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The colourless wind.

sankatu

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The colourless wind
Overshadows my people
The tonal range rains

No colour invites
Not knowing their destiny
In death they will starve

Ignorant they fall
Slaves to their carnal undead
Spent eternity
 
You accidentally made this thread twice. I've deleted the other one. As for the poem, it's very short and you'll have to show us more of your work for us to say anything useful.
 
I am sorry for the double thread thing, and as far as other work goes, there isn't any. when I start doing anything creative I just let my emotions take me away, this was one of those times.
 
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