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[Lucas₇₅₅]

The back-right leg should be facing forward more, the mane squishes a little too much on his head, the mane just doesn't look fluffy, the top of the tail should be more rounded, the ears are kinda squiggly. Just some small things.

C+C? First Fakemon, second scratch.

 

[Mewtwo]

Lucas:
It looks an awful lot like Mawile.If it were Mawile,it'd be good!

Raquayza:
Not that good at critiquing,but really,it just looks wrong.You should see my scratching,maybe it'll make you feel better? :D?

 

[Zulo]

The ears are too skinny, that's what's wrong with the eevee, I think.

 

[Rayquaza]

Raquayza:
Not that good at critiquing,but really,it just looks wrong.You should see my scratching,maybe it'll make you feel better? :D?

*is confused*

 

[Mewtwo]

Want to see my first scratch?

My Fakemon Boochu v

And how about my second one,too!

Trapinch v

 

[Rayquaza]

Want to see my first scratch?

My Fakemon Boochu v

And how about my second one,too!

Trapinch v

I can't see them. :/

 

[Mewtwo]

Oops!
*reuploads them*

Ahem.Here they are!

Want to see my first scratch?

My Fakemon Boochu v

And how about my second one,too!

Trapinch v

 

[Zulo]

I just finished my first scratch!

Well, it was based off a picture I drew myself.

CC?

Mewtwo, on boochu, the orange ring shouldn't continue onto the arms.

 

[Mewtwo]

That is the pose of the Sugimori Art!

 

[Zulo]

Woah...

I guess the book I was using uses sugimori.

In that case, rate my newest pixel-over!

 

[Mewtwo]

muahaha...!

it's a pretty good first scratch,but look at mine!

I'll get good someday!And so shall everyone!Some people already are :P

 

[Worst Username Ever]

Neon Sneasel:

(yes, the background is supposed to be black.)

 

[Zulo]

Any reason why it's not the perfect, Mewtwo? Like, what's wrong with it? I doubt it's perfect, but if I don't know what's wrong with it, how can I fix it and get better?

WUE, I've seen neons before. They were usually that, but the good ones were animated with things like this-

So they would be blinking. But, you did a good job with the frame! I guess.

Any CC yet? Hello? PichuK and Twitchy? Over here!~

 

[Rayquaza]

Don't get mad, but...
He looks constipated. Or maybe he's just angry.
The little lines (eyebrows?)above his closed eyes are the culprit.
That's about all I can see.

 

[Lucas₇₅₅]

Lucas:
It looks an awful lot like Mawile.If it were Mawile,it'd be good!

It's supposed to be a pre-evolution of Mawile. I guess I should've specified that!
^_^;

Zulo: Nice, but the fur on its right cheek should be connected in front of the ear. And the front leg is too skinny.

 

[Zulo]

I think I fixed it...

 

[Garfield Grunt]

Here is one of my inventions, (I think)
My shaderno!
Also animated.

Comments?

 

[PichuK]

Looks good. The frames flow nicely, but there is a mysterious white blob between the fingers in frames... 2 and 3? that you forgot to transparise.

As for the style, it's pulled off well, but the eyes are awkward and the idea isn't /that/ orginal. Doesn't mean it doesn't look nice, though.

 

[Kirbster]

Oops!
*reuploads them*

Ahem.Here they are!

Want to see my first scratch?

My Fakemon Boochu v

And how about my second one,too!

Trapinch v

Boochu:
If you were trying to make it a sprite then... blegh
The shading is kinda weird(near the bottom at least), it looks like his arms are sorta coming out of his stomach =|, the arms look like flippers, and even if they are flippers they look completely different lengths. Some of the stomach is going into the arms e__e
And you didnt color the outline (except for the tail end)
So I give it a 5/10

Trapinch:
IT just looks stretched horizontal wise, and the colors are kinda foggy.
6.5/10

Fixed it!

Better?

Its kinda small, the outline is rigged, and some parts are only a little colored.
Also, the light source is identifiable, but the overall shading is "iffy"
Try to make it bigger, and redo the outline and shading.

 

[PichuK]

I NEED CRITS