Blaziking the God General
Replicaaa!
Hopefully, this will be better than my past two attempts. The prologue is in the form of a letter, more will be explained when I finish Chapter One. Enjoy...?...?
Prologue
If you’re reading this, it’s obvious that I’ve been killed. You finally got to me. I admit it. I wasn’t good enough to escape your grasp. Congrats. You’ve put me six feet under. But what you all didn’t realize was that I knew something that everyone on this planet didn’t. I robbed banks, committed murders, and committed countless other crimes to find out what I know now.
But if you expect me to tell you right away, you’re wrong. I told many people over time, but you killed them. You bastards killed them all. You thought they were a threat to society by knowing me. So now you want to know what I know? Well, good luck with that. But I will tell you the subject of which I know of.
The end of the world; Pokemon and human. I know when the human civilization will end, and when the Pokemon civilization will end. It won’t be because the sun enlarges; it won’t be because of ‘global warming’, it will be for another reason you never foresaw. The ruin of the world will come from one being. I know who they are.
But I wouldn’t be as cruel not to tell you who this being is. Actually, I will tell you. But not in this letter. No, I will have you run on a wild goose chase to find the real answer. In all my years of traveling, I hid the document containing the name of the being to bring about the destruction of the world. Find the document, kill the being, and you will be saved.
The road to find this document will be hard; whether you have found this letter soon after I died, or after the human race has been wiped off the face of the planet. You, whether you are a Pokemon or human, have been given my trust that you will expose to the world the being who is to destroy everyone; everything. The document will have clear instructions as to what you have to do to keep the world alive.
Start looking.
-Nore, criminal mastermind
There's plenty to critique here, so critiquing is desired.
Prologue
If you’re reading this, it’s obvious that I’ve been killed. You finally got to me. I admit it. I wasn’t good enough to escape your grasp. Congrats. You’ve put me six feet under. But what you all didn’t realize was that I knew something that everyone on this planet didn’t. I robbed banks, committed murders, and committed countless other crimes to find out what I know now.
But if you expect me to tell you right away, you’re wrong. I told many people over time, but you killed them. You bastards killed them all. You thought they were a threat to society by knowing me. So now you want to know what I know? Well, good luck with that. But I will tell you the subject of which I know of.
The end of the world; Pokemon and human. I know when the human civilization will end, and when the Pokemon civilization will end. It won’t be because the sun enlarges; it won’t be because of ‘global warming’, it will be for another reason you never foresaw. The ruin of the world will come from one being. I know who they are.
But I wouldn’t be as cruel not to tell you who this being is. Actually, I will tell you. But not in this letter. No, I will have you run on a wild goose chase to find the real answer. In all my years of traveling, I hid the document containing the name of the being to bring about the destruction of the world. Find the document, kill the being, and you will be saved.
The road to find this document will be hard; whether you have found this letter soon after I died, or after the human race has been wiped off the face of the planet. You, whether you are a Pokemon or human, have been given my trust that you will expose to the world the being who is to destroy everyone; everything. The document will have clear instructions as to what you have to do to keep the world alive.
Start looking.
-Nore, criminal mastermind
There's plenty to critique here, so critiquing is desired.
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