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One-Shot Revenge

Psychic Kobra

The Kobra who twists time, space and....spoons.
Author's note: OK, I wasn't really thinking when I wrote this. Oh well, what's done is done.

As your Pokeball comes towards me, I run. All is lost, as I am sucked into your ball. "Go Houndour!" Your shout echoes in my head as I am tossed into the air and materialise on the ground. I breathe in the fresh air, until I see my opponent. A Piplup. Uh-oh. "Flamethrower!" you say. I do as you command, although Piplup comes through, barely damaged. She says, "Sorry for this, old friend." before shooting a powerful Bubblebeam, knocking me out. "Worthless Houndour." You growl before recalling me. No medicine....no nothing. Although you rush me to a Pokemon Centre, I feel as if you hate me. "Go Houndour!" Your snarl echoes in my head once more. My eyes meet those of an Alakazam."Dark Pulse!" You command. I reply with, "I won't fight. I'm a Pokemon, he's a Pokemon." "Stupid Houndour!" You hiss, kicking me. My hate is overwhelming,and I evolve into a Houndoom."You...you evolved!" you stutter, squeezing me. Instead of responding happily, I dark pulse you. You scream once, before falling to the ground. Dead. The other trainer is shocked, and tries to run, but I dark pulse him too. A group of you surround me. I gather all my energy into the Skull on my neck. I let out a black pulse of energy, killing all of you surrounding me.
 
Keep up the good work! I think you have the potential to write some pretty great stories.

I think it was interesting how the story was told from the point of view of the Pokemon. You should add lots of details about the characters in your stories. Readers love to hear what something looks like, or sounds like. If you do this, your stories can become even better!

Good job!
 
Thanks! I worked super hard on this, and I based it on Butterfree's 'Last Defence'! Good to know you liked it!
 
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