Yenaa's Poetry

[Yenaa]

Well, I'm a poet, and I dream to be a big huge poet, with books published and printed. So I write now, so I can save them for when I get older.

Silly
Don't be silly,
little girl,
I see you standing there,
What is that, you say?
That no one seems to care?
Don't be silly,
little girl,
just know I'm always here ,
and when you know someone is there,
there's nothing really to fear.

But what is that, you say?
That I might go away?
Ah, silly little girl,
my spirit is here to stay.


Fire and Water
Drown your sorrows, drown your fear,
let the world be flooded with waters,
drowning anguish, drowning sadness, drowning despair,
but if the world would be drowned of all it's pity,
then it's rejoice would go up in flames.


Will have more soon! ^^;;;

 

[octobr]

Uh ... there's a way to end a line without a comma, you know.

such as not using a comma.

 

[Altmer]

the commas are a method of poetic expression you do not comprehend dear verne

i'm sure there is some hitherto unknown reason for this dramatic use of commas

 

[octobr]

the commas are a method of poetic expression you do not comprehend dear verne

i'm sure there is some hitherto unknown reason for this dramatic use of commas

I'm going to guess it's the same reason they've got shabby meter and the wrong 'its.'

 

[Commahappy]

It's because commas are just that awesome.

The first poem is kinda creepy...

 

[Yenaa]

It's because commas are just that awesome.

The first poem is kinda creepy...

XD Thanks

Songs
The very way I walk,
the very way I speak
the very tone I take,
at it's highest peak
is no where near
equivalent
to they way I sing my song
I hum my sacred melody
all the day long.

I sing my tales
I sing my heart
to it's mild content
and when I'm done,
my day has begun,
and I start to sing again.

 

[Altmer]

I'm going to guess it's the same reason they've got shabby meter and the wrong 'its.'

this "shabbiness" is a useful poetic technique Verne! it is so avant-garde

 

[Furretsu]

this "shabbiness" is a useful poetic technique Verne! it is so avant-garde

can you use avant-garde outside of music?

edit: just wiki'd it, it turns out you can!

 

[Altmer]

yes you can :P

 

[Commahappy]

You're last poem was much better than the first two.

 

[octobr]

can you use avant-garde outside of music?

edit: just wiki'd it, it turns out you can!

I've never even heard it used for music. I've only experienced it as a fashion term, but it really applies to all arts.

 

[Yenaa]

You're last poem was much better than the first two.

XD maybe because it's not a depressing one. I'll have another done soon.

 

[Altmer]

I've never even heard it used for music. I've only experienced it as a fashion term, but it really applies to all arts.

I like some avant-garde metal, hence...