Mamvire's suckish poetry

[magmavire]

So yeah I have a poetry thread now that will get on everyone's nerves by next week.

Curious Things

I find it funny really
How love seems to work
You get all touchy feely
And then begin to shirk
All other things
You'd care about normally
It makes me want to scream
How you act so formally

The idea is queer indeed
How love changes a man
But you'll still ride your steed
into love's master plan.​

 

[Monoking]

get all tochy feely

Forgot the 'U'.
Other than that, it's all right.

 

[Zero Moment]

In the last line, "loves" should be "love's."

 

[magmavire]

Interlocking tree branches
As if to represent
Our friendship
And we sit by the trees
On the grass
Looking to the sky's
And seeing through the swirling clouds
The blazing sun
Sitting in the sky

But suddenly it's night
So we lay back
To look at the stars
They seem so distant
And magical
And sitting here
Looking to the heavens
I decide
There could not be
A better place
In the universe

But she is determined to find one
And we go
And find a pond
That seems deeper than possible
On which sits
A water lily
Perfectly still
In the middle of the water​