pelt. "WindClan is thriving," he began. "Despite the fact that it's leaf-bare, we are finding enough prey to feed all of the other cats followed, leaving Fourtrees and heading back to their own territory. At the top of the slope, and before long a tabby tom had stepped into the moonlight. More strange cats followed behind him, their claws flashing in the ways of hunting and fighting. Our cats are growing rapidly. Soon the rats of the slope, just before he vanished into the moonlight. More strange cats followed behind him, their claws flashing in the forest at your disposal, and you're not deserving of it. We hereby claim it for ourselves." "What do you mean, we're not deserving?" hissed another one of the cats behind the Clan cats as they looked at intruders. These were not allies. The five Clan leaders jumped from the Clan cats as they watched the enraged Clan cats. This will be on our side. They won't let us be driven out." The cats behind her yowled in approval. "So you'd rather place your trust into the bushes, he turned back to their own territory. At the top of the slope, just before he vanished into the bushes, he turned back to their own territory. At the top of the leaders, a powerful golden she-cat, as more yowls of outrage rose up around them. "We are the Clans. We follow the warrior code and we trust in StarClan, something you do not. We are tougher and stronger than you, and only we have right to any territory." Slash snorted. "You think that because you all think that because you all think that the spirits of your dead friends exist in the best interests of your dead friends exist in the light. There was a faint, distasteful growling coming from the rock and stood there as the moon shone above their heads. Five cats were standing so close together that their pelts were brushing. All five were talking quietly, their backs turned to the cats on the ground below them. After a little while, one of the leaders, a powerful golden she-cat, as more yowls of outrage rose up around them. "We are Clan cats. "Leave?" One cry sounded out above all other cats followed, leaving Fourtrees and heading back to their own territory. At the top of the clearing. These five were talking quietly, their backs turned to the cats. "And when your Clanmates lie there dying, their last thoughts will be the last battle you'll ever see." And with that, he turned, leaving the stunned Clan cats as they looked at intruders. These were not allies. The five Clan leaders jumped from the Clan cats as they looked at intruders. These were not allies. The five Clan leaders jumped from the rock and stood there as the moon shone above their heads. Five cats were standing so close together that their pelts were brushing. All five were talking quietly, their backs turned to the cats on the ground below them. After a little more territory?" Several of the leaders, a powerful golden she-cat, as more yowls of outrage rose up around them. "We are the Clans. We follow the warrior code, and we believe in StarClan. We are above all the prey in the wild, a luxury which kittypets are too stupid to agree with. We live in the best interests of your dead friends exist in the ways of hunting and fighting. Our cats are stronger and faster than yours. You have no right to any territory, since only we have decided to act. We are far stronger. My cats will rule the forest. It was a place where you were able to sustain every cat. You have three days to leave before we fight you and kill every last one of the leaders were standing atop a huge boulder in the ways of hunting and fighting. Our cats are stronger and faster than yours. You have three days to leave before we fight you and kill every last one of the leaders were standing so close together that their pelts were brushing. All five were talking quietly, their backs turned to the cats on the ground below them. After a little more territory?" Several of the leaders, a powerful golden she-cat, as more yowls of outrage rose up around them. "We are the Clans. We follow the warrior code, and we will fight you, and we believe in StarClan. We are above all other cats followed, leaving Fourtrees and heading back to their own territory. At the top of the slope, just before he vanished into the moonlight. More strange cats followed behind him, their claws flexing over the frosted grass. There was even a hint of amusement on the ground looked around in confusion for the speaker. Bushes rustled at the top of the cats on the ground looked around in confusion for the speaker. Bushes rustled at the top of the slope, and before long a tabby tom stepped forward, his muscles moving smoothly under his thin pelt. "WindClan is thriving," he began. "Despite the fact that it's leaf-bare, we are finding enough prey to feed all of the Thunderpaths will no longer be able to live for many moons! Why would you rather have ours?" Slash turned away, and with a flick of his tail the other Clans when they steal our prey. We fight so that we may feed our members. How is that fighting for survival?" growled Sootstar. "Yours is not an individual effort. One of your dead friends exist in the light. There was even a hint of amusement on the ground below them. After a little while, one of them let out a loud caterwaul to quell the discussion. "Let the Gathering begin," spoke the cat. "Sootstar, would you rather have ours?" Slash turned and gazed at his cats. Despite the muscles bulging under their pelts, they were thin and half-starved. Even the scrawny WindClan cats were standing so close together that their pelts were brushing. All five were talking quietly, their backs turned to the cats. "And when your Clanmates for survival. We do not. We are above all the rest. It was a faint, distasteful growling coming from the Clan leaders jumped from the Clan leaders jumped from the territory beyond the forest. You have three days to leave. If you choose to stay, we will fight you, and only we have decided to act. We are much more deserving of it. We will fight you, and we will win. Your territories belong to me now. This forest belongs to Slash." An enraged yowling broke out behind the Clan cats as they watched the enraged Clan cats. We follow the warrior code, and we believe in StarClan. We are above all the rest. It was a faint, distasteful growling coming from the territory beyond the forest. You have no right to any territory, since only we have decided to act. We are far stronger. My cats will rule the forest. It was the WindClan leader, Sootstar. "Leave? How can you suggest such a thing? We've lived here all our lives. You come here without warning and suggest we leave just so you can have a little more territory?" Several of the cats behind her yowled in approval. "So you'd rather place your trust into the paws of imaginary spirits than in your own power? You will never take over our territory. StarClan will be your downfall when we fight." The golden she-cat spat back. "We show compassion, an emotion of which you aren't capable." "You're right," Slash answered emotionlessly. "We don't show compassion. And that will be your downfall when we fight." The golden she-cat hissed in exasperation. "Fine. Fine. We will all fight. You will never take over our territory. StarClan will be on our side. They won't let us be driven out." The cats behind Slash hissed in anger, but the gray tom did not halt his speech. "You had a territory of your Clanmates for survival. We do not. We are claiming your land. You have three days to leave. If you choose to stay, we will fight for ourselves. We are tougher and stronger than you, and only we know what it means to live for many moons! Why would you rather have ours?" Slash turned away, and with a flick of his paws and you'd still feed him. How is that fighting for survival means." "We fight the other cats. A few of the cats behind the Clan cats as they looked at intruders. These were not allies. The five Clan leaders jumped from the Clan cats standing in the forest at your disposal, and you're not deserving of any sort. They simply stood there, their eyes shining in the light. There was even a hint of amusement on the faces of some as they watched the enraged Clan cats. "Leave?" One cry sounded out above all the prey in the forest at your disposal, and you're not deserving of any sort. They simply stood there, their eyes flashing and their claws flashing in the light. There was even a hint of amusement on the ground below them. After a little more territory?" Several of the clearing. These five were glaring with undisguised hostility at the top of the cats on the ground below them. After a little while, one of your cats. Good night, Clan cats. "Leave?" One cry sounded out above all other cats followed, leaving Fourtrees and heading back to the cats behind them thrusting themselves forward to stand beside their leaders. The cats behind Slash hissed in exasperation. "Fine. Fine. We will fight you, and only we know what it means to live for many moons! Why would you care to begin?" A gray tabby tom stepped forward, his muscles moving smoothly under his thin pelt. "WindClan is thriving," he began. "Despite the fact that it's leaf-bare, we are finding enough prey to feed all of the cats on the skills of your presence for a while, and now we have decided to act. We are tougher and stronger than you, and only we know what it means to live for many moons! Why would you care to begin?" A gray tabby tom stepped forward, his muscles moving smoothly under his thin pelt. "WindClan is thriving," he began. "Despite the fact that it's leaf-bare, we are finding enough prey to feed all of the cats behind her yowled in approval. "So you'd rather place your trust into the bushes, he turned back to the cats. "And when your Clanmates for survival. We do not. We are tougher and stronger than you, and only we have right to any territory, since only we know what it means to live for many moons! Why would you rather have ours?" Slash turned and gazed at his cats. Despite the muscles bulging under their pelts, they were thin and half-starved. Even the scrawny WindClan cats were standing atop a huge boulder in the sky, you are superior?" His gaze was filled with disbelief. "I bet none of you have any experience with killing cats! We could slice you open as easily as we would a mouse." He flicked his claws, as if slicing them down the side of an imaginary enemy. "You are weak. You do not know what it means to be a wild cat. You have three days to leave before we fight you and kill every last one of your Clanmates for survival. We do not. We are claiming your land. You have three days to leave before we fight you and kill every last one of the leaders, a powerful golden she-cat, as more yowls of outrage rose up around them. "We are Clan cats. "Leave?" One cry sounded out above all other cats in this world. We live in the light. There was even a hint of amusement on the faces of some as they watched the enraged Clan cats. This will be the last battle you'll ever see." And with that, he turned, leaving the stunned Clan cats standing in the ways of hunting and fighting. Our cats are growing rapidly. Soon the rats of the leaders, a powerful golden she-cat, as more yowls of outrage rose up around them. "We are Clan cats. We follow the warrior code, and we trust in StarClan, something you do not. We hunt and fight for ourselves. We are tougher and stronger than you, and only we have right to any territory, since only we know what it means to be a good thing." The unfamiliar voice rang out through the trees, causing the few remaining leaves they had to rustle in the best interests of your cats could have lost all four of his tail the other Clans when they steal our prey. We fight so that we may feed our members. How is that not fighting for survival?" Slash asked coolly. "You wouldn't feed a cat who'd lost his paws," the golden she-cat hissed in exasperation. "Fine. Fine. We will all fight. You will definitely lose. We outnumber you. We are above all other cats in this world. We live in the pale moonlight. They greeted each other with mews and friendly nuzzles, all enmity forgotten as the tabby approached. A space was cleared for them by all of the clearing. These five were glaring with undisguised hostility at the tabby, although he seemed unfettered by the hatred the others were feeling toward him. He began to speak. "My name is Slash," he explained. "My cats come from the territory beyond the forest. It was a faint, distasteful growling coming from the territory beyond the highlands, where the roars of monsters ring in our ears all day and night. We have known of your cats." Slash turned away, and with a flick of his tail the other cats. A few of the slope, just before he vanished into the paws of imaginary spirits than in your own power? You will never take over our territory. StarClan will be of hatred for you for sacrificing them to try and save your precious territories rather than thinking in the sky, you are superior?" His gaze was filled with disbelief. "I bet none of you have any experience with killing cats! We could slice you open as easily as we would a mouse." He flicked his claws, as if slicing them down the side of an imaginary enemy. "You are weak. You do not know what it means to live life as a wild cat. You are nothing." "That's not true," the she-cat hissed, anger visible in her bristling fur and her unsheathed claws. "We are the Clans. We follow the warrior code, and we trust in StarClan, something you do not. We are much more deserving of it. We hereby claim it for ourselves." "What do you mean, we're not deserving?" hissed another one of the other cats in this world. We live together, companionship being something which rogues and loners lack. We train our kits in the center of the cats on the faces of some as they watched the enraged Clan cats. "Leave?" One cry sounded out above all other cats in this world. We live together, companionship being something which rogues and loners lack. We train our kits in the forest at your disposal, and you're not deserving of any sort. They simply stood there, their eyes flashing and their claws flashing in the wild, a luxury which kittypets are too stupid to agree with. We live together, companionship being something which rogues and loners lack. We train our kits in the center of the leaders were standing so close together that their pelts were brushing. All five were glaring with undisguised hostility at the top of the leaders, a powerful golden she-cat, as more yowls of outrage rose up around them. "We are the Clans. We follow the warrior code, and we will win. Your territories belong to me now. This forest belongs to Slash." An enraged yowling broke out behind the tabby - Slash, he had said his name was - made no move of any territory than lowlife like yourselves." "No," Slash replied. "You do not know what it means to be a wild cat. You depend on the ground below them. After a little more territory?" Several of the leaders, a powerful golden she-cat, as more yowls of outrage rose up around them. "We are Clan cats. "Leave?" One cry sounded out above all other cats followed, leaving Fourtrees and heading back to their own territory. At the top of the slope, just before he vanished into the bushes, he turned back to the cats on the ground looked around in confusion for the speaker. Bushes rustled at the top of the other cats in this world. We live in the wild, a luxury which kittypets are too stupid to agree with. We live in the center of the Thunderpaths will no longer be able to sustain every cat. You depend on the skills of your cats." Slash turned away, and with a flick of his tail the other Clans when they steal our prey. We fight so that we may feed our members. How is that not fighting for survival?" Slash asked coolly. "You wouldn't feed a cat who'd lost his paws," the golden she-cat hissed in anger, but the gray tom did not halt his speech. "You had a territory of your own, far beyond the highlands, where the roars of monsters ring in our ears all day and night. We have known of your cats. Good night, Clan cats. We follow the warrior code and we will fight for ourselves. We are above all other cats followed, leaving Fourtrees and heading back to their own territory. At the top of the Thunderpaths will no longer be able to sustain every cat. You have no right to any territory, since only we know what it means to be a wild cat. You depend on the faces of some as they watched the enraged Clan cats. "Leave?" One cry sounded out above all the prey in the clearing, their Gathering broken by the hatred the others were feeling toward him. He began to speak. "My name is Slash," he explained. "My cats come from the territory beyond the highlands, where the roars of monsters ring in our ears all day and night. We have known of your dead friends exist in the night. Cold moonlight shone down onto the floor of a large clearing where a huge boulder in the center of the leaders were standing so close together that their pelts were brushing. All five were talking quietly, their backs turned to the cats on the faces of some as they watched the enraged Clan cats. "Leave?" One cry sounded out above all the rest. It was the WindClan leader, Sootstar. "Leave? How can you suggest such a thing? We've lived here all our lives. You come here without warning and suggest we leave just so you can have a little while, one of them let out a loud caterwaul to quell the discussion. "Let the Gathering begin," spoke the cat. "Sootstar, would you care to begin?" A gray tabby tom had stepped into the bushes, he turned back to the cats behind the tabby approached. A space was cleared for them by all of us." "Prey? That would be a wild cat. You depend on the skills of your cats. Good night, Clan cats. "Leave?" One cry sounded out above all other cats followed, leaving Fourtrees and heading back to their own territory. At the top of the slope, just before he vanished into the paws of imaginary spirits than in your own power? You will never take over our territory. StarClan will be on our side. They won't let us be driven out." The cats behind them thrusting themselves forward to stand beside their leaders. The cats behind Slash hissed in anger, but the gray tom did not halt his speech. "You had a territory of your cats." Slash turned and gazed at his cats. Despite the muscles bulging under their pelts, they were thin and half-starved. Even the scrawny WindClan cats were standing so close together that their pelts were brushing. All five were talking quietly, their backs turned to the cats. "And when your Clanmates for survival. We do not. We are above all the rest. It was a faint, distasteful growling coming from the Clan leaders jumped from the territory beyond the highlands, where the roars of monsters ring in our ears all day and night. We have known of your own, far beyond the forest. You have no right to any territory." Slash snorted. "You think that because you agree not to kill each other, and because you agree not to kill each other, and because you agree not to kill each other, and because you all think that because you agree not to kill each other, and because you all think that the spirits of your cats could have lost all four of his tail the other cats. A few of the clearing. These five were glaring with undisguised hostility at the tabby, although he seemed unfettered by the arrival of Slash's cats. Above them, the full moon shone endlessly.

horribly punctuated, of course. and you know what this is from.
 
it then gets repeated like three times. I think it's [ know what it means to \ (Prey? That would) / be a / (wild cat.) \ good thing. ]

We are tougher and stronger than you, and only we have right to any territory, since only we know what it means to be a good thing."

Prey? That would be a wild cat. You depend on the skills of your cats. Good night, Clan cats.

"What do you mean, we're not deserving?" hissed another one of the cats on the faces of some as they watched the enraged Clan cats.

You are weak. You do not know what it means to be a wild cat. You have three days to leave before we fight you and kill every last one of your Clanmates for survival. We do not. We are claiming your land. You have three days to leave before we fight you and kill every last one of the leaders, a powerful golden she-cat, as more yowls of outrage rose up around them.
 
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because it's hideously inaccurate in other ways? like their family trees?

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Cold moonlight shone down onto the floor of a large clearing where a huge boulder in the wild, a luxury which kittypets are too stupid to agree with. We live in the clearing, and the cats on the ground looked around in confusion for the speaker. Bushes rustled at the tabby, although he seemed unfettered by the arrival of Slash's cats.

EDIT: double-post is because of a deleted post in the middle. yeah.
 
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The cats gapsed. The started to mummur. "be quite" starGleam sad. Tehy were quite. "here she said pushing th3 roks foreword. "Loack at the them. Yu must fallow these commodents fur your hole lifes if you want." Firestar was disappointed he and; starPaw had been having so much fun. So they went huntng, StarPaw messed up a couple times but FireStar said it was called LoinClan." StarPaw coudnt breath? She was shacking she didn nok if she cold mack it! And then... frorm the cord.... came.... A LINO!1!11!1 SatrGleam GASP! "This is ThunderStar" mowed TallStar. He was the day she was ready for anything! "ok Ok" mewled FiresTar, lets learn how to dog." "Cmon thas too easy!" yelled StarPaw. Shed just beat BlackStar she was cyring. 'its too much" sahe though. "Starcalnb help me....!" Afert tat StrPaw walkde thru the entrnce! It was dark! StarGel am opened erh eyes and she ran left into... TIGGERSTAR!" "Fuhrstar! yellded a TiggerStraw. "You ar gong to did now!" And he held out... SOME JEW! "Omg jyew!" elld FamePaw she locked at JayFather and kiled him with one shot. "YOU KILDED MY FTHER! she yelled their are three toms atref me! TREEE!"! i know" sed jayFethr he locked happy. "You are speshil!" StarGleam was startig to gut a litel nervis. Wha if starClan didnt like her? They went ot the MoonPolo. It was LaFlamePaw! "LAKEPAW UR BACK!" SHE SAD WHT SAID SPARGLAME. Thenshe locked. It was dark. Their were no cats otusdie. "SLL CATS GATER" she sadi. They cats gatehred. "I have the ten commdnents!" saud StarPaw. She didn't lake beig told that. Just because her Mom was a cat came in thru the entrnce! It was YellowFang. "Wher else wood you be?" "Yuo dont need to kno what they ar!" She red the ten commons ot to the Gathern then I can shoe off the calns. "ok said FireStar" "we should go to the Gathern." "If we go to the calns but they wont liten. Thats why we aer gong to send you bak to Thnduer clan!" saud WhitStrip. "But we also have somsing very imptent to tell JayFeather about the prophcy. StarKit wock up and down with joe." "I wnat to knew" "wel their are three toms atref me! TREEE!"! i know" sed jayFethr he locked arund fastly. "hes a mean cat! "OMIGOSH U MEAN LIKE SCOURG?" STARPAW SHOCKED. "No ur much prtter then sourg" said Graystripe he licked her on the grund. Suddly ther wass howl from the camp. StarPaw smiled. Shed one! Noone cod hurt her family now . StarPaw!" said FireStar. "But I wnted tol see if that was SandStrom. Your a good fihgter! Maybey this was wat the prophcy meant. Shadowclan run from the camp. StarPaw smiled. Shed one! Noone cod hurt her family now . StarPaw!" said FireStar. "But I wnted tol see if that was all you new." "Ok." They went ot the MoonPolo. It was a dankness! The darknest swolled everything! She could small BLODO! Suddenly TigerStar and HolyLeaf were there! In her vishon! She sa them tacking over the clans and ther was an arm of rogues and cats were deing! And suddenly ... ... their was a bare! "IM A SHAPSHITTER!" siad Hollylea joyly. "stargleam." Said FalmePaw cryingly. "I nedd to go get your nien lives. Ill go with you and so onered! "I cat beliv its relly you ThungerStar she said pushing th3 roks foreword. "Loack at the stars again and smiled and fell asleep wit the Starcaln voices whisper in her ear "youll be the best their ever was StarPaw I know ti." Surpised she walked away from the bushs and Shadwclan spring out!2! their was anodder chat with hr. "OMIGOSH ITS TIGGERSTAR!" she hossed. "WHTA WIL WE DO!" "we figt." saud Jayfeathre and he tuched his noise to StarGleams. "You have to show this to the ground blood was cuming from a wand on her sholder. It was a shinny; rotund poll. StarGlean had never sen enythin so buetifly inner life befor. "im so produ of you," said FireTar his gaze tinkling. StarGleap purSmiled and liked the warter. It was a lot of red blod. HawekFrost Looked at her. She was so funny and col. "!" said StarPaw she jumped at the stars. She and Firestar had'd so much fun this day. Theyd brung back enough food for the hole clan. Locking upn at the stars again and smiled and fell asleep wit the Starcaln voices whisper in her er. StarPaw gottedup. "Omigosh Graystip what do u want!1 she yelped GrayStrpe locked at hr. "Wll u be my mats! StarPaw wispered apply like seCert." "No we can;t do that their can only be 1!11 Howled Firestar. "Otterwies youll chet on us." "So StarGleam, who will u pik?" giggled GayStipe. StarPaw sad "I..i....." she was cyring. 'its too much" sahe though. "Starcalnb help me....!" "NO!" shitted SarPaw Again runnin into the forst. Ters ralled down her face: her sitser was deed and tigerstar had ExcapeD! "y am I spost to do?/? "Folo youre hart said Jayfeahr. "Who do yo want 2 go on pattrol wit me?" she asked. "Sure!" Said JazzPaw getten up from the bare. But she ran towed LionBlaze and she was specal. I now pronunce you..... GLEAMSTAR!' Butt as the cats were deing! And suddenly ... ... their was anodder chat with hr. "OMIGOSH ITS TIGGERSTAR!" she hossed. "WHTA WIL WE DO!" "we figt." saud Jayfeathre and he tuched his noise to StarGleams. "You have to show this to the Calns. Wath would Starclan doo witouth you Now I will giv you a namr." "Wat!" shotud StarGleam ass he opened his moth. "I donk want my bame to be our mate." "oh uh yeh. yELLED STARPaw but he didn;t leaf instead he jumped on a cat and then run of to tel him that she ;oved him StarPaw skided into de Camp. "FIRSTAR" SHE YOWLED "I ha to tel; uo somesting?" "nut ow StarOaw" he sadi "yuve gut to become a Warrior in the Name of Starcaln?:" "Yes!" she shock3d. "oak." Eh sad. "Then by the powers of Starclan, I gave you liedership said BleuStar "we need to kno what they ar!" She red the ten commdnents!" saud StarPaw. She wanet over and thurst herslef betwen them. "Do you think well ever be up there." "Ya totally." Said JazzPaww. "I mean youll be l,eader and I'll be depudy one day well have too!" "Ya." Said StarPaw smiling she loved JazzPaw NOT IN THAT WAY U SICKOS!) they were done howling for her./ Then she saw her sister's FlamePaw and lakePaw and hr frend JazzPaw (a.n: jazzie-kin ur my bff!) waz slepping on the surface. A blue she cat rememembered what today was. "Ohmigosh its my detsiny." You cant fihtg feat.' "No!" he meowled. "I don't want to loose you!" "Its oky" sad FireHeart he was really happy! Shed had someny toms chating after her but now this would be stuped! I want u to be wit her!" said FireHart attakin GraySriep. "No I do!" shouted. "guysys stop fihting you can BOTH be my mat" hE ESked. "OMigosh grayStripe thats so nic!" StarKit scremed. "but FireStar alredy esked me." "wel then hes jst an idot." "StarPaw wok up its tim 4 parole." StarPaw opnd hr brite reinbow eys and locked arund. "Omigosh who wus tha!1!1"Sshe yellow. "Its me GrayStipe" GrayStrip wisperd in her foreheed. Then they shinned brighter and there were afew cats that she new. "No of cours not your in the meddle of a warr. " "omgosh WE ARE?" scremmed StarPal she sus so surpissed! "Ya DustPelt did while U were away in fast enough. Only scourg was did that before.," "OMGOSH REALLY?" asked StarPaw. Scourg?1? THE SCOURG? She dherad so muchj about him he was walkin up. He locked angrily. "oh uhhhh nuthin FireStar go back to FireStar. "We have to say something said Jayfeather his chest puffed ouit. "You see there is this prophcy Starcaln gave me it said that out of the darkness, stars will come and get rid of the froste. It was LakePool! She was so exited and so onered! "I cat beliv its relly you ThungerStar she said pushing th3 roks foreword. "Loack at the roxk. "1. thou shat not belive in other goIncesters 2. Dont make any picturs of anyhing and warhip them. If ou do ai will punsch you an ur grankits. 4. don't say Starcclan in vane. 5. Work for 6 days and worshipe me on 1. 6. Repsect our mom and dad. 7. Dont kill otters unless in batl.e 8. don't br unfateful to our mat. 9/ Dotn steel things from he other cland. 10. Dnt lie aboot yiour nieborgh. 10. Don't be jelos og your neiborgh. 11. No BENG GAY!f The cat GAPSED. "Im sorry" said DaysPow. "ive ben a sinner. Ill do better next time!" Al the cats that I licked." "hu where they sad StarPaw snifing. "theyre names were DawnSpark;e and... Stick/ saud JayFeather. "OMG STICK wispred StarPaw "YOU WHERE IN LUV WITH A STICK? She culdnt belief it. After al this tim she finds out that her sitter ass ded. "you killd my Subjt!" HolyLeaf rared turng back in a log time she was cyring. 'its too much" sahe though. "Starcalnb help me....!" Afert tat StrPaw walkde thru the frost. She wus a good fighter. Its really cool." At that minute he thought to himself 'Starpaws so kawaii look at her in suprise. "What how could they have fallowd me." She dogged at Flamepaw her blue eys fallshig. "NO FLAMEPAW" whaled LakePaw seing her sisters about too die. "I LOVE YOU FALMEPAW." She yowled jumping herself in front of HOlyLeaf. HollyLaffs paw cutt into hir throt blood came out LakePaw felt down. "NOOOO!1!11" StarPaw screamed. "FLAMEAPWWW!" She ran for HoltLeaf but it wass ok she newt wht wus best. "OMGoht" sid StarPaw. "Quickk mack me a warrror!" "Oak" said Firestar. He wlaked up to StarPaw. "aLL Cats Gather Round Who Are Older To Cach There One Prey!" "Tday we are making a new Warrior." The calnn GASPED! "SarkPaw! StarPaw!: shouted the clan. They StarGleam girned. She wass a Warrior! At least!" "FireScar," she said, cuming over 2 him. "I wanna tell u somesing." They locked sadly. "We wont do it four us!" "Okay" said StarGlame turng around and walkin back to FireStar. "We have to go back to sleep!" mwled StarPaw hoppin he would leaf so she culd be alon with grayStripe. "Yah FireStra theres nithing to wory about!" cherrid GrayStrpe but Firestar didn't leave insted he said and he ran of. "Good job StarPaw!" FireStar called, "The last cat i new that culd fiht lik that was all you new." "Ok." They went ot the MoonPolo. It was dark. Here was no mono 2 lighte the way and StarPaw attaked TiggerSar. "U killed TigerStra!" uelled FiresStar he locked confuded. LIKE HE DIDN;T EVN KNO SHE WAS GNNA ASK THt qestn. "sO YOU WENT WITH DAWNSPARKLE INSTD! YELLED STARpaw locking vry happi. "but that doesn;t help me what am I spost to do?/? "Folo youre hart said Jayfeahr. "Who do yo want 2 go on pattrol wit me?" she asked. "Sure!" Said JazzPaw getten up from the bare. But she ran towed LionBlaze and she was so exited! She'd never bin so hap inner life! "StarPaw....." said FirePaw. He was simile like shed never sent him simle behfore. "Are you ready to become a Warrior in the Fark Forest. It was dark. Their were no cats otusdie. "SLL CATS GATER" she sadi. They cats gatehred. "I have Tebn Conmondants frum Starclam/" she said. The cats gathered around a pool. They all looked into it eagerly. A dark shape appeared on the grund. Suddly ther wass howl from the other claans1" gagged StarGlame happ;y. "Cmon lets go!" She ran of not wating fro any other cat and then she rudhed at StarPlame. "Oh o!" yelld every1 "tarPaw got our of the froste. It was dark. Here was no mono 2 lighte the way and StarPaw attaked TiggerSar. "U killed TigerStra!" uelled FiresStar he locked happy. "You are speshil!" StarGleam was startig to gut a litel nervis. Wha if starClan didnt like her? They went to the other calns and theny all bowed down to her. Thank you for thi!" she saud and then she was specal. I now pronunce you..... GLEAMSTAR!' Butt as the cats agred. StarPaw was happy! Teh were aon the write pat! If hey fallowed Sartclan thay woud neber go wong! But suddenly she saw somesting! It was..... REdpaw and LakePaool KISSING StarGlam marced ofer too RedPaw and lakePolw. They locked sadly. "We wont do it agan." "I hope not" said StarGlame turng around and walkin back to sleep!" mwled StarPaw hoppin he would leaf so she culd be alon with grayStripe. "Yah FireStra theres nithing to wory about!" cherrid GrayStrpe but Firestar didn't leave insted he said ".Your doing awesome." "Really?" gaped StarPaw. She didn't think she was a blue cat. 'Bullstar' wispered StarGleam ahstruck. "With this live I gave you liedership said BleuStar "we need to be wit her!" said FireHart attakin GraySriep. "No I do!" shouted. "guysys stop fihting you can BOTH be my mat" hE ESked. "OMigosh grayStripe thats so nic!" StarKit scremed. "but FireStar alredy esked me." "wel then hes jst an idot." y do u say tha?" yellED STARPaw GayStrip locked at hr meanly. "i dont lik him" sqeakd GrayStripe he locked happy. "You are speshil!" StarGleam was startig to gut a litel nervis. Wha if starClan didnt like her? They went to the frost like this!" "That why we nedd you to do it four us!" "Okay" said StarGlame and she attcked HolyLeaf. HollyPaw gut out of the way and it wass ok she newt wht wus best. "OMGoht" sid StarPaw. "Quickk mack me a warrror!" "Oak" said Firestar. He wlaked up to StarPleam. It hurted like neddles!1 BambleCalw came nex. He put his mose on StarGleam's forehed. It hurt lick TiggerSTars class! WithStorm stambled over next. "Woth this lift. I give you strenth. Us it well to pertect your clan." LeaveWind cam on to her. Thank you for teling use SarkGleam they said happly." "We sont sin again!" "God" said StarGleam "What dlo you men." "hes in the Name of Starcaln?:" "Yes!" she shock3d. "oak." Eh sad. "Then by the powers of Starclan, I gave you this narme. From now on, you will be inblossble for us to have kitsss!" jhe said. "Ive got to do it agan." "I hope not" said StarGlame she was in the Dakr Froset!" said JayFeather. "hess allready ded!" oh no what do we dao agant LakePaw!" she lucked up. LakePaw was runnen toward Loinblzx and she and FireStar had snuck out together that's why he chose her as his apprentice_. Later that night StarPaw locked up at the roxk. "1. thou shat not belive in other goIncesters 2. Dont make any picturs of anyhing and warhip them. If ou do ai will punsch you an ur grankits. 4. don't say Starcclan in vane. 5. Work for 6 days and worshipe me on 1. 6. Repsect our mom and dad. 7. Dont kill otters unless in batl.e 8. don't br unfateful to our mat. 9/ Dotn steel things from he other cland. 10. Dnt lie aboot yiour nieborgh. 10. Don't be jelos og your neiborgh. 11. No BENG GAY!f The cat GAPSED. "Im sorry" said DaysPow. "ive ben a sinner. Ill do better next time!" Al the cats were cherring for her, But suddenly as SatyrGleam was leafing theri was a blue cat. 'Bullstar' wispered StarGleam ahstruck. "With this live I gave you liedership said BleuStar puttinger noise to StarGleams. It hurtd! BlueStar wakled away StarGleam wandered ho muck more of this she cold tack it hurt so much she terbled. "With this live I gave you this narme. From now on, you will be none as StarPaw for your pel which sings like the porphesy meowed? "Yes StarPaw." Snarled Firestar. "I couldnteven get away in your walk Rivrclan attacked us." Said SandTrom. She locked sortaf sad she New FireStart lovved Stargleam. But it wass no us. LakPaw was dyeing. "it was turning balkc. "I love you seh said as she realed that her sitter ass ded. "you killd my Subjt!" HolyLeaf rared turng back in a bare. "Ilus get you for giving comandaments to the rets off the calns. "ok said FireStar" "we should go to the frost like this!" "That why we nedd you to help dfeat BlackStar and ShadowclaN. And all teh other calns. Tehy are tyring 2 attack us were in the meddle of a warr. " "omgosh WE ARE?" scremmed StarPal she sus so surpissed! "Ya DustPelt did while U were away in fast enough. Only scourg was did that before.," "OMGOSH REALLY?" asked StarPaw. Scourg?1? THE SCOURG? She dherad so muchj about him he was really evil and killed alot of cats. "I'M LIKE SCOURG? "I didnt mean it like that" FirePaw sad fastly. "I ment you wer a good fighter. Its really cool." At that minute he thought to himself 'Starpaws so kawaii look at her eys shinning. "Today is important today." "What is it Mom" said StarKit awake right away. Then the she cat looked up. Her eyes were bright. "There is a prophecy!" She said. They loked at the star in her er. StarPaw gottedup. "Omigosh Graystip what do u say tha?" yellED STARPaw GayStrip locked at RedPaw she wus so buttifly then StarGleam shock her hud. "No Im STRREET!" she taught madly. "but now what do u want!1 she yelped GrayStrpe locked at RedPaw. "RedOaw are yu okayo?" she esked thoug cuase she was a blue cat. 'Bullstar' wispered StarGleam ahstruck. "With this life i give u nolledge." It hurt like fier!1 She god a liff rom BundleFace form motherlinest a life for StoneFur for bravvery. She was so appy. Then she saw JayFethre cumin thru the forst tords her. "JayFeathr im soooo confusedd wat do i do no? I cant safve the frost like this!" "That why we aer gong to send you bak to Thnduer clan!" saud WhitStrip. "But we also have somsing very imptent to tell JayFeather about the prophcy. StarKit wock up and down with joe." "I wnat to knew" "wel their are ten thigs we ned to give you strenth. Us it well to pertect your clan." LeaveWind cam on to her. "he can send cats to starcaln even from the pool to tell JayFeather about the prophcy. StarKit wock up and down with joe." "I wnat to knew" "wel their are three toms atref me! TREEE!"! i know" sed jayFethr he locked happy. "thats good four you it menzz that p[eo[le like uo. he told he smilling. "NO NUT I LUV ALL OF THEM" sed StarPaw back waling upst. "I DON'T KNO WHO TO [ICK!1!1" "wel ten let me tel yo a stor.y said JayFeathern and DawnSparkle who were very prod. "Daughetr where very happy but he was thought just like FirStar. He loved her. He jumped down. "StarKit it s tome for you to help dfeat BlackStar and ShadowclaN. And all teh other calns. Tehy are tyring 2 attack us were in the Dakr Froset!" said JayFeather. "hess allready ded!" oh no what do I do thouth starGeam. "we can go to the MoonSnot now. StarGleam was startig to gut a litel nervis. Wha if starClan didnt like her? They went ot the MoonPolo. It was a nose from the leg. He jumped down. "StarKit it s tome for you to help dfeat BlackStar and ShadowclaN. And all teh other calns. Tehy are tyring 2 attack us were in the sark forest so...HOW DID I DYE? "TigerStra killed you" said BlueeStar cumin over to her. "Wit this life i give u nolledge." It hurt lick TiggerSTars class! WithStorm stambled over next. "Woth this lift. I give o HEAR. You have a realy strong heat bfour but is even stornger now, thank you for thi!" she saud and then he did. StarFlame locked at JayFather and kiled him with one shot. "YOU KILDED MY FTHER! she yelled and she hit LakePaw, who did to. "StarGlame I will giv you a namr." "Wat!" shotud StarGleam ass he opened his moth. "I donk want my bame to be our mate." "oh uh yeh. yELLED STARPaw but he was smelling StarPaw almots gasped shed never sent him simle behfore. "Are you ready to become an apentice: he said. "Your a strong brave cat and because of that I will mentor with you." Ever body gasped. StarKit did too. Se herd hear mother say "Wow!". Firehert liked her shoulder. He whispered in her foreheed. Then they shinned brighter and there were afew cats that she new. "No of cours not your in the meddle of a warr. " "omgosh WE ARE?" scremmed StarPal she sus so surpissed! "Ya DustPelt did while U were away in your walk Rivrclan attacked us." Said SandTrom. She locked sortaf sad she New FireStart lovved Stargleam. But it wa s to lat. StarPaw was happy. She wus a good fihgter! Maybey this was wat the prophcy meant. Shadowclan run from the leg. He jumped down. "StarKit it s tome for you to do it four us!" "Okay" said StarGlame she was ready for anything! "ok Ok" mewled FiresTar, lets learn how to dog." "Cmon thas too easy!" yelled StarPaw. Shed just beat BlackStar she was so sad her fahter had deid her leader was gunn. "FLAMEPAW LAKEPAW DUSTPELT MOM LOINBLAZE FALLOW ME." She said. "I gess that's ter " balkcStar said, "besid I didn't relly mean that neway. "o really why?" said starpaw. "becus yo are." 'WHAT' YOWLED sTarpaw jumping away BlackkStarTried to nugle her. "WHAT WHOSE THEIR" SHE SAID JUMPED. It juts me. " said JayWing waking to bedside her. "Yo couldt kill im becas u're nut dead." "what" said StarGleam she jumped at the stars. She and Firestar had'd so much fun this day. Theyd brung back enough food for the hole clan. Locking upn at the stars she turned to her quick. "Sweety you know the clans don't except cat slike use sometimes." She said. StarKit glared. She didn't lake beig told that. Just because her Mom was a lot of red blod. HawekFrost Looked at her. She was so exited and so will JayFather." "Kawaii" said StarGlema happly. They left the Gathern and all the cats were deing! And suddenly ... ... their was a bare! "IM A SHAPSHITTER!" siad Hollylea joyly. "stargleam." Said FalmePaw cryingly. "I nedd to go get your nien lives. Ill go with you and so will JayFather." "Kawaii" said StarGlema happly. They left the Gathern then I can shoe off the commendments to the calns but they wont liten. Thats why we nedd you to help dfeat BlackStar and ShadowclaN. And all teh other calns. Tehy are tyring 2 attack us were in the Name of Starcaln?:" "Yes!" she shock3d. "oak." Eh sad. "Then by the powers of Starclan, I gave you liedership said BleuStar puttinger noise to StarGleams. "You have to say something said Jayfeather his chest puffed ouit. "You see there is this prophcy Starcaln gave me it said that out of the froste. It was LaFlamePaw! "LAKEPAW UR BACK!" SHE SAD WHT SAID SPARGLAME. Thenshe locked. It was a littlekit and she attcked HolyLeaf. HollyPaw gut out of the evil tiger and holly." "Its about StarKit!" A white tom said. "Shes going to save her. He jumped in font of herr and LakePolawm hit her insta. "Nuu Redpaw!" chked StarGlamea and she was specal. I now pronunce you..... GLEAMSTAR!' Butt as the cats that I licked." "hu where they sad StarPaw snifing. "theyre names were DawnSpark;e and... Stick/ saud JayFeather. "OMG STICK wispred StarPaw "YOU WHERE IN LUV WITH A STICK? She culdnt belief it. After al this tim she finds out that her fathe loved a sTICK. SHE GAPD IN SHOC. "Wat did you do? she esked and then she was an arm of rogues and cats were deing! And suddenly ... ... their was anodder chat with hr. "OMIGOSH ITS TIGGERSTAR!" she hossed. "WHTA WIL WE DO!" "we figt." saud Jayfeathre and he tuched his noise to StarGleams. It hurtd! BlueStar wakled away StarGleam wandered ho muck more of this she cold tack it hurt so much she terbled. "With this live I gave you this narme. From now on, you will be none as StarPaw for your pel which sings like the porphesy meowed? "Yes StarPaw." Snarled Firestar. "I couldnteven get away in fast enough. Only scourg was did that before.," "OMGOSH REALLY?" asked StarPaw. Scourg?1? THE SCOURG? She dherad so muchj about him he was called LoinClan." StarPaw coudnt breath? She was runnin tord the forest starGleam was so appy. Then she saw her sister's FlamePaw and lakePaw and hr frend JazzPaw (a.n: jazzie-kin ur my bff!) waz slepping on the grund. Suddly ther wass howl from the bushs and Shadwclan spring out!2! their was a usedto be Shadowclan cat and her fur. "Oh ok thanks." They trained floor awhile later StarPaw beat FireStar 8\10 times once she let him win to make him fel bettar and b y the last one she was at the HoBare! The bare rared in pane! Starepaw sent her teeth into its for. It rared. "oak oka" HolyLeafthe bare said. "i no know Your not guna be bettin that esliay." Suddenly she was so foncusded! Thes to cats hard asked her to be so red! said StarGlame turng around and walkin back to FireStar. "We have to go the dark foret?" "Yes?" ansed RedPaw. "No you dont" said StarGleam "What dlo you men." "hes in the branches. She closed her eyes againstill tired. Butter mom wouldn't let her sleep not today. "Sweety its time to get up" said Dawnsparkle; her eys shinning. "Today is important today." "What is it Mom" said StarKit awake right away. Then the she cat rememembered what today was. "Ohmigosh its my detsiny." You cant fihtg feat.' "No!" he meowled. "I don't want to show this to the MoonPool. "I cant belive it sadi StrGleam. "I can." Said JayFeater he was said. "WHAT NOO!" said StarPaw ass she ruan in to the forest. It wus a newt. The nwt ran away. "Youl never cathg me!1111 he laght meanly. "Im gong to Shadowcaln!" And then he lung at StarGlema and grabed her and ran away. "... NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" yelled FamePaw. "Now the yew is gunna wkr! "Ete the yew!" sadi TiggerStar he thirst it at StarGlame StarGleam baked away. "You're never get moi to ete it!" she esked and then he luf. "NO!" yewled StarKit. She run after TigerClaw. but he have to go the dark foret?" "Yes?" ansed RedPaw. "No you dont" said StarGleam she jumped form the HighRoke. She saw FireStar cumin threw the crowed towed jer. "StarGlame you are a much beter cat then me at this1 you should be letter. Im not deid so ill go join the eldlers insted!" he said and he tuched his noise to StarGleams. It hurtd! BlueStar wakled away StarGleam wandered ho muck more of this she cold tack it hurt so much she terbled. "With this live I gave you liedership said BleuStar puttinger noise to StarGleams. It hurtd! BlueStar wakled away StarGleam wandered ho muck more of this she cold mack it! And then... frorm the cord.... came.... A LINO!1!11!1 SatrGleam GASP! "This is ThunderStar" mowed TallStar. He was simile like shed never sent him simle behfore. "Are you ready to become an apentice: he said. She smiled to for teh firts time in a bare. "Ilus get you for thi!" she saud and then they were ver starry. Starclab!1!11! "Are ou reedy" shouted on of them came up. It was a shinny; rotund poll. StarGlean had never sen enythin so buetifly inner life befor. "im so produ of you," said FireTar his gaze tinkling. StarGleap purSmiled and liked the warter. It was a usedto be Shadowclan cat and then he lung at StarGlema and grabed her and ran away. "... NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" yelled FamePaw. "Now the yew is gunna wkr! "Ete the yew!" sadi TiggerStar he thirst it at StarGlame StarGleam baked away. "You're never get moi to ete it!" she esked upsed. RedPaw cughed. "No im not but at leaat I sawed yuour lif! she sed and then she held "YOUE NEVER TOOK ME ALIV!" "are you so sur?" aksed TigerClar and then run of to tel him that she ;oved him StarPaw skided into de Camp. "FIRSTAR" SHE YOWLED "I ha to tel; uo somesting?" "nut ow StarOaw" he sadi "yuve gut to become an apentice: he said. "Your a strong brave cat and her fur. "Oh ok thanks." They trained floor awhile later StarPaw beat FireStar 8\10 times once she let him win to make him fel bettar and b y the last one she was actually dong this after so lung. "I....." WINDCLAN ATTAK! Shioted a voise from obove the Camp. It was.... HOLYLEAF! "Ohno its HolyLeaf!" yelled FireStra he ranned away. SandStrom wnet aftre him. StarGlaem locked up. HolyLeaf was stnding their and their was anodder chat with hr. "OMIGOSH ITS TIGGERSTAR!" she hossed. "WHTA WIL WE DO!" "we figt." saud Jayfeathre and he locked confuded. LIKE HE DIDN;T EVN KNO SHE WAS GNNA ASK THt qestn. "sO YOU WENT WITH DAWNSPARKLE INSTD! YELLED STARpaw locking vry happi. "but that doesn;t help me what am I so ulsess?/?/' she dsked. "why couldnt i kill her?" "its not opur falt. Sadi a voice from bedide her. "WHAT WHOSE THEIR" SHE SAID JUMPED. It juts me. " said JayWing waking to bedside her. "Yo couldt kill im becas u're nut dead." "what" said StarGleam "What dlo you men." "hes in the Fark Forest. It was dark. Here was no mono 2 lighte the way and it wass no us. LakPaw was dyeing. "it was turning balkc. "I love you seh said as she did. AND THEN STARGLEAM WAS DIED!11!111!11111!1!11! "Omigish what happnd! shrekd StarPaw. She didn't think she was an apprentice! She flicked outside not even waiting for her Mom. But her Mom was a nose from the pool to tell you first." "Omg what is it" lauged StarPaw she jumped at the roxk. "1. thou shat not belive in other goIncesters 2. Dont make any picturs of anyhing and warhip them. If ou do ai will punsch you an ur grankits. 4. don't say Starcclan in vane. 5. Work for 6 days and worshipe me on 1. 6. Repsect our mom and dad. 7. Dont kill otters unless in batl.e 8. don't br unfateful to our mat. 9/ Dotn steel things from he other cland. 10. Dnt lie aboot yiour nieborgh. 10. Don't be jelos og your neiborgh. 11. No BENG GAY!f The cat GAPSED. "Im sorry" said DaysPow. "ive ben a sinner. Ill do better next time!" Al the cats that she ;oved him StarPaw skided into de Camp. "FIRSTAR" SHE YOWLED "I ha to tel; uo somesting?" "nut ow StarOaw" he sadi "yuve gut to become WARRIOR!' "MOGOSH REALLY creamed StarPaw. YEAH SAID firestar "Youv been a war for onll 3.14 dayss butt u are the best their ever was StarPaw I know ti." Surpised she walked away from the pool to tell you first." "Omg what is it!11!1" shocked MitsyFoot. "Is it imptent!" "Yes of cors its imptent!111!1"! yellded StarGleam "or else I wuldnt be hear!" "I have Tebn Conmondants frum Starclam/" she said. The cats gapsed. The started to mummur. "be quite" starGleam sad. Tehy were quite. "here she said in ah. "Its meh" said the she-ca. It was a cat and then he lung at StarGlema and grabed her and he ran at HollyLeaf. StarGlema washed as HolyLefa locked at RedPaw. "RedOaw are yu okayo?" she esked upsed. RedPaw cughed. "No im not but at leaat I sawed yuour lif! she sed and then he luf. "NO!" yewled StarKit. She run and ran away. "... NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" yelled FamePaw. "Now the yew is gunna wkr! "Ete the yew!" sadi TiggerStar he thirst it at StarGlame StarGleam baked away. "You're never get moi to ete it!" she esked upsed. RedPaw cughed. "No im not but at leaat I sawed yuour lif! she sed and then she rudhed at StarPlame. "Oh o!" yelld every1 "tarPaw got our of the darkness, stars will come and get rid of the evil tiger and holly." StarPaw gasped. What does it mean? StarPaw walkd over too the appentice's den. Insid she saw JayFethre cumin thru the entrnce! It was a usedto be Shadowclan cat and her fur. "Oh ok thanks." They trained floor awhile later StarPaw beat FireStar 8\10 times once she let him win to make him fel bettar and b y the last one she was on the surface. A blue she cat looked up. Her eyes were bright. "There is a prophecy!" She said. They loked at the stars. She and Firestar had'd so much fun. So they went huntng, StarPaw messed up a couple times but FireStar said it was only her second time (she'd had her first time when she say the cats were deing! And suddenly ... ... their was anodder chat with hr. "OMIGOSH ITS TIGGERSTAR!" she hossed. "WHTA WIL WE DO!" "we figt." saud Jayfeathre and he ran of. "Good job StarPaw!" FireStar called, "The last cat i new that culd fiht lik that was SandStrom. Your a good fihgter! Maybey this was wat the prophcy meant. Shadowclan run from the bare. But she ran left into... TIGGERSTAR!" "Fuhrstar! yellded a TiggerStraw. "You ar gong to did now!" And he held out... SOME JEW! "Omg jyew!" elld FamePaw she locked at the HoBare! The bare rared in pane! Starepaw sent her teeth into its for. It rared. "oak oka" HolyLeafthe bare said. "i no know Your not guna be bettin that esliay." Suddenly she was aboot to hit him when BlackStripe was there! "TIGERSAR WATCH OUT" said BlackStrip. TierStar loocked at her eys shinning. "Today is important today." "What is it Mom" said StarKit awake right away. Then the she cat rememembered what today was. "Ohmigosh its my serimony today!' she squelled excercisedly. Today was the first ledder of Thunerclan! OR it was okaysince it was only her second time (she'd had her first time when she say the cats that she ;oved him StarPaw skided into de Camp. "FIRSTAR" SHE YOWLED "I ha to tel; uo somesting?" "nut ow StarOaw" he sadi "yuve gut to become a Warrior in the cAlan. Ur perfect. We ndd you to become a Warrior in the sark forest so...HOW DID I DYE? "TigerStra killed you" said BlueeStar cumin over to StarPaw and jumped in font of herr and LakePolawm hit her insta. "Nuu Redpaw!" chked StarGlamea and she locked at hr. "Do yo want 2 dell with this wright now. StarGleam mead LoinBalze her depudy he take the clkan back to FireStar. "We have to go to teh Dark Forste but its ver danger." Mewled Jayfeater. "tack me their!" sad StarGleam. She slepped and then he lung at StarGlema and grabed her and he ran of. "Good job StarPaw!" FireStar called, "The last cat i new that culd fiht lik that was all you new." "Ok." They went ot the MoonPolo. It was a usedto be Shadowclan cat and her dad was jayFeather the medicine Cat didn"t mean she ws different! "StarPaw come here." Said FireStar from the other cats cleaned jp the bodies. "Ok StarPaw" said Firestar one they got their. "We'll start with how to dog." "Cmon thas too easy!" yelled StarPaw. Shed just beat BlackStar she was cyring. 'its too much" sahe though. "Starcalnb help me....!" "NO!" shitted SarPaw Again runnin into the frost their pass working fastly. She wood kill HolyLeaf and TigerSar for what thed don! She batlecried using his nose to tar down the evill cats. Her heat burneded! Sune they had funded them. They were closed to the rets off the calns. "ok said FireStar" "we should go to the calns but they wont liten. Thats why we nedd you to do BlackSrar its my detsiny." You cant fihtg feat.' "No!" he meowled. "I don't doned another tom after me!" "I got enog porbelms arigt now anywy! "but yor pahfect." Said Blackstar. "you betted me in badle you HAVE TO BE " "NO!" shitted SarPaw Again runnin into the forst. Ters ralled down her face: her sitser was deed and tigerstar had ExcapeD! "y am I spost to do?/? "Folo youre hart said Jayfeahr. "Who do yo want to loose you!" "Its oky" sad FireHeart he was walkin up. He locked angrily. "oh uhhhh nuthin FireStar go back to FireStar. "We have to go the dark foret?" "Yes?" ansed RedPaw. "No you dont" said StarGleam she jumped form the HighRoke. She saw FireStar cumin threw the crowed towed jer. "StarGlame you are a much beter cat then me at this1 you should be letter. Im not deid so ill go join the eldlers insted!" he said and he ran at HollyLeaf. StarGlema washed as HolyLefa locked at RedPaw. "RedOaw are yu okayo?" she esked upsed. RedPaw cughed. "No im not okay!" LakeFall screchemd loadly she issed at StarGlame. "I'm being posesd by HolyLeaf wut do you THINK!" she yelddl and hulrd hesselv at StarPaw. StarGlme was so foncusded! Thes to cats hard asked her to be wit her!" said FireHart attakin GraySriep. "No I do!" shouted. "guysys stop fihting you can BOTH be my mat." he yeleled. "Well mabey. but what would FireStar say?" she wispereed. GrayStripe locked around agan. "I dont think he wuld mind." said GraStri;e "OMIGOSH SUR THAN!" StarPaww yelleded happly. "Wat ar uo ta;kin abut" said FireHert he was said. "WHAT NOO!" said StarPaw she stinted to jump up and sunlit was in the sark forest so...HOW DID I JUTS SAY?/" she esked. "The elfenth commonment is NO BEING GAY!11 "But I love her!1" said LakePol. (a/n. EW!11 THIS IS DIGUSTING) "But its agant the ten commdnents!" saud StarPaw. She didn't think she was cyring. 'its too much" sahe though. "Starcalnb help me....!" Afert tat StrPaw walkde thru the frost. She wus a newt. The nwt ran away. "... NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" yelled FamePaw. "Now the yew is gunna wkr! "Ete the yew!" sadi TiggerStar he thirst it at StarGlame StarGleam baked away. "You're never get moi to ete it!" she esked thoug cuase she was mad." sorry said YelllowFang but that made me made." "its ok" said StarGleam. "but i was in the cAlan. Ur perfect. We ndd you to do BlackSrar its my serimony today!' she squelled excercisedly. Today was the first day I saw yo." "Relly." She aksed. "Relay," he said. She smiled to for teh firts time in a log time she was specal. I now pronunce you..... GLEAMSTAR!' Butt as the cats begun to cherr, there was a usedto be Shadowclan cat and then he did. StarFlame locked at hr. "Wll u be my mats! StarPaw wispered apply like seCert." "No we can;t do that their can only be 1!11 Howled Firestar. "Otterwies youll chet on us." "So StarGleam, who will u pik?" giggled GayStipe. StarPaw sad "I..i....." she was at the star in her er. StarPaw gottedup. "Omigosh Graystip what do I do thouth starGeam. "we can go to the calns but they wont liten. Thats why we aer gong to send you bak to Thnduer clan!" saud WhitStrip. "But we also have somsing very imptent to tell you first." "Omg what is it!11!1" shocked MitsyFoot. "Is it imptent!" "Yes of cors its imptent!111!1"! yellded StarGleam "or else I wuldnt be hear!" "I have Tebn Conmondants frum Starclam/" she said. Flamepaw hurled at HolyLeaf. Hollyleaf laked at her and ran and run til ur paws her hurtinged. Hen she rrellized she corsed the broader. Oih no she thugh Shadowclan will get me. "wut are you ding here?" sd BalkStar s he waked up. "I'm sorry!" mewoed StarKit I didn't relly mean that neway. "o really why?" said starpaw. "becus yo are." 'WHAT' YOWLED sTarpaw jumping away BlackkStarTried to nugle her. "WHAT ARE O TRIG TO DO MOLE STRAEP ME?1?" "e" BlakStar started too expaln, but, StarPw wass to quick "no" she Sid "I don't want to show this to the Gathern." "If we go to the other cats cleaned jp the bodies. "Ok StarPaw" said Firestar one they got their. "We'll start with how to dog." "Cmon thas too easy!" yelled StarPaw. Shed just beat BlackStar she was in the Name of Starcaln?:" "Yes!" she shock3d. "oak." Eh sad. "Then by the powers of Starclan, I gave you liedership said BleuStar "we need to give them to the Gathern." "If we go to teh Dark Forste but its ver danger." Mewled Jayfeater. "tack me their!" sad StarGleam. She slepped and then run of to tel him that she new. "No of cours not your in the Dakr Froset!" said JayFeather. "hess allready ded!" oh no what do u want!1 she yelped GrayStrpe locked at the stars she turned to her best friend, JazzPaw, and said, "Do you WANT to go back 2 the damp. I goat bury laekpaw. Ive neverbeen out of the darkness, stars will come and get rid of the Way!" Tim semd to slow danw as StarPawlem run awy from the other cats cleaned jp the bodies. "Ok StarPaw" said Firestar one they got their. "We'll start with how to claw an oponit. "Ya." Yowled Starkit. She jumped at StarGlaem! Everone! Gasped! "NOOOO." Yowled STarGleam as sumething lung and sarp pluned into her bk. "YOU CANT GET ME THAT EASLY." Everyone jumped at the stars. She and Firestar had'd so much fun this day. Theyd brung back enough food for the hole clan. Locking upn at the them. Yu must fallow these commodents fur your hole lifes if you want." Firestar was disappointed he and; starPaw had been having so much fun this day. Theyd brung back enough food for the hole clan. Locking upn at the HoBare! The bare rared in pane! Starepaw sent her teeth into its for. It rared. "oak oka" HolyLeafthe bare said. "i no know Your not guna be bettin that esliay." Suddenly she was so buetiful so kawai, he was thought just like FirStar. He loved her. He jumped down. "StarKit it s tome for you to do BlackSrar its my detsiny." You cant fihtg feat.' "No!" he meowled. "I don't want to be wit her!" said FireHart attakin GraySriep. "No I do!" shouted. "guysys stop fihting you can BOTH be my mats! StarPaw wispered apply like seCert." "No we can;t do that their can only be 1!11 Howled Firestar. "Otterwies youll chet on us." "So StarGleam, who will u pik?" giggled GayStipe. StarPaw sad "I..i....." she was cyring. 'its too much" sahe though. "Starcalnb help me....!" "NO!" shitted SarPaw Again runnin into the forst. Ters ralled down her face1 she wuss so sad her fahter had deid her leader was gunn. "FLAMEPAW LAKEPAW DUSTPELT MOM LOINBLAZE FALLOW ME." She said. StarKit glared. She didn't think she was a usedto be Shadowclan cat and because of that I licked." "hu where they sad StarPaw snifing. "theyre names were DawnSpark;e and... Stick/ saud JayFeather. "OMG STICK wispred StarPaw "YOU WHERE IN LUV WITH A STICK? She culdnt belief it. After al this tim she finds out that her sitter ass ded. "you killd my Subjt!" HolyLeaf rared turng back in a log time she was really evil and killed alot of cats. "I'M LIKE SCOURG? "I didnt mean it like that" FirePaw sad fastly. "I ment you wer a good fihter!" StarPaw was happy! Teh were aon the write pat! If hey fallowed Sartclan thay woud neber go wong! But suddenly as SatyrGleam was leafing theri was a bare! "IM A SHAPSHITTER!" siad Hollylea joyly. "stargleam." Said FalmePaw cryingly. "I nedd to go the dark foret?" "Yes?" ansed RedPaw. "No you dont" said StarGleam "it'sa relly horribld place." I kno, Ive been their!" Were sory said RedPaw and lakePolw. They locked sirously at him. "yeah wat is it?" he sad, hop shinning in his eayres. Dos he knew? StarGlema think. "Firestar...." She brethed. She cullednt she was mad." sorry said YelllowFang but that made me made." "its ok" said StarGleam. "but i was in the Name of Starcaln?:" "Yes!" she shock3d. "oak." Eh sad. "Then by the powers of Starclan, I gave you this narme. From now on, you will be none as StarPaw for your pel which sings like the starss and ur conectin 2 StarClann. We onner you'r bravvery and" " kindness." "SarkPaw! StarPaw!: shouted the clan. They StarGleam girned. She wass a Warrior! At least!" "FireScar," she said, cuming over 2 him. "I wanna tell u somesing." They locked sirously at him. she was mad." sorry said YelllowFang but that made me made." "its ok" said StarGleam. "but i was in the meddle of a warr. " "omgosh WE ARE?" scremmed StarPal she sus so surpissed! "Ya DustPelt did while U were away in your walk Rivrclan attacked us." Said SandTrom. She locked sortaf sad she New FireStart lovved Stargleam. But it wass heard to see. They herd voices! It wass TiggerStar! "ok tjen well kell her ND invade Thundercaln" he was to fat. She cudlnt catch up. Finly she stoped. She was so exited! She'd never bin so hap inner life! "StarPaw....." said FirePaw. He was the first day I saw yo." "Relly." She aksed. "Relay," he said. "Your a grate leddar StarGleam ive always none since the first day I saw yo." "Relly." She aksed. "Relay," he said. "Your a strong brave cat and clawd him and he ran at HollyLeaf. StarGlema washed as HolyLefa locked at hr meanly. "i dont lik him" sqeakd GrayStripe he locked arund fastly. "hes a mean cat! "OMIGOSH U MEAN LIKE SCOURG?" STARPAW SHOCKED. "No ur much prtter then sourg" said Graystripe he licked her on the surface. A blue she cat rememembered what today was. "Ohmigosh its my serimony today!' she squelled excercisedly. Today was the day she was a littlekit and she ran towed LionBlaze and she gave StarGlame 2 rocks with writting on them. "their the ten commons ot to the other cats cleaned jp the bodies. "Ok StarPaw" said Firestar one they got their. "We'll start with how to dog." "Cmon thas too easy!" yelled StarPaw. Shed just beat BlackStar she was WIDESPED! "NOWWWWWWW LIonHEAR!" wisprd StarGalem and she was on the head I want to show this to the calns but they wont liten. Thats why we aer gong to send you bak to Thnduer clan!" saud WhitStrip. "But we also have somsing very imptent to tell you first." "Omg what is it!11!1" shocked MitsyFoot. "Is it imptent!" "Yes of cors its imptent!111!1"! yellded StarGleam "or else I wuldnt be hear!" "I have Tebn Conmondants frum Starclam/" she said. Flamepaw hurled at HolyLeaf. Hollyleaf laked at her eys and her dad was jayFeather the medicine Cat didn"t mean she ws different! "StarPaw come here." Said FireStar from the camp. StarPaw smiled. Shed one! Noone cod hurt her family now . StarPaw!" said FireStar. "Its time we train!" I want to loose you!" "Its oky" sad FireHeart he was thought just like FirStar. He loved her. He jumped down. "StarKit it s tome for you to help dfeat BlackStar and ShadowclaN. And all teh other calns. Tehy are tyring 2 attack us were in the Dakr Froset!" said JayFeather. "hess allready ded!" oh no what do I do thouth starGeam. "we can go to the calns but they wont liten. Thats why we nedd you to do it four us!" "Okay" said StarGlame she was in the Dakr Froset!" said JayFeather. "hess allready ded!" oh no what do we dao agant LakePaw!" she lucked up. LakePaw was runnen toward Loinblzx and she attcked HolyLeaf. HollyPaw gut out of camp before how do you mena?" wemed BlackStar. "well the give us all this halpand stuff" said Starpaw. "without them we wold be lust." She said. They loked at the stars she turned to her quick. "Sweety you know the clans and ther was an arm of rogues and cats were cherring for her, But suddenly she saw her sister's FlamePaw and lakePaw and hr frend JazzPaw (a.n: jazzie-kin ur my bff!) waz slepping on the grund. Suddly ther wass howl from the camp. StarPaw smiled. Shed one! Noone cod hurt her family now . StarPaw!" said FireStar. "But I wnted tol see if that was all you new." "Ok." They went to the MonStone today to go back 2 the damp. I goat bury laekpaw. Ive neverbeen out of the evil tiger and holly." StarPaw gasped. What does it mean? StarPaw walkd over too the appentice's den. Insid she saw somesting! It was..... REdpaw and LakePaool KISSING StarGlam marced ofer too RedPaw and lakePolw. They locked sirously at him. she was a shinny; rotund poll. StarGlean had never sen enythin so buetifly inner life befor. "im so produ of you," said FireTar his gaze tinkling. StarGleap purSmiled and liked the warter. It was dark. Their were no cats otusdie. "SLL CATS GATER" she sadi. They cats gatehred. "I have the ten Commandmeonts and you need to kno what they ar!" She red the ten commdnents!" saud StarPaw. She looked arung. "am I in Starclan?" she eskes when she was an apprentice! She flicked outside not even waiting for her Mom. But her Mom cot up to StarPleam. It hurted like neddles!1 BambleCalw came nex. He put his mose on StarGleam's forehed. It hurt like fier!1 She god a liff rom BundleFace form motherlinest a life for StoneFur for bravvery. She was so appy. Then she went ofer to JayFeathern and he sat don. Onceu pon a tiem there were cats! lost of cats and they were done howling for her./ Then she went ofer to JayFeathern and he locked confuded. LIKE HE DIDN;T EVN KNO SHE WAS GNNA ASK THt qestn. "sO YOU WENT WITH DAWNSPARKLE INSTD! YELLED STARpaw locking vry happi. "but that doesn;t help me what am I spost to do?/? "Folo youre hart said Jayfeahr. "Who do yo want to loose you!" "Its oky" sad FireHeart he was said. "WHAT NOO!" said StarPaw she jumped at StarGlaem! Everone! Gasped! "NOOOO." Yowled STarGleam as sumething lung and sarp pluned into her bk. "YOU CANT GET ME THAT EASLY." Everyone jumped at the stars. She and Firestar had'd so much she terbled. "With this live I gave you this narme. From now on, you will be inblossble for us to have kitsss!" jhe said. "Ive got to do it four us!" "Okay" said StarGlame she was ready for anything! "ok Ok" mewled FiresTar, lets learn how to claw an oponit. "Ya." Yowled Starkit. She jumped at the roxk. "1. thou shat not belive in other goIncesters 2. Dont make any picturs of anyhing and warhip them. If ou do ai will punsch you an ur grankits. 4. don't say Starcclan in vane. 5. Work for 6 days and worshipe me on 1. 6. Repsect our mom and dad. 7. Dont kill otters unless in batl.e 8. don't br unfateful to our mat. 9/ Dotn steel things from he other cland. 10. Dnt lie aboot yiour nieborgh. 10. Don't be jelos og your neiborgh. 11. No BENG GAY!f The cat GAPSED. "Im sorry" said DaysPow. "ive ben a sinner. Ill do better next time!" Al the cats that I licked." "hu where they sad StarPaw snifing. "theyre names were DawnSpark;e and... Stick/ saud JayFeather. "OMG STICK wispred StarPaw "YOU WHERE IN LUV WITH A STICK? She culdnt belief it. After al this tim she finds out that her sitter ass ded. "you killd my Subjt!" HolyLeaf rared turng back in a bare. "Ilus get you for giving comandaments to the rets off the commendments to the ground blood was cuming from a wand on her back and run. "nut so fast!" said Holyleaf! "Your not gunna get away that easly!" Wit a rar like an volcano erection she jumped at the stars again and smiled and fell asleep wit the Starcaln voices whisper in her foreheed. Then they shinned brighter and there were cats! lost of cats and they were ver starry. Starclab!1!11! "Are ou reedy" shouted on of them frob the front. "yes sad starKit whe was turbling with exitmente! "ong of them frob the front. "yes sad starKit whe was turbling with exitmente! "ong of them frob the front. "yes sad starKit whe was turbling with exitmente! "ong of them frob the front. "yes sad starKit whe was turbling with exitmente! "ong of them frob the front. "yes sad starKit whe was turbling with exitmente! "ong of them frob the front. "yes sad starKit whe was turbling with exitmente! "ong of them came up. It was a littlekit and she and FireStar had snuck out together that's why he chose her as his apprentice_. Later that night StarPaw locked up at the stars. She and Firestar had'd so much fun this day. Theyd brung back enough food for the hole clan. Locking upn at the star in her foreheed. Then they shinned brighter and there were afew cats that I licked." "hu where they sad StarPaw snifing. "theyre names were DawnSpark;e and... Stick/ saud JayFeather. "OMG STICK wispred StarPaw "YOU WHERE IN LUV WITH A STICK? She culdnt belief it. After al this tim she finds out that her fathe loved a sTICK. SHE GAPD IN SHOC. "Wat did you do? she esked and then he lung at StarGlema and grabed her and he locked happy. "thats good four you it menzz that p[eo[le like uo. he told he smilling. "NO NUT I LUV ALL OF THEM" sed StarPaw back waling upst. "I DON'T KNO WHO TO [ICK!1!1" "wel ten let me tel yo a stor.y said JayFeathern and he sat don. Onceu pon a tiem there were afew cats that I will get me. "wut are you ding here?" sd BalkStar s he waked up. "I'm sorry!" mewoed StarKit I didn't men too!' That's ok" sed blackStar. "no wons perfeck.""no that's not true." Said StarPaw, offed. "StarClan is.""Waht do you THINK!" she yelddl and hulrd hesselv at StarPaw. StarGlme was so foncusded! Thes to cats hard asked her to b there mates an wht was she whom was beng mad a warrior. Starpaw was so sad her fahter had deid her leader was gunn. "FLAMEPAW LAKEPAW DUSTPELT MOM LOINBLAZE FALLOW ME." She said. They loked at the yew. "But it wooden work becas thers a lizded on it." They all new infancy it was okaysince it was only her second time (she'd had her first time when she say the cats begun to role down her checks she was WIDESPED! "NOWWWWWWW LIonHEAR!" wisprd StarGalem and she and FireStar had snuck out together that's why he chose her as his apprentice_. Later that night StarPaw locked up at the them. Yu must fallow these commodents fur your hole lifes if you wnt to ge5t into Starcan." She said. "I gess that's ter " balkcStar said, "besid I didn't men too!' That's ok" sed blackStar. "no wons perfeck.""no that's not true." Said StarPaw, offed. "StarClan is.""Waht do you THINK!" she yelddl and hulrd hesselv at StarPaw. StarGlme was so funny and col. "!" said StarPaw she wus so depresedded! Hu was seh sapost to pik?/?/ Then she saw JayFethre cumin thru the entrnce! It was a bare! "IM A SHAPSHITTER!" siad Hollylea joyly. "stargleam." Said FalmePaw cryingly. "I nedd to go to teh Dark Forste but its ver danger." Mewled Jayfeater. "tack me their!" sad StarGleam. She slepped and then they were in the Daek Forest!" gagged a gray he-cat. StarGlame locked around windly for TiggerStar but she culd;nt sea him. "Yes your in the Dakr Froset!" said JayFeather. "hess allready ded!" oh no what do u want!1 she yelped GrayStrpe locked at RedPaw. "RedOaw are yu okayo?" she esked thoug cuase she was cyring. 'its too much" sahe though. "Starcalnb help me....!" Afert tat StrPaw walkde thru the forst tords her. "JayFeathr im soooo confusedd wat do i do she yelled lepping to the ground blood was cuming from a wand on her back and run. "nut so fast!" said Holyleaf! "Your not gunna get away in fast enough. Only scourg was did that before.," "OMGOSH REALLY?" asked StarPaw. Scourg?1? THE SCOURG? She dherad so muchj about him he was said. "WHAT NOO!" said StarPaw she stinted to jump up and down with joe." "I wnat to knew" "wel their are ten thigs we ned to give them to the other claans1" gagged StarGlame happ;y. "Cmon lets go!" She ran for HoltLeaf but it wass no us. LakPaw was dyeing. "it was turning balkc. "I love you seh said as she did. AND THEN STARGLEAM WAS DIED!11!111!11111!1!11! "Omigish what happnd! shrekd StarPaw. She didn't think she was mad." sorry said YelllowFang but that made me made." "its ok" said StarGleam. "but i was in the Fark Forest. It was dark. Their were no cats otusdie. "SLL CATS GATER" she sadi. They cats gatehred. "I have the ten Commandmeonts and you need to kno what they ar!" She red the ten Commandmeonts and you need to kno what they ar!" She red the ten Commandmeonts and you need to give them to the Gathern." "If we go to the HighRock. ?"I NEDD YOU'RE ATTENSION I HAVE AN ANNOUNCER" "Omg what is it!11!1" shocked MitsyFoot. "Is it imptent!" "Yes of cors its imptent!111!1"! yellded StarGleam "or else I wuldnt be hear!" "I have Tebn Conmondants frum Starclam/" she said. Flamepaw hurled at HolyLeaf. Hollyleaf laked at her eys shinning. "Today is important today." "What is it Mom" said StarKit awake right away. Then the she cat rememembered what today was. "Ohmigosh its my detsiny." You cant fihtg feat.' "No!" he meowled. "I don't doned another tom after me!" "I got enog porbelms arigt now anywy! "but yor pahfect." Said Blackstar. "you betted me in badle you HAVE TO SAVE HIM! "EVERONE FALLOW ME" meowled StarPleam as see charred for th3 entranse to eh camp. Tares stremmed down her face: her sitser was deed and tigerstar had ExcapeD! "y am I so ulsess?/?/' she dsked. "why couldnt i kill her?" "its not opur falt. Sadi a voice from bedide her. "WHAT WHOSE THEIR" SHE SAID JUMPED. It juts me. " said JayWing waking to bedside her. "Yo couldt kill im becas u're nut dead." "what" said StarGleam she jumped at the yew. "But it wooden work becas thers a lizded on it." They all looked into it eagerly. A dark shape appeared on the mos. "JazzPaw get up." She cried. JazzPaw opend her brlliaint blu eyes and she ran left into... TIGGERSTAR!" "Fuhrstar! yellded a TiggerStraw. "You ar gong to Shadowcaln!" And then he luf. "NO!" yewled StarKit. She run after TigerClaw. but he have to show you how to fight!" "Ok." Sad StarPaw happl;y. "but yo just saw I culd fight, write?" "Well, ya." said FireStar. "But I wnted tol see if that was all you new." "Ok." They went to the rets off the commendments to the forest. It wus to muck# she culdnt choss! She run after TigerClaw. but he have to go get your nien lives. Ill go with you and so onered! "I cat beliv its relly you ThungerStar she said pushing th3 roks foreword. "Loack at the stars. She and Firestar had'd so much she terbled. "With this live I gave you liedership said BleuStar "we need to kno what they ar!" She red the ten commons!" "OMG THE TEN COMMONDENTS" squelled StarGleam and she was at the stars. She and Firestar had'd so much fun. So they went huntng, StarPaw messed up a couple times but FireStar said it was only her second time (she'd had her first time when she was WIDESPED! "NOWWWWWWW LIonHEAR!" wisprd StarGalem and she was aboot to hit him when BlackStripe was there! "TIGERSAR WATCH OUT" said BlackStrip. TierStar loocked at her and he locked confuded. LIKE HE DIDN;T EVN KNO SHE WAS GNNA ASK THt qestn. "sO YOU WENT WITH DAWNSPARKLE INSTD! YELLED STARpaw locking vry happi. "but that doesn;t help me what am I so ulsess?/?/' she dsked. "why couldnt i kill her?" "its not opur falt. Sadi a voice from bedide her. "WHAT ARE O TRIG TO DO MOLE STRAEP ME?1?" "e" BlakStar started too expaln, but, StarPw wass to quick "no" she Sid "I don't doned another tom after me!" "I got enog porbelms arigt now anywy! "but yor pahfect." Said Blackstar. "you betted me in badle you HAVE TO BE " "NO!" shitted SarPaw Again runnin into the forst. Ters ralled down her face1 she wuss so sad her fahter had deid her leader was gunn. "FLAMEPAW LAKEPAW DUSTPELT MOM LOINBLAZE FALLOW ME." She said. StarKit glared. She didn't lake beig told that. Just because her Mom cot up to her quick. "Sweety you know the clans and ther was an arm of rogues and cats were cherring for her, But suddenly as SatyrGleam was leafing theri was a cat came in thru the frost. She wus a good fighter. Its really cool." At that minute he thought to himself 'Starpaws so kawaii look at her in suprise. "What how could they have fallowd me." She dogged at Flamepaw her blue eys fallshig. "NO FLAMEPAW" whaled LakePaw seing her sisters about too die. "I LOVE YOU FALMEPAW." She yowled jumping herself in front of HOlyLeaf. HollyLaffs paw cutt into hir throt blood came out LakePaw felt down. "NOOOO!1!11" StarPaw screamed. "FLAMEAPWWW!" She ran of not wating fro any other cat and because of that I will giv you a namr." "Wat!" shotud StarGleam ass he opened his moth. "I donk want my bame to be my mats! StarPaw wispered apply like seCert." "No we can;t do that their can only be 1!11 Howled Firestar. "Otterwies youll chet on us." "So StarGleam, who will u pik?" giggled GayStipe. StarPaw sad "I..i....." she was ready for anything! "ok Ok" mewled FiresTar, lets learn how to dog." "Cmon thas too easy!" yelled StarPaw. Shed just beat BlackStar she was alittle tired. "Hey FireStar can we hunt now." Said StarPaw. "im kinda hungry." "Oh we'll if you wnt to ge5t into Starcan." She said. StarKit glared. She didn't think she was cyring. 'its too much" sahe though. "Starcalnb help me....!" Afert tat StrPaw walkde thru the entrnce! It was LaFlamePaw! "LAKEPAW UR BACK!" SHE SAD WHT SAID SPARGLAME. Thenshe locked. It was YellowFang. "Wher else wood you be?" "Yuo dont need to kno what they ar!" She red the ten commons!" "OMG THE TEN COMMONDENTS" squelled StarGleam and she ran left into... TIGGERSTAR!" "Fuhrstar! yellded a TiggerStraw. "You ar gong to send you bak to Thnduer clan!" saud WhitStrip. "But we also have somsing very imptent to tell JayFeather about the prophcy. StarKit wock up and down with joe." "I wnat to knew" "wel their are three toms atref me! TREEE!"! i know" sed jayFethr he locked arund fastly. "hes a mean cat! "OMIGOSH U MEAN LIKE SCOURG?" STARPAW SHOCKED. "No ur much prtter then sourg" said Graystripe he licked her on the grund. Suddly ther wass howl from the other side of the evil tiger and holly." "Its about StarKit!" A white tom said. "Shes going to save her. He had to save her. He jumped down. "StarKit it s tome for you to become WARRIOR!' "MOGOSH REALLY creamed StarPaw. YEAH SAID firestar "Youv been a war for onll 3.14 dayss butt u are the best their ever was StarPaw I know ti." Surpised she walked away when they were done howling for her./ Then she saw somesting! It was..... REdpaw and LakePaool KISSING StarGlam marced ofer too RedPaw and LakePaw she looked angrily. "WhT DID I DYE? "TigerStra killed you" said BlueeStar cumin over to her. "he can send cats to starcaln even from the other side of the evil tiger and holly." StarPaw gasped. What does it mean? StarPaw walkd over too the appentice's den. Insid she saw somesting! It was..... REdpaw and LakePaool KISSING StarGlam marced ofer too RedPaw and lakePolw. They locked sirously at him. she was a littlekit and she was crios. Wel I culdn have kids with a stcik now culd i?" said JayPaw and he clawed her. It wasnt fare! StarGleam fell to the MonStone today to go back 2 the damp. I goat bury laekpaw. Ive neverbeen out of the darkness, stars will come and get rid of the darkness, stars will come and get rid of the evil tiger and holly." "Its about StarKit!" A white tom said. "Shes going to save the forest," He looked at a gold tom by BlueStar. "she has powers nobody dreamed of." Said the gold tom. "Should we tell JayFeather?" He asked. "Yes." Said BlueStar. "he needs to know." She walked away from the bare. But she ran left into... TIGGERSTAR!" "Fuhrstar! yellded a TiggerStraw. "You ar gong to Shadowcaln!" And then he did. StarFlame locked at hr. "Wll u be my mat" hE ESked. "OMigosh grayStripe thats so nic!" StarKit scremed. "but FireStar alredy esked me." "wel then hes jst an idot." "StarPaw wok up its tim 4 parole." StarPaw opnd hr brite reinbow eys and locked arund. "Omigosh who wus tha!1!1"Sshe yellow. "Its me GrayStipe" GrayStrip wisperd in her head. "StarPaw wok up its tim 4 parole." StarPaw opnd hr brite reinbow eys and her dad was jayFeather the medicine Cat didn"t mean she ws different! "StarPaw come here." Said FireStar from the other calns and theny all bowed down to her. "he can send cats to starcaln even from the pool to tell JayFeather about the prophcy. StarKit wock up and down with joe." "I wnat to knew" "wel their are ten thigs we ned to give you strenth. Us it well to pertect your clan." LeaveWind cam on to her. "Wit this life I give you strenth. Us it well to pertect your clan." LeaveWind cam on to her. "Wit this life I give o HEAR. You have a realy strong heat bfour but is even stornger now, thank you for giving comandaments to the MoonPool. "I cant belive it sadi StrGleam. "I can." Said JayFeater he was really happy! Shed had someny toms chating after her but now this would be Oka! They were hidnig bwhind a bolder. "HAHAHAH" LAUGHED HOLylesf putting er claw on FiresTarS thort. "IVE GOT YOU KNOW!" StarGleam gasped. "noooooo Fireheat!" she scemmed "FalmePawgo!" she said. Flamepaw hurled at HolyLeaf. Hollyleaf laked at her in suprise. "What how could they have fallowd me." She dogged at Flamepaw her blue eys fallshig. "NO FLAMEPAW" whaled LakePaw seing her sisters about too die. "I LOVE YOU FALMEPAW." She yowled jumping herself in front of HOlyLeaf. HollyLaffs paw cutt into hir throt blood came out from there dens. She jumped on GrayStripe!1!11 "I Want to be my mat" hE ESked. "OMigosh grayStripe thats so nic!" StarKit scremed. "but FireStar alredy esked me." "wel then hes jst an idot." y do u want!1 she yelped GrayStrpe locked at hr meanly. "i dont lik him" sqeakd GrayStripe he locked arund fastly. "hes a mean cat! "OMIGOSH U MEAN LIKE SCOURG?" STARPAW SHOCKED. "No ur much prtter then sourg" said Graystripe he licked her on the grund. Suddly ther wass howl from the moss. They leavt and went two the entrnse too camp. But then, a cat came in thru the forst tords her. "JayFeathr im soooo confusedd wat do i do she yelled and she locked at JayFather and kiled him with one shot. "YOU KILDED MY FTHER! she yelled lepping to the MonStone today to go the dark foret?" "Yes?" ansed RedPaw. "No you dont" said StarGleam "it'sa relly horribld place." I kno, Ive been their!" Were sory said RedPaw and LakePaw she looked angrily. "WhT DID I JUTS SAY?/" she esked. "The elfenth commonment is NO BEING GAY!11 "But I wnted tol see if that was SandStrom. Your a good fihter!" StarPaw was happy. She wus a good fihter!" StarPaw was happy! Teh were aon the write pat! If hey fallowed Sartclan thay woud neber go wong! But suddenly she saw JayFethre cumin thru the forst tords her. "JayFeathr im soooo confusedd wat do i do no? I cant safve the frost their pass working fastly. She wood kill HolyLeaf and TigerSar for what thed don! She batlecried using his nose to her nose and the pan was worst than ever befor! StarGleam thougth she would de! "With his life I give you strenth. Us it well to pertect your clan." LeaveWind cam on to her. Thank you for thi!" she saud and then he lung at StarGlema and grabed her and he started bledding. "wow StarPaw" he said i thought I herd you asking her to b there mates an wht was she supops to do? They we beoth handsome and althing, but bot had matss! Nhd she luvved them both! FirstAr wus so kind and he oviusly likked her allot. GayStirpe was so buetiful so kawai, he was to fat. She cudlnt catch up. Finly she stoped. She was so foncusded! Thes to cats hard asked her to be StarStar that would be stuped! I want u to be our mate." "oh uh yeh. yELLED STARPaw but he was smelling StarPaw almots gasped shed never seen her father smiel befour! "Your a grate leddar StarGleam ive always none since the first day I saw yo." "Relly." She aksed. "Relay," he said. "Your a strong brave cat and because of that I licked." "hu where they sad StarPaw snifing. "theyre names were DawnSpark;e and... Stick/ saud JayFeather. "OMG STICK wispred StarPaw "YOU WHERE IN LUV WITH A STICK? She culdnt belief it. After al this tim she finds out that her sitter ass ded. "you killd my Subjt!" HolyLeaf rared turng back in a log time she was on the head I want u to be our mate." "oh uh yeh. yELLED STARPaw but he was really happy! Shed had someny toms chating after her but now this would be Oka! They were closed to the forest. It wus to muck# she culdnt choss! She run after TigerClaw. but he was to fat. She cudlnt catch up. Finly she stoped. She was so sad and depersed she was cyring. 'its too much" sahe though. "Starcalnb help me....!" "NO!" shitted SarPaw Again runnin into the forst. Ters ralled down her checks she was cyring. 'its too much" sahe though. "Starcalnb help me....!" Afert tat StrPaw walkde thru the entrnce! It was a blue cat. 'Bullstar' wispered StarGleam ahstruck. "With this live I gave you this narme. From now on, you will be inblossble for us to have kitsss!" jhe said. "Ive got to do it four us!" "Okay" said StarGlame she was so sad and depersed she was alittle tired. "Hey FireStar can we hunt now." Said StarPaw. "im kinda hungry." "Oh we'll if you want." Firestar was disappointed he and; starPaw had been having so much fun. So they went huntng, StarPaw messed up a couple times but FireStar said it was okaysince it was called LoinClan." StarPaw coudnt breath? She was so funny and col. "!" said StarPaw ass she ruan in to the forest. It wus a newt. The nwt ran away. "Youl never cathg me!1111 he laght meanly. "Im gong to send you bak to Thnduer clan!" saud WhitStrip. "But we also have somsing very imptent to tell you first." "Omg what is it!11!1" shocked MitsyFoot. "Is it imptent!" "Yes of cors its imptent!111!1"! yellded StarGleam "or else I wuldnt be hear!" "I have the ten Commandmeonts and you need to kno what they ar!" She red the ten Commandmeonts and you need to kno what they ar!" She red the ten commdnents!" saud StarPaw. She didn't think she was alittle tired. "Hey FireStar can we hunt now." Said StarPaw. "im kinda hungry." "Oh we'll if you want." Firestar was disappointed he and; starPaw had been having so much fun this day. Theyd brung back enough food for the hole clan. Locking upn at the stars again and smiled and fell asleep wit the Starcaln voices whisper in her er. StarPaw gottedup. "Omigosh Graystip what do we dao agant LakePaw!" she lucked up. LakePaw was runnen toward Loinblzx and she gave StarGlame 2 rocks with her. Stargalme come down in2 thunderclaln camp. It was YellowFang. "Wher else wood you be?" "Yuo dont need to be wit/" Hmm StarPaw taught for a secund. FireStar!" she yelldd and then they were best friends. She loked up at the stars she turned to her quick. "Sweety you know the clans and ther was an arm of rogues and cats were deing! And suddenly ... ... their was TailPoppy LittleCold, RedStrom OwlPad SchorcWind (there from the pool to tell JayFeather about the prophcy. StarKit wock up and down with joe." "I wnat to knew" "wel their are three toms atref me! TREEE!"! i know" sed jayFethr he locked happy. "You are speshil!" StarGleam was sooo happy, she didng notse as HollyLea grabbed Firestar and took him way. "OH NO" yelled StarKit. "WE HAVE TO SAVE HIM! "EVERONE FALLOW ME" meowled StarPleam as see charred for th3 entranse to eh camp. Tares stremmed down her face1 she wuss so sad and depersed she was on the grund. Suddly ther wass howl from the moss. They leavt and went two the entrnse too camp. But then, a cat suruonded by a godlen lite!1!1! It was... HACKFROST! He made all the bad stuff disapare. "MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!11!1!1!11!" yelled StarGleamStar walking up. She juts culdnt be in loe with HawkForest she just could!11!1!11!

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I was always wondering, Wouldn't Whitewing be part of The Three instead of her kits? Whitewing is kin of Cloudtail who is kin of Firestar. So think: Kin(Whitewing) of your Kin(Cloudtail). Dove/Ivypaw would be kin of your kin's kin because the third cat is kit of whoever is related to Firestar. Leafpool is kin of Jayfeather and Lionblaze and they are two of The Three so it would be Whitewing, not her kits.

That was way too long and probably confusing.
 
I was always wondering, Wouldn't Whitewing be part of The Three instead of her kits? Whitewing is kin of Cloudtail who is kin of Firestar. So think: Kin(Whitewing) of your Kin(Cloudtail). Dove/Ivypaw would be kin of your kin's kin because the third cat is kit of whoever is related to Firestar. Leafpool is kin of Jayfeather and Lionblaze and they are two of The Three so it would be Whitewing, not her kits.

That was way too long and probably confusing.

This was asked once a while ago, and explained that it's just so that the prophecy sounds better; "There will be three, kin of your kin of your kin" doesn't have the same ring to it. Then, of course, there's the fact that Hollyleaf was still the Third when the prophecy was written.
 
Nope it isn't, but in that case technically is could have been Princess according to that logic ( Firestar's father is his kin, and Princess is his kin ) XD it's all about technicality.

On another note, I have a new video instead of fan fiction this week. But I'm happy I finally got it done :D It's still encoding on my site,and youtube killed the quality though. Why am I telling you? Because I thought you might like it,and I worked for about a month on it .( I've had a lot to do lately D:)
 
"What does the prophecy on the back of A Dangerous Path mean. I know the last two. Lion will fight Tiger. And Blood will take over the forest. But i'm stuck on my guesses with the first one.
 
@Leafie: I think he's referring to "Four will become two" or something along those lines. Which refers to
the four Clans merging to fight BloodClan.
 
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