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To my Gameboy Advance SP

Charizard Morph

Charizard Morph

has doomed us all.
Gameboy Gameboy
I've had you fo(u)r years
Into my pocket you disappear
With you I fought my first battles
And smiled a lot
And into the school
You were brought

Gameboy Gameboy
I’ve had you for years
Today I almost burst into tears
As you fell off the table and onto the floor
I heard a crack and thought I would play you no more

Gameboy Gameboy
I’ve had you for years
You almost confirmed my fears
As I carefully picked you up and had a look
To see the damages that you took

Gameboy Gameboy
I’ll have you for years to come
Fearfully I’d thought you were done
But a careful hand and some super glue
Quickly aided and happily fixed you
I flipped your switch
Your screen beeped on
Now all of my fears are gone

Gameboy Gameboy
What can I say?
I’ll have you until my dying day
That little green flower I stuck on with tape
Your fading blue simple square shape
I see you on the desk sitting there
Yes little game system
We make a great pair​
 
Aww, that's cute. ^^ I think it would be nicer if the pace was a little slower, though. Perhaps you could add commas between the "Gameboy Gameboy"? And a few more descriptive words might help the pace, too. The descriptions in the last paragraph are good. =D
 
That is too awesome. And as Sandstone-Shadow said, slowing it down would be a good idea. Maybe even add something like: Gameboy, oh Gameboy. Or something.
 
Ha. I love this poem XD. The 'Gameboy, oh Gameboy' instead of 'Gameboy Gameboy' is a good idea, and would make this poem quite a bit better, in my oppinion.

Hmm... this poem reminds me of when my DS broke. But it didn't fall or anything, I opened it (not even more forcefully than normally) and the hinge cracked D: *carresses new DS* I'll never let anything like that happen to this one though, if I can help it.
 
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