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Oh hell, do everyone draw better then me? :<
I have to say you draw rather good, not the best ever, maybe, but good non the less.

I'm not very good at criticizing, but but Suerte looks a little stiff, try another position next time.
 
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: D These are pretty good! Proportions seem right for the most part. This is a good point to tinker around with EVERYTHING to make your own unique style. Although, one thing that bothers me in the Suerte picture is that the bangs are sticking out oddly from the hat. It looks like they're appearing out of the brim of the hat.
 
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Yeah, that was pretty much directly copied from a screenshot... and I have most details on low.

:P
 
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Haha 'this artwork was posted 19hours 19minutes and 19sexonds ago ' haha i timed it perfectly :DD, the only thing is the Zangoose seems a little shorter than im used to, but my zan(geese?) usually have longer legs than theyr supposed to
 
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Haha. Good thinking. :3 ..now...Mr.Momo, REQUEST SOEM ARTWERK NAO! Please and thank you.
 
Like the fourth bump in a row, but srsly.

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I'd really like a critique on this one, I'm kind of unconfident with my women.
 
Massive mistake would be the legs. They're practically toothpicks. Instead of a slight curve behind the leg, have two lines going away from the front of the leg. Look at some manga to see what I mean. Magical Girl stuff works, with all the short skirts. Also, the arms. The muscles seem to be in the wrong place. Use yourself as a reference.
 
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You might wanna work on the feet a bit; the heels on her shoes are awkward, and one of them is bending backwards. Her feet also look like they have no heels, so it looks like she's got bananas for feet. You might also want to work on the limbs; they look like twigs, and they aren't very proportionate to the torso.

And just to sound like a perv, work on that cleavage, yo! >D

It's a pretty decent picture, but if you work on the above things I mentioned, it can get better.
 
Thanks for the tips, I'm keeping those in mind when I draw now.

If only women weren't so damn difficult to draw.
 
That last one you posted has an excellent head and upper body, but the arms and legs are too thin to match. The stomach area also looks a little off... not sure how to describe it, but I think it's too... straight. Not bad though, keep going. =)

Oddly, I find girls easier to draw than guys, (even though I'm male o_O) mainly because male hair and chests are strangely hard for me to draw. >_> It's also more interesting to draw girls. =P I've made progress on the hair, but my guys still look kinda weird. I find girls easier because I like long hair, (and I can draw it better) and their body curves are actually easier to draw once you get the hang of it.
 
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