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Lines that kinda look like stuff

I apologize for another double post, but I'd like a critique again if you people would be so kind.

Warrioress_Tenys_by_Draconic_Aura.jpg


I'm aware the front arm is weird, I couldn't keep steady while inking.
 
Both of the arms a little too long, and her right arm is longer than her left. You might also want to work on the angle of her face; as in, maybe raising her nose a little bit, because it looks like it's too close to the mouth and chin. And she's got... no chest? Flat seems unlikely with the way you drew her...
 
Okay about the arm thing but that's her back, her head's just turned and her chest is facing away from you.
 
It's okay. from the looks of things it's only a line or two from correction.

Anyway, I should have posted in your thread long ago. I really like the stuff you're producing. I'll post properly some other time.
 
Momoharu said:
I apologize for another double post, but I'd like a critique again if you people would be so kind.

Warrioress_Tenys_by_Draconic_Aura.jpg


I'm aware the front arm is weird, I couldn't keep steady while inking.
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Her right foot is twisted a bit too far. It's a rather unnatural way to stand.
 
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