Murkrowfeather
occasionally known as Giratina
This will be updated every Friday, starting tomorrow with Chapter Two. SUSPENSE!
Well, I felt like migrating my (not so) MAJORLY SUCCESSFUL AND WIDELY LOVED work of fanfiction to The Cave of Dragonflies to share with you guys because quite frankly, I think it's a pretty good story and I'm very proud of it. (Despite what the first chapter looks like, it is NOT PMD in reverse. ;D) Uhh... yeah. There is a plot twist that I highly doubt anyone who hasn't read it already will see coming - unless they could find and analyze the Three Clues of Cleverly-Placed and Obscure Hinting, which I don't think any of you can do. xD) Anyways, this is the first chapter of The Galaxy Key in all of its glory and slight oldness...
A low buzzing sound filled the labyrinthine passageways and echoed off of the brown rock walls. This slight annoyance seemed innocent enough, being that one of the travelers in such a cave happens to be a Magneton, but a Raichu traveling with him sees things quite a bit differently...
“Holy Arceus! Helio, shut off that buzzing! It’s getting on my nerves!”
“I can’t help it. I am a Magneton, in case you hadn’t noticed. It is something that I just do.”
“Well, turn it off!”
“I can’t.”
“Why?”
“...”
“Ha! No comment. I beat you!”
“But, still.” Helio replied. “The natural buzzing I emit is nothing like what happens to you when a female Pokemon walks by. Your eyes start to get glazed over, you drop whatever you’re holding, little electric sparks start emitting everywhere from you, and you start speaking gibberish, to name a few sympptoms...I don’t know if you should be talking.”
Caro crossed his arms. “Well...at least I-“
“Both of you, stop arguing! You’ll wake up every Pokemon in this entire place.”
Kris scolded her two friends, paws crossed across her cream-furred chest. She was a female Persian who had developed the intriguing ability to navigate on her hind legs. Other than the fact that she ran a bit faster than a standard Persian, and she could reach higher and had greater ability to hold things, this... unique aspect of the feline Pokemon honestly wasn’t all that helpful. The blue gem on her head – yes, Kris’ gem was blue, not red as it is on your standard everyday Persian– glinted and shined from the light and slight static her two friends made.
Caro, the Raichu, wasn’t all too thrilled about the concept of his friend – friend, not girlfriend, that would be gross - ordering him around. “Hey! Who are you to order us about?! You’re hardly older than we are!” Helio, the Magneton Caro had mentioned earlier, lost his center of balance and stumbled for a second, but then regained control and moved on.
“Anyway...” Kris said with a little bit of a loud tone to get past the voices of the two Electric Pokemon – well, Caro, anyway, Helio never seemed o raise his voice often - doing her best to forget about how much her two friends squabbled and trying to change the subject to something a bit more interesting, “We need to keep going, you two. The Treasure is probably just ahe-“
“What is this treasure?” Caro cut in, a bit annoyed. “You’ve been talking about it the whole time we’ve been in this stupid mountain, but we have absolutely no idea what ‘it’ is! You’re always like this, Kris... Dragging us into things without telling us the whole story. So please, for the sake of sanity, tell us what the heck you are talking about.”
The Persian rolled her eyes and snorted loudly. “Well if you want to know about it, fine. We’re searching for the Dimension Key, a-“
“An ancient artifact said to be able to grant any wish its wielder commands. Correct?” Helio cut in yet again, stopping and turning o the cream-colored cat Pokemon who was standing in between himself and Caro.
“Well, yeah, but I wanted to say it!” Kris glared at her mechanical friend for a second. “What, were you trying to impress me or something?” Caro joked immaturely. “No! I just...wanted to.” Kris argued back, raising her snout higher into the air, determined to ignore Caro. “Ooh, stop arguing! You’ll wake up every Pokemon in this entire place!” Caro taunted, complete with Kris’ Persian ears imitation. The taller cat Pokemon whacked him on the side of the head with a clenched paw and went to catch up with Helio, who had moved ahead.
Quickly running past him, Kris squealed with delight.
“H-hey...there it is! The Dimension Key!”
“You mean it really exists?” Caro gasped. Kris pointed to the center of the room, where a shiny black rock was sitting on a small pillar, about as tall as a couple of Pikachus standing on each others head, with moonlight coming down from a crack in the roof and just being sucked in, seeming to be never to be seen again. “I’m gonna get it first!” Kris taunted at Caro, and then lunged for the Key. “No, I am!” Caro fought back. Helio inspected the key from where he was hovering for a few seconds, and then his pupils grew smaller as a sinking feeling flooded over him. “No!” He shouted. “Don’t touch that! That’s not the Treasure, It’s the Galaxy-“
Helio didn’t have time to finish his sentence. As he moved forward, a bright light flowed out from where Kris and Caro had touched it, at the same time. “Oh no…” Helio muttered as the light became brighter, eventually forcing the three adventurers to close their eyes.
High above, a bright light blasted out of the huge mountain next to Treasure Town, shooting up straight into the heavens and probably outer space, too.
“Ha ha ha!” an old Alakazam chortled. “Looks like some more Pokemon got tricked by that stone!”
“Do you think we should take it out?” The Alakazam’s wife mused as she stepped out of the house, next to her husband. “It seems like a bit of a mean trick...” “No!” The old Alakazam shook his head. “They were destined to go there, otherwise they wouldn’t have made it that far. The Wild Pokemon would have probably defeated them by the time they got to the second chamber. It will be fun to see how they’ve changed if they return! Ha ha ha…”
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“-Key.” Helio finished, that sinking feeling in his stomach getting worse by the second. Yes, Magnetons have stomachs. They’re made of metal, like the rest of their bodies.
“Ugh…I feel sick…” Caro moaned. He hadn’t opened his eyes yet. “What happened? We touched the Dimension Key and then…”
“That wasn’t the Dimension Key.” Helio said. “It was the Galaxy Key, said to have the power to teleport the wielder to whichever world he or she thinks about.”
“But I wasn’t thinking about…here!” Caro and Kris objected at the same time. They glared intensely at each other for a moment, but then Caro looked away. “Ha ha!” Kris taunted and smirked at Caro. “I got you! Score one for me! Now all you need is one point, He-“ Kris stopped midsentence as she looked at her friend. She was about to open her mouth, when-
“BWAAAH!” Caro screamed. He looked down at himself – or, at least what he thought was himself. Instead of the sleek, streamlined, powerful body he had, there was a body that very vaguely resembled a Lucario’s and Machop’s in terms of anatomy. The tan-pink flesh on it was not hidden by any pelt, except for some pieces of a soft material on his torso and down to his legs, which also had no pelt covering the bare skin. He tried as hard as he could to lash his tail, but couldn’t. Turning around, he saw that the reason he couldn’t do such a thing is because he had no tail to lash! “H-h-human…? I’m a…Human?” he whimpered. Looking over at Kris, he saw the same thing with some slight differences, but he didn’t much care about those.
She was wearing a different pelt than he was. He had on an orange pelt on his chest, with a design that looked a bit like his Raichu torso – a small comfort, but a comfort nonetheless. His bottom pelt was a bunch of blues mashed together into little fragments. The only fur he had was some brownish fur on the top of his head, which cascaded down his back and stopped with what he thought was called a ‘Ponyta-tail’ collecting it all. She, on the other hand, had a cream pelt over her torso, and white pelts covering her pants.
“Uh…” Kris muttered, trying out her new human paws, “from what I know about Humans, we seem to be in the age range that Humans classify as ‘teenagers’. But you, Helio, look like what a Human classifies within the ‘Adult’ or ‘grown-up’ age range. Why is that?” She cocked her head, and yellowish hair flowed down her back, stopping near the bottom of her shoulder blades.
“So…Helio. Can I ask you something?”
“Yes.”
“Why do we look like this…and you look like that?”
Well, I felt like migrating my (not so) MAJORLY SUCCESSFUL AND WIDELY LOVED work of fanfiction to The Cave of Dragonflies to share with you guys because quite frankly, I think it's a pretty good story and I'm very proud of it. (Despite what the first chapter looks like, it is NOT PMD in reverse. ;D) Uhh... yeah. There is a plot twist that I highly doubt anyone who hasn't read it already will see coming - unless they could find and analyze the Three Clues of Cleverly-Placed and Obscure Hinting, which I don't think any of you can do. xD) Anyways, this is the first chapter of The Galaxy Key in all of its glory and slight oldness...
BEGIN Chapter One;
Your Universe and You
I'm sorry for the length of this chapter. Bear with me, please!
Your Universe and You
I'm sorry for the length of this chapter. Bear with me, please!
A low buzzing sound filled the labyrinthine passageways and echoed off of the brown rock walls. This slight annoyance seemed innocent enough, being that one of the travelers in such a cave happens to be a Magneton, but a Raichu traveling with him sees things quite a bit differently...
“Holy Arceus! Helio, shut off that buzzing! It’s getting on my nerves!”
“I can’t help it. I am a Magneton, in case you hadn’t noticed. It is something that I just do.”
“Well, turn it off!”
“I can’t.”
“Why?”
“...”
“Ha! No comment. I beat you!”
“But, still.” Helio replied. “The natural buzzing I emit is nothing like what happens to you when a female Pokemon walks by. Your eyes start to get glazed over, you drop whatever you’re holding, little electric sparks start emitting everywhere from you, and you start speaking gibberish, to name a few sympptoms...I don’t know if you should be talking.”
Caro crossed his arms. “Well...at least I-“
“Both of you, stop arguing! You’ll wake up every Pokemon in this entire place.”
Kris scolded her two friends, paws crossed across her cream-furred chest. She was a female Persian who had developed the intriguing ability to navigate on her hind legs. Other than the fact that she ran a bit faster than a standard Persian, and she could reach higher and had greater ability to hold things, this... unique aspect of the feline Pokemon honestly wasn’t all that helpful. The blue gem on her head – yes, Kris’ gem was blue, not red as it is on your standard everyday Persian– glinted and shined from the light and slight static her two friends made.
Caro, the Raichu, wasn’t all too thrilled about the concept of his friend – friend, not girlfriend, that would be gross - ordering him around. “Hey! Who are you to order us about?! You’re hardly older than we are!” Helio, the Magneton Caro had mentioned earlier, lost his center of balance and stumbled for a second, but then regained control and moved on.
“Anyway...” Kris said with a little bit of a loud tone to get past the voices of the two Electric Pokemon – well, Caro, anyway, Helio never seemed o raise his voice often - doing her best to forget about how much her two friends squabbled and trying to change the subject to something a bit more interesting, “We need to keep going, you two. The Treasure is probably just ahe-“
“What is this treasure?” Caro cut in, a bit annoyed. “You’ve been talking about it the whole time we’ve been in this stupid mountain, but we have absolutely no idea what ‘it’ is! You’re always like this, Kris... Dragging us into things without telling us the whole story. So please, for the sake of sanity, tell us what the heck you are talking about.”
The Persian rolled her eyes and snorted loudly. “Well if you want to know about it, fine. We’re searching for the Dimension Key, a-“
“An ancient artifact said to be able to grant any wish its wielder commands. Correct?” Helio cut in yet again, stopping and turning o the cream-colored cat Pokemon who was standing in between himself and Caro.
“Well, yeah, but I wanted to say it!” Kris glared at her mechanical friend for a second. “What, were you trying to impress me or something?” Caro joked immaturely. “No! I just...wanted to.” Kris argued back, raising her snout higher into the air, determined to ignore Caro. “Ooh, stop arguing! You’ll wake up every Pokemon in this entire place!” Caro taunted, complete with Kris’ Persian ears imitation. The taller cat Pokemon whacked him on the side of the head with a clenched paw and went to catch up with Helio, who had moved ahead.
Quickly running past him, Kris squealed with delight.
“H-hey...there it is! The Dimension Key!”
“You mean it really exists?” Caro gasped. Kris pointed to the center of the room, where a shiny black rock was sitting on a small pillar, about as tall as a couple of Pikachus standing on each others head, with moonlight coming down from a crack in the roof and just being sucked in, seeming to be never to be seen again. “I’m gonna get it first!” Kris taunted at Caro, and then lunged for the Key. “No, I am!” Caro fought back. Helio inspected the key from where he was hovering for a few seconds, and then his pupils grew smaller as a sinking feeling flooded over him. “No!” He shouted. “Don’t touch that! That’s not the Treasure, It’s the Galaxy-“
Helio didn’t have time to finish his sentence. As he moved forward, a bright light flowed out from where Kris and Caro had touched it, at the same time. “Oh no…” Helio muttered as the light became brighter, eventually forcing the three adventurers to close their eyes.
High above, a bright light blasted out of the huge mountain next to Treasure Town, shooting up straight into the heavens and probably outer space, too.
“Ha ha ha!” an old Alakazam chortled. “Looks like some more Pokemon got tricked by that stone!”
“Do you think we should take it out?” The Alakazam’s wife mused as she stepped out of the house, next to her husband. “It seems like a bit of a mean trick...” “No!” The old Alakazam shook his head. “They were destined to go there, otherwise they wouldn’t have made it that far. The Wild Pokemon would have probably defeated them by the time they got to the second chamber. It will be fun to see how they’ve changed if they return! Ha ha ha…”
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“-Key.” Helio finished, that sinking feeling in his stomach getting worse by the second. Yes, Magnetons have stomachs. They’re made of metal, like the rest of their bodies.
“Ugh…I feel sick…” Caro moaned. He hadn’t opened his eyes yet. “What happened? We touched the Dimension Key and then…”
“That wasn’t the Dimension Key.” Helio said. “It was the Galaxy Key, said to have the power to teleport the wielder to whichever world he or she thinks about.”
“But I wasn’t thinking about…here!” Caro and Kris objected at the same time. They glared intensely at each other for a moment, but then Caro looked away. “Ha ha!” Kris taunted and smirked at Caro. “I got you! Score one for me! Now all you need is one point, He-“ Kris stopped midsentence as she looked at her friend. She was about to open her mouth, when-
“BWAAAH!” Caro screamed. He looked down at himself – or, at least what he thought was himself. Instead of the sleek, streamlined, powerful body he had, there was a body that very vaguely resembled a Lucario’s and Machop’s in terms of anatomy. The tan-pink flesh on it was not hidden by any pelt, except for some pieces of a soft material on his torso and down to his legs, which also had no pelt covering the bare skin. He tried as hard as he could to lash his tail, but couldn’t. Turning around, he saw that the reason he couldn’t do such a thing is because he had no tail to lash! “H-h-human…? I’m a…Human?” he whimpered. Looking over at Kris, he saw the same thing with some slight differences, but he didn’t much care about those.
She was wearing a different pelt than he was. He had on an orange pelt on his chest, with a design that looked a bit like his Raichu torso – a small comfort, but a comfort nonetheless. His bottom pelt was a bunch of blues mashed together into little fragments. The only fur he had was some brownish fur on the top of his head, which cascaded down his back and stopped with what he thought was called a ‘Ponyta-tail’ collecting it all. She, on the other hand, had a cream pelt over her torso, and white pelts covering her pants.
“Uh…” Kris muttered, trying out her new human paws, “from what I know about Humans, we seem to be in the age range that Humans classify as ‘teenagers’. But you, Helio, look like what a Human classifies within the ‘Adult’ or ‘grown-up’ age range. Why is that?” She cocked her head, and yellowish hair flowed down her back, stopping near the bottom of her shoulder blades.
“So…Helio. Can I ask you something?”
“Yes.”
“Why do we look like this…and you look like that?”
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