Chaon
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This is a novel I've been working on, but I'm going to post it here to get some feedback. The first bit that I have written now is rated PG13, maybe 14A, but it will get much, much, worse. Maybe 18A at parts. Just letting you all know.
Astaroth walked into the realm of Bael reluctantly. No one liked admitting their faults, but it had to be done. His acolyte's insubordinance was a problem he needed rectified, but having to kill your acolyte was embarassing, and showed a lack of judgement. Astaroth was proud, and so was every other Demon Lord in the depths of Hell. He had decided long ago that he would ask Bael for help, but it had taken him a while to get the courage to do it. There was a rumor that Bael had an assassin that he himself had raised from childhood, and that this assassin would kill any insubordinate acolyte at its Master's request.
((Postponed.))
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Astaroth walked into the realm of Bael reluctantly. No one liked admitting their faults, but it had to be done. His acolyte's insubordinance was a problem he needed rectified, but having to kill your acolyte was embarassing, and showed a lack of judgement. Astaroth was proud, and so was every other Demon Lord in the depths of Hell. He had decided long ago that he would ask Bael for help, but it had taken him a while to get the courage to do it. There was a rumor that Bael had an assassin that he himself had raised from childhood, and that this assassin would kill any insubordinate acolyte at its Master's request.
((Postponed.))