Forever

[Departure Song]

By the night he sleeps; by the moon she weeps,
her tears arid in the bitter air.
He is in disbelief; her heart filled with grief—
but all they can do is stare

into the mirror as they mourn for rapture;
they know they have no time.
She holds his hand; together they stand
and the two souls intertwine.

 

[silverfur]

what is this! its wonderfuly sad..

 

[Departure Song]

Thanks. It's just something I wrote out of boredom... I don't post my poetry much because to be honest I'm very self-conscious. ^^;

 

[silverfur]

i like it! =D

 

[Departure Song]

Thanks. ^^;

 

[Music Dragon]

Thanks. It's just something I wrote out of boredom... I don't post my poetry much because to be honest I'm very self-conscious. ^^;

You know what? Poetry contains no errors. Poetry is free from all shackles! Don't be self-conscious; not everyone is going to like your poems, of course, but it's not because something is wrong with them. It never is!

... You should post more poetry.