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Skyman

Skyman

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  • Not Meowth
    Not Meowth
    But so does Joltik.
    He wishes he could find a box just as pretty as they are, so he can stop carrying them round in his pocket.
    Shiny Grimer
    I feel for you, man. :| I totally understand your situation. I don't know what to say besides the obvious "keep your head up and keep going," but I'd like to give you a hug. *hug*
    Not Meowth
    Yeah, I was thinking of picking Gigalith. But I don't think it really has anything to counter Escavalier or Ferrothorn.

    Or you could post commands in your battle with Kratos. Just putting that out there :3
    Stormecho
    In case you want to know, my FF.net profile is here.

    The first is that you should add more description of the surroundings and the pokemon. The first chapter is a short InfoDump, and we learn very little about anything other than the exposition. Show some personality, maybe add some dialogue to spice it up. It certainly is cool and flattering to have a fanfic based off of Sanctic, though~ I was just going to write drabbles. Did you tell Arylett about it?
    Stormecho
    Eeep, computer problems. D: My sympathies.

    I'm glad it's unique, at least.

    Link me to your fanfic? I write them myself, actually, so if you like I could review it, give some constructive crit~
    Stormecho
    May I ask how it's different? I thought it was pretty stereotypical for a RP set up...

    That is a lot of stuff though, so your reluctance to pile anything more on your plate makes sense.

    The length tends to be a bit on the short side - try to find a balance between actions and thoughts, so as to not be completely introspective or all action, to both lengthen the post and provide for more insight into your character. That's really how I RP, constantly going through a balancing act. Other than that... interact a lot, try to constantly shape what's going on around you and... you'll get better as you go along. ^^
    Stormecho
    Um - I am totally not stalking you! Just wanted to ask if anything in the set up of DotP made it hard for you to get into? If it's something that I can revise and make better, I'll get right on that.
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