Well on another forum I am asking people for help with a story before I post it here and on another site. I have been getting a lot of helpful critique from a few users. However, I am a tad skeptical on some of it and would like other opinions on if to trust it or not. I was wondering if it'd be okay to post the critique here and if so, in what forum? I am very tired right now so I honestly have no idea what to search for in the search feature. Help please?