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Mercury's Shuttle

Mercury

Mercury

Snorunt
Okay so, here it is:
Mercury's Shuttle

I've never made a site before, and it probably isn't very good, but I gave it a shot. I don't really understand some stuff, so help and tips are welcome. Gulp, here goes.:sweatdrop::dead:

EDIT: Anybody? Please? I really would like some help.
 
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The first thing I would like to talk about is the layout. I think it would be preferable to have colors that match more, such as different shades of blue for the menu rather than red and yellow. The menu distracts from the content.

As for the actual content, a lot of the pages just describe the game. It seems that you are focusing on putting game logs on there, so maybe you should remove the pages with no logs and instead focus on fleshing out the logs you do have. It would help to have something different as well. Why not write about what you think about Pokemon, the fandom, the community? Is there anything you'd like to explain to the reader? Any informtation?

I'm not sure what to think about your religion page.

It looks like you like doing your website, which is good. If you want my honest opinion, I think it needs more expansion on its topics to include more than your logs (you should probably remove the countdown to your birthday unless you plan to do something super important to the site on that date or something), a change of color in the menu, and more content. If you really like your website and working on it and you listen to advice, then it should be a great website in time.

Good luck on your shuttle.
 
Thank you. I have already changed the colour now, but I had to use green for the sidebar background, because you wouldn't be able to see anything otherwise. My 'religion' page was just a random thought, so I think I'll take it down. I'll some things about what I like: it seems a nice idea.
 
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