One-Shot Guilty Pleasures (A Comedy Drabble)

[Sparkling Dragon]

Giovanni was annoyed. His contact was at least thirty seconds late, and Giovanni was not accustomed to waiting.

Team Rocket’s distinguished boss glanced around furtively. If he stayed here any longer, he’d-

“Mr. Giovanni?”

“You’re late,” said the boss, without turning around. “You’re jeopardizing the operation!”

“Is it that important, boss?” Giovanni growled quietly.

“Just give me the damn package!”

Giovanni held out a hand, and felt a small, soft item being placed in it.

“Now go. If you speak of this to anybody, your Rocket membership is forfeit, and that won’t be all. Understand?”

“Y-yes boss!” Once the terrified grunt was out of earshot, Giovanni eagerly tore the paper off the package. Finally, it was his! He rejoiced silently.

The Special Edition Pikachu plushie! It was soooo cute!

 

[Charizard Morph]

Lol, this will be awsome.

You posted the story twice though, so you may want to delete one of them.

 

[Sandstone-Shadow]

Haha, nice work. ^^

Though, there's one thing I think you should change. Instead of this:

“Is it that important, boss?” Giovanni growled quietly.

“Just give me the damn package!”

I think you should put this:

“Is it that important, boss?”

Giovanni growled quietly. “Just give me the damn package!”

The momentum of the story halted there for me; I was confused, because I thought that Giovanni was the boss, but then here he is addressing this other guy as boss. It took me a while to work out that it was the grunt talking, and Giovanni just growled in the same paragraph. I think it'd be a lot clearer if that was separated. =)