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  1. Tailsy

    Tarnished Scars {PREVIEW}

    You'd be quite surprised at how America is poisoning my culture. :P
  2. Tailsy

    Tarnished Scars {PREVIEW}

    I think it's mostly a case of you're telling and not showing. For example, you shouldn't just state what the Houndoom (it IS a Houndoom, yes?) looks like or what the background scene is; it makes your writing seem flat and as though you're trying too hard to set the scene. I can't really help...
  3. Tailsy

    Tarnished Scars {PREVIEW}

    Concise language works so well because not everyone sits and reads their thesaurus. Readers want to be entertained by a story, not confused or frustrated by it.
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