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Mage of Blood
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...so I'm starting a poetry thread!
Here's a poem I came up with a few days ago:
This is the first poem I've actually finished and felt proud of, so... any comments? Constructive critisism? Praiseplease?
Also, when I've written too much poetry for this thread, I'll just link to my poetry page (which so far only has this poem on it)
Here's a poem I came up with a few days ago:
All alone in a shadowy world
Trapped in a deep and dark abyss
There was no one to listen; no, not one;
All alone was the little miss.
Alone she was, with no shoulder to cry;
She settled for instead her room;
She cried and cried for hours on end
All alone in her lonely room.
Alone she walked, with no one to guide
Her footsteps down the righteous path
She faltered; she took a wrong turn;
All alone she unleashed her wrath.
Others avoided her best they could
For they knew of her troubles, but did they care?
No they did not; no one even tried;
All alone; it was too much to bear.
She crept out of bed in the dead of the night,
She snuck to the kitchen and took up a knife;
She was tired of everyone treating her wrong-
All alone, she ended her life.
This is the first poem I've actually finished and felt proud of, so... any comments? Constructive critisism? Praise
Also, when I've written too much poetry for this thread, I'll just link to my poetry page (which so far only has this poem on it)