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Xikaze said:
I suppose I will put Obamasnow here also.
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Chaaaaaange!
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Lol.

I don't know how to crit it, but where did you get the Obama pic? Is it a pixel-over?
 
It's a very careful scratch. I pixel-over'd a lot of it, but a lot was improvised.

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I suppose I will throw this scratch gardevoir thing here too.

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^^^Awesome! It's so good~

Crit for an Eevee/Skitty splice I did...

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No I didn't kill the tail. It was already like that on Frame 2 of Skitty's platinum sprite{I think}. I'm quite sure.
 
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LOLOL!

Seriously, I've never seen something so creative and funny in my whole Pokemon spriting career (which has lasted for only about 6 months xD). The dithering is not over-used, which makes it look really detailed, and you've shaded under parts like the nose and the mouth.

But the only problem I spot is the shading needs to be flipped. The light comes from the left-hand side, not the right-hand. That problem is apparent on the Abomasnow bits of the sprite and the outline. Try not the over-crowd the sprite with shades to make it look more 3-D. Add some shading to the hair too, about 1 or 2 shades will be fine.
 
Yeah Adnan, I'd just realized I forgot to reshade the Abomasnow sprite after I flipped it. O: I should get around to redoing that.
 
Okay, so I randomly decided to do a devamp. I don't know why, I just did. And I'm really happy with it.

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Critique?
 
Here are my new versions of the Char line as Artic pokemon, which are a new group of pokemon I'm thinking about putting in my game. The artic pokemo would be slightly stronger nd have different abilities than there normal cousins. Please tell me how I can make them better and whether or not you think they are a good idea. Any crits are welcome.
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White Wolf said:
Here are my new versions of the Char line as Artic pokemon, which are a new group of pokemon I'm thinking about putting in my game. The artic pokemo would be slightly stronger nd have different abilities than there normal cousins. Please tell me how I can make them better and whether or not you think they are a good idea. Any crits are welcome.
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Well, I work for the game, so... don't kill meh, boss!XD
Well, you said they were artic pokemon, right? Well, those are recolored, really. Try, for example, something like making the flames icy-like.
Oh, and in the game, wouldn't it really work if you put in an icy-cold area?
 
Oh sorry for not putting this in the first post, these are just recolours I did to show my idea and see if people would like it. Thanks for the suggestions, I'll try the ice tail thing when I get time and about the icy areas ingame, these are going to be like high up on the mountains where it's hard to get too and really cold places like mountain clearings, the glaciers and places like that. Any more suggestions anyone?

Jewel = The fires exactly the same as the normal fire except with different colours.
 
okay, like random-typhoon said, you should add some icy parts to it. And maybe you should even it out with the opposite, so it won't just be ice pokemon. Like, making a fire version too.
 
Thanks for the suggestions. I'm going to add some ice things to the pokemon but the pokemon aren't complete ice types, they are just a new breed of normal pokemon and so I'm going to change some of the body parts to adapt the body parts to protect the pokemon against the cold such as thicker skin, larger muscle insulating and thicker fur and things like that.
 
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