Okay. Constructive criticism.
Why is there a shoutbox in the middle of the page? And a guestbook? And another one in the side bar? Is the website about any of these?
What's the point of the legendary army....?
Pokémon D/P is one of the best DS Games out there. It has 3D-ish Graphics, has a whole bunch of new Pokés, and just generally is a lot better than the previous versions.
Pokémon D/P Has basically changed the world of Pokemon...
Okay. D/P isn't even that new anymore, and you guys aren't a news website. What's the point of this page? You're basically advertising D/P. It doesn't need advertising.
I'd recommend you delete pages like this. They don't do anything for your site. If it was for a new and upcoming game, fair enough, but this is a useless page.
Get rid of the 'do not click here page'. It's almost exactly the same as Butterfree's. You've basically copied hers, added a lot of 'HAHAHA''s, and lots of weird random text. It doesn't look that good.
And... if I go to the emoticons page, I get this banner on the bottom that your site is hosted by freewebs. Might want to fix that if it's freewebs-free.
Why do some of your affy links have buttons and some in text? I'd recommend keeping it the same, it looks much less cluttered.
Do you guys have an updates page, or anything?
Lots of your links link to pages that have no content or
this.
This place needs fixing up. I'd start your codes again from scratch, but it's up to you. I think your major fault is all images and... no content.
Anyway, good luck with it. I can see you've put a lot of effort into it... but keep working on it.
The layout
is good though, I'll give you that.