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Warriors Fan Club

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So demeaning towards gays! Though all the rest of the chapters made me laugh like crazy, this one just pissed me off.
...but maybe that's because I'm in an insanely irritated mood right now =x

Also StarStar ftw! [/sarcasm] =O xDD
 
Badfic can haz new chapter? =O =D

So Hawkfrost is the savior and when GleamStar realizes she's in love with him, she says "MOOOOO..."? Since when did cats moo? xDD
 
The proper spelling is Clan. With a capital C. God does spelling it wrong piss me off considering some Clan name is repeated every frickin' page
 
are you trying to trollfic? best to be sure before I start picking on your atrocious use of punctuation, out-of-character loancharacters, use of words not in vocabulary where an alternative is available ('mom' is never used, that I know of, at least) and capitalization.
 
sreservoir said:
('mom' is never used, that I know of, at least)
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using it, or the words "dad", "boy" or "girl" (yes I have seen the latter two), is kind of a tip-off to a bad/troll fic. It's also worth noting that the cats in the actual books never refer to their parents as "Mother" and "Father" (or synonyms thereof); they use the cat's actual name... for the most part. There's actually been a few times where a cat's called their mother or father Mother or Father (the example that springs to mind is Squirrelflight calling Firestar "Father" when he gets hit by a tree in Dawn), but such occurrences are few and far between.

also you'd be surprised just how many fanfics fail in the same ways. (click a link, get badfic, except in a few circumstances)
 
Fail?

No, I'm not trying to be annoying. I would like some constructive criticism, but if people are just going to tell me I'm terrible all the time, I might as well take it down. At least I tried, anyway :(

On a different note, now that Battles of the Clans is out, does anyone have a discussion about it?
 
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