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[Lucas₇₅₅]

Good but it needs some black lines on Kakashi, cause it just looks off

Nah, brighter outlines is just my style when it comes to trainer sprites. I tried adding black outlines and it looks off to me.

 

[Darksong]

Fixed baby Skarmory, as in the colors C+C please!

Baby skarmory?

It looks mostly like a normal Skarmory to me. You could try adding something like a stubbier tail and wings, or making it slightly darker in color.

Also, the top of its left (our right) wing looks very thin compared to the one opposite from us. The highlight on its belly looks odd; try making it round rather than spiky.

 

[wolftamer9]

Fixed baby Skarmory, as in the colors C+C please!

not to be mean/imply untrue things, but I just made a baby of skarmory for wsc 12. but either way, it looks like you just took a skarmory sprite and made it smaller in some ways.

 

[Starly]

not to be mean/imply untrue things, but I just made a baby of skarmory for wsc 12. but either way, it looks like you just took a skarmory sprite and made it smaller in some ways.

Just saying, I made the baby one about a year ago, and I never use any shrinking tools

 

[wolftamer9]

okay, that's fine, but it still seems like it's just a modification of the original sprite.

 

[wolftamer9]

OMG how could I be double posting?!

I finished up a pixel over of a drawing of a samurai pokemon I made a while back.

C+CC?

 

[sankatu]

I made a sprite, it is a garchomp/ bulbasaur splice, I would like some feedabck.

 

[Mai]

It needs some more shading,sankatu. And just putting the head on it looks odd.
And here's a simple zigzagoon and poochyena sprite.

I used emerald and d/p/pl sprites

 

[Tiffano]

This is Beline!
It's half black and white (but you can't see the black that well becaue of the position it's in) and obviously a cat. It's one of my fakemon for whatever stories conjure up in my mind. :)
C&C Please. :)

 

[sankatu]

Okay, second attempt, is this any better?

It is a garchomp/venusaur sprite.

 

[Lucas₇₅₅]

This is Beline!
It's half black and white (but you can't see the black that well becaue of the position it's in) and obviously a cat. It's one of my fakemon for whatever stories conjure up in my mind. :)
C&C Please. :)

It looks pretty nice. One thing I notice is that the outlines around the part of the legs that overlap the body are maybe a bit to light, but they extend too far. Try shortening them. Another small nitpick is the nose. It looks too bright in contrast with the black, try making it a darker gray.

Okay, second attempt, is this any better?

It is a garchomp/venusaur sprite.

The major issue is that there's not much splicing here. Regardless, the tips of the claws are green for some reason. Try fixing that. Otherwise, there are no quality issues, it's just too much like Venusaur and not enough like Garchomp.



Okay, here's mine. It's a pre-evolution to Latios that I'm entering into a contest. It's all scratch, by the way. One thing I'm woried about is if it looks too much like a small version of Latios rather than a pre-evolution. If you think it does, I'd like some suggestions on how to fix that.

 

[Blastoise Fortooate]

Well, I'll agree that it looks a lot like Latias; maybe shortening the neck or making the colors lighter would help?

From a technical standpoint, it's great: The pose is cute, and I want to huggle it until it goes kerplotz. The shading's done really well, too.

 

[Lucas₇₅₅]

I did lighten the colors. Well, I lightened the blue, maybe I should do so with the gray.

Maybe I could shorten the neck, but I'm getting wary about making his sprite smaller. It's a little small as it is.

 

[Tiffano]

It's so adorable! But maybe you should lighten up the colors, maybe to like a baby blue? And maybe a little stub for the ear-like things Latios and Latias have.

Is this better now?

 

[Lucas₇₅₅]

It's a little better, but the leg outlines that go over the main body are still too long. See how they almost go up to its back? They should be a little shorter.
Also, I purposely left out the ear stubs to make it look less developed.

Okay, made it a little brighter and shortened the neck.

Better?

 

[Aisling]

If you ask me, I think it needs darker outlines, or at least more shades that contrast more if you're going for D/P style.
The funny leg thing on our left looks a little too small, and his rear end looks too square on the right.

 

[Lucas₇₅₅]

I see your point. Is this better?

 

[Aisling]

Yes, much better. Still looking a little square on the right, but the shading looks better.

 

[Starly]

C+C anyone? For contest

 

[Medical Meccanica]

Well, it's nice, but it's... bland. Maybe add some more designs? I don't think anyone's ever won a contest with something so simple. :P
Oh, and put the tail on the other side so it's not obscured by the basket.

Hypno evo and an unfinished fakemon line