BioSpark's United Legion of Idiots.

[Bombsii]

Hello, this is my sprite comic. It takes place in the world of Kirby but that doesn't mean other characters can interfere.

The comic is about BioSpark attempting to form his own superbad team to destroy kirby, but as any good story, their attempts don't go to plan and soon they are at war with Dedede's Banditos and a bunch of other "evil" fiends and crooks.

Yes, I have made it partly comedy. Not as funny as some other sprite comics but for me the plot comes first. Advice is greatly appreciated thank you.

(I know who BioSpark and others are but their characters may of changed for the benefit of the story)

-Chapter 1-
-Chapter 2-
I may not update very often but I will do all I can to stop it dying.​

 

[Noctowl]

There are a lot of sprite comics all of a sudden. Oh well, this one sounds interesting. *tries to keep an eye on thread*

 

[Evolutionary]

Yeah sprite comic outbreak

Hmm...Kirby

 

[Bombsii]

Is there? I've only seen 2.

 

[Not Meowth]

There are a lot of sprite comics all of a sudden. Oh well, this one sounds interesting. *tries to keep an eye on thread*

I have that effect on forums ^^

Still, can't wait to see this DarkArmour.

 

[Bombsii]

don't get too excited. there might be major disappointment

 

[JolteonShock]

Looks pretty good.
Although on some of the sprites (especially the ones of the Waddle Dees falling sideways) you can see white around them, so might want to get rid of it.
Anyway, I shall be watching.

 

[Flora]

The text kinda blends into the background. Maybe you could make it lighter?

This is very amusing. Can't wait to see more!