In Progress Final Loss

[ThaosDM]

This is my book i have been writing called Final Loss. It has many series but I have not yet finished the first series (well actually the third because I decided to start at the third series). Here is the stuff I have came up with:
The Story Of The Shadow's: (Story introducing what most of the characters are.)

The Shadow’s are a race of mostly evil beings. Most of them are cold-blooded killers and the rest are traitors that try to kill the evil Shadow’s. The race began on year A1 when the former leader Victor James Anchors created the universe. He kept humans as slaves and made them do his every bidding. He was assassinated by the wielder of one of the Shadow’s weakness blades Michael James Anchors his son. (To be edited.)

Final Loss III:

"The death of a Shadow is so amazing. First: It slowly stops breathing. Second: It starts breathing to say their very brief moment of last words. Third: It stops breathing once again and the Black Flames start to slowly consume it. Fourth: The Black Flames finish consuming it and then it disappears into thin air sending it to the Underworld." Draconian James Anchors explained. "Very Good Draconian. You get an A+ for that story." Draconian's teacher said. "Yes!"
Thaos James Anchors starts panting. "I am getting to old for this." Thaos James Anchors said. He turns around and faces his opponent. "Heh over 20 hundred thousand years old and still kicking." He points his arm at his opponent. A blue energy source starts radiating from his hand. "Time to finish this! ENERGY SURGE!" A blue blast comes out from his hand hurling towards his opponent destroying it. "Yes! I still got it! Oh I hope Draconian didn't start any trouble. Eh like father like son." Thaos said jokingly. He started walking away from this desert towards grass. (to be edited)

 

[ThaosDM]

The Story Of The Shadows:
The Shadow’s are a race of mostly evil beings. Most of them are cold-blooded killers and the rest are traitors that try to kill the evil Shadow’s. The race began on year A1 when the former leader Victor James Anchors created the universe. He kept humans as slaves and made them do his every bidding. He was assassinated by the wielder of one of the Shadow’s weakness blades Michael James Anchors his son Thaos James Anchors became the new protector of the humans. He protects the humans and their homes. The shadows have their own personal watch like thing attached to their wrist. It holds most of a Shadow's power. There is an adjustable turning thing on it that goes like this: Off>Normal Blast>Super Blast>Extreme Blast>Full Blast.

Final Loss III:

"The death of a Shadow is so amazing. First: It slowly stops breathing. Second: It starts breathing to say their very brief moment of last words. Third: It stops breathing once again and the Black Flames start to slowly consume it. Fourth: The Black Flames finish consuming it and then it disappears into thin air sending it to the Underworld." Draconian James Anchors explained. "Very Good Draconian. You get an A+ for that story." Draconian's teacher said. "Yes!"
Thaos James Anchors starts panting. "I am getting to old for this." Thaos James Anchors said. He turns around and faces his opponent. "Heh over 20 hundred thousand years old and still kicking." He points his arm at his opponent. A blue energy source starts radiating from his hand. "Time to finish this! ENERGY SURGE!" A blue blast comes out from his hand hurling towards his opponent destroying it. "Yes! I still got it! Oh I hope Draconian didn't start any trouble. Eh like father like son." Thaos said jokingly. He started walking away from this desert towards grass.
A big egg just sits there motionless. It cracks and someone comes out of it. "Yes! 10 thousand years in that egg and I am finally back! Michael is dead. He killed me and I killed him. Now Thaos lives and he has a son. It is time my personal business is taken care of." Halos Wisher Dementos said. He walks out of the grassy area and goes into the desert seeing Thaos. He sets his watch on full blast. A red aura radiates from his hand. "Flaming Aura Surge!" A red blast goes straight towards Thaos hitting him straight in the stomach making a hole and making him fall down. (To be continued.)

 

[ThaosDM]

The Story Of The Shadows:
The first one born was Michael James Anchors. The second was Halos Wish Dementos. The Third was Jaden Vaan Wentz. They all had different middle and last names because Victor tried to hid their identity. They were sent to three different worlds. Halos sayed at Planet Death and became evil. Jaden went to Planet Orion and became Neutral. And Michael went to Planet Earth and became the protector of that planet.

Final Loss III:

A red aura radiates from his hand. "Flaming Aura Surge!" A red blast goes straight towards Thaos hitting him straight in the stomach making a hole and making him fall down. "I will finish this Thaos! Soon I shall be ruler of this planet! I will kill all living beings!" (To be continued.)

 

[opaltiger]

While I'm sure greater minds would recognise your addition of one line per post as the emergence of a stunning new field in literature, I'm going to have to ask you - for the sake of us lesser mortals - to stop reposting the same thing over and over and wait until you actually have something worth showing.