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Okay, so I tried a devamp.

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Crit, please?
 
Eh, the part of the tail right above the ear is missing some outline, and the flower looks a bit awkward were it is, also it looks dead because of the color, and the tail doesn't quite look 'attached' get rid of a couple of lines on the base that touches the back, other wise it looks fine :D
 
Ice tiger said:
^ Disturbing, how's that? But nice ;D
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Went on a visit on all the cchans, very disturbed.

Though the character Anon is a great piece to do from an artist's point of view. It's sort of the dalek effect; you can't connect with it because it's not human to us so we fear it. It's fun to draw.
 
Enekuro: The scratch is awesome. ily. BUt the outline's all black again... Bad you. And.. I think those are splices? Nothing too special, nothing too terrible, either.

Ice tiger: The right(our right) arm of Snorlax is... messed up pixelated. I can't realy say much, I don't revamp/devamp.

Raichu Grunt: Same thing. The Entei has no shading, but if it's the devamp, sue me. Errm.

Not very helpful, except for Enekuro. Which still isn't helpful. Stop doing revamps/devamps people
 
And the Front leg is jointed incorrectly, it looks wrong, other than that, nice sprite!
 
^:huh:How can the front leg be placed on incorrectly?I didn't move ninetales leg that is how it original sprite's leg looked.
 
The halo is turned the wrong way if you want the open end to be at the back of the head.

And DarkArmour is right.
 
Dragon said:
The halo is turned the wrong way if you want the open end to be at the back of the head.

And DarkArmour is right.
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The halo's fine. It gives the sense that the halo is thin and that it sort of vanishes from sight the further it went.
 
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