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    Cirrus' poetry thread

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    Cirrus' poetry thread

    Probably! I couldn't work out whether that made it seem like I see it as an actual love poem, though. Whatever that is. Thank you, TES. <3 I haven't been able to write much for a while, but this is a small thing I scribbled a while back with the prompt being the title.
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    what is this!
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    Oh, I don't know.
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    Original format of Burgundy.
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    Written with the prompt "wings". Please see how it's meant to look! I know just how messy, unstructured and silly it is, but what's new?
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    Again, linespacing isn't theeeeeeeere this makes me sad ;~; Original form!
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    It looks totally, totally wrong without the proper linespacing, which I assume doesn't work with BBCode. Anyone know how to fix it? :C Pleeeease go see it at my dA, in its original form.
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    This is actually based on a very personal concept of a friend of mine; the basics are that everyone in the world has someone else who is basically the same as them, has all the same thoughts, feelings, and is really just part of the same entity. I decided to run with the idea of them meeting by...
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    Now, I like this one. Rather personal. Wisteria/Temporary (having to link because it has odd spacing that doesn't seem to work in quotes)
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    There are a few lines I don't like in this one, but I had to get all the imagery down. In fact, I'm not that fond of it. Not much like my usual style.
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    Not sure if I like these ones. Done using single word prompts (the first was "branded", the second "mockingbird") which might explain why they have a different... feel?
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    @Chief Zackrai: Thank you again! You might be right, "to the next" and "to the east" have much better rhythmic flow... not sure on that one, I like my original way as well. And ahah, I don't mind at all, any feedback or any readers at all make me feel positively overjoyed. :D...
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    Thank you! Now that I look at it, you're probably right, it does look better that way. I don't like changing poems after finishing them (is it just me who feels weird doing that?) but I'll keep it in mind. Thank you very much for your feedback by the way! :D Another one, a short one- tried for...
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    A little Emilie Autumn-inspired.
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    One of my most disjointed yet... I know. Any thoughts? :')
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    Probably not going to make any sense to anyone but the person it was written for/about, who is not here.
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    Really? I've heard that the Old Irish is either Lughnasa, Lughnasadh, Lughnasad or Lughnassadh, with no fada. I thought the fada was a feature only in the modern Irish word? And don't worry, I've always pronounced them right, at least. :P Thank you, I'll look forward to it!
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    Isn't that just the most imaginative thread title I could come up with. I don't pretend to know much of the technical aspects of poetry writing, nor do I have much experience. Really, I just use it as a way of concentrating random thoughts and bits of muse. Gentle constructive criticism would...
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