PMD: Team Gameboy's Quest

[VelvetEspeon]

This is a sprite comic about the adventures of me (a Squirtle) and Red the Charmander. And later, Green the Bulbasuar, Yellow the Pikachu, and one more Pokémon...

First Issue: Red Leaves Home
http://img385.imageshack.us/my.php?image=pmdcomic1bm3.png

Thanks to:
Everyone who made comics here for inspiring me.
And the Spriter's Resource for the sprites.

 

[Charizard Morph]

Don't fill empty spaces with eye burning colors, please?
Other than that it seems okay.

 

[VelvetEspeon]

Don't fill empty spaces with eye burning colors, please?
Other than that it seems okay.

Ok, the next issue won't have eye burning colors.

 

[Evolutionary]

Good good...if you really want to fill spaces then do stripes or something dark.

 

[Not Meowth]

I see it's up ^^

Anyway, I'm going to give you the same advice I gave Terry T for Explorers of Doom; try not to make it move too fast! Putting them right into the Guild in the first issue is a little rushed. Remember I was on issue 7 before I got there. Try to put a little more story development in before just leaping straight to the main bit.

I'd also advise reconsidering how you arrange your panels so you don't end up with that unsightly empty space. ^^