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In Progress The Book of How the Universe was Created ((Title subject to change))

CNiall

New member
You may miss something the first time; the entire point of proof-reading is to read it again and pick up on any errors that time around (and I see you haven't stopped abusing indeed :|).
 

Zeph

Anything but unremarkable
Pronoun
he
Meh. I like the word indeed. It just fits in where nothing else will.

Aaaanyway, why were we talking about typos again?

*Looks*

Oh yeah.

Anyway, yes, I'm not a very good proof-reader. Argument over, perhaps?
 

CNiall

New member
...it can't be over if there was no argument to start with? Anyway, if nothing else fits in there is no reason why you can't just not say anything there.
 

ultraviolet

yeehaw
Staff member
Pronoun
she/her
You may miss something the first time; the entire point of proof-reading is to read it again and pick up on any errors that time around (and I see you haven't stopped abusing indeed :|).
But if it was spellchecked properly and everything, then you'd have to have a ridiculous argument with someone else, wouldn't you? Just leave it. If you don't like it, say so and move on. You're just nitpicking now. :/

Anyway, I like the concept, but I think you should go into more detail about the roles of the other legendaries, like the Johto trio, the Kanto birds, the regis, and so on.

Also, doesn't Ho-oh represent the Sun or something? As in phoenix?
 

CNiall

New member
But if it was spellchecked properly and everything, then you'd have to have a ridiculous argument with someone else, wouldn't you? Just leave it. If you don't like it, say so and move on. You're just nitpicking now. :/
What's wrong with telling somebody to check for typos...?
 
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