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  • 1) Obviously not. =P
    2) Oh, THAT manga. Okay, now I get what you're talking about. ^^; (It surprised me, too, the first time I saw it).
    xD
    Sure, why not? You got my curiosity gears— wait, your mom knows you go to this site? O_o

    P.S. Wait, who's a bastard? :?
    ...And you do realize which social groups I'm in, correct? OwO *Curiosity gears turn on*
    ....You do realize he [Scyther] is going to see your message, right? Meh, so long as he's okay with it, there will no consequences. =P

    Well, if you're that set to change your username to Lars, then go for it. I honestly never would've guessed that Twiggy is some creepy woman (now you got me curious. ^^;).

    EDIT: 1) It's the preview for the next episode of the anime airing this Thursday.
    2) Who knows what it could mean? *Shrugs*
    Why? I'll just copy/paste what I told Blazie:

    "You may have noticed already by the time you read this (or not if Butterfree denied/has not seen my request) but I have changed my username. Why? Simple: I just felt the urge to change my username is all. =P In a more philosophical view, though (in other words, gibberish just to make me seem intelligent when in fact I just felt the urge to change my username), the name "Skroy Horitz" is not mine to begin with; he is an anthropomorphic fox character who I created for a series of mine I abandoned years ago, and subsequently I used my own character's name to have a social online identity. However, Skroy is only a part of my conscience, not the whole thing! Therefore, I decided to have a new identity, one that actually represents myself as a whole being and not just a part of it."

    How? Ask Butterfree. =P
    Na, cause it's cards, it's gonna just be ATK and DEF, kinda like Yu-Gi-Oh. The origanal idea is that when they battle, if your card has a higher attack than their defence, the other card loses. Though we probably could implement Sp ATK and all that in their aswell. Maybe like top trumps? choose whether to battle in Speed or attack? That'd work, yeah, do that.
    Yeah please. Could you do Genration 2 for me? i'm doing all of them, so it'll take a few days. Each poke has an ATK value and DEF value between 1 and 15. Final stages are generally in the 10-15 area, first 1-7, and inbetweens are around 5 - 13. Thanks for the help.

    PS don't do the legendaries.
    yeah, i got it. i'm just a bit busy now trying to create Attack and Defense points for All the pokemon. it is annoying.
    I asked you for help because the TEC systems were quite well thought out, yeah. My systems are quite complex so i needed someone who had been able to competently shown to be able to do that stuff, which you have with TEC.
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    I like the idea for the TEC- the dark core so far. Just to clarify, the rescue teams are going to be asked to bring back the cores, or will we just stumble across them?
    Well, basically, the RPers are on an Island called Tecog. This island is the home of the Pokemon TCG tournament. The battles work like this: The player draws 6 cards, one of should hopefully have a picture of pokemon on on it. They play the basic pokemon, lets say, Zubat, and the card glows. The pokemon then springs from this card. They all have have ATK and DEF points, which I'll go into when i make the thread. Then they battle, etc, and whatnot. Winner is chosen from the Tecog tournament, and everythings fine. Usually. This time, someone released a virus into the system, and pokemon are attacking the trainers. Basically, the RPers have got to find out who it is. Us two will be in charge of battles, and play NPCs. Is that a bit clearer?
    yeah, you probably should remake it, i think everyone forgot about it sort-of. Also, i'm thinking about making a TCG based rp. Would you mind being a co-DM? I understand if you don't want to, but I'm going to need help with it because it's going to be the first RP i've ever mad.
    Yeah... Our finnish-teacher loves to see us suffer: we have to write a report about a book AND prepare a 5-10 minute speech for our classmates.
    Of course since I am complete shit at speaking, that is what I am most afraid of.
    I haven't been able to do it, since I've been stressed out by a school-work I have to do. :< I'll conjure up something sooner or later.
    It's where you write a 50,000 word story in the month of November. It's based on quanity, not quality.
    well, my friend Killerman says he's going to redo his form once he gets Internet access again, which he's having trouble doing, so he's probably going to be up for it.
    Yes, I have it. I dont like dedede in brawl. He is too fat and slow. In my oppinion, kirby and lucario are the best. Speaking of that will you level up the brawl card in my sig?
    Well, the swear will wear out if you repeat it a lot. :P Saying 'fuck' 60 times isn't going to be any more meaningful than saying 'help.' <lD

    Im surprisingly well, considering I had to walk in wet ground barefooted when there was about... -5 celsius degrees outside. D:
    No, not 100% negative; more or less, it's about 95% negative, mostly because he's not stating which elements of the story should be improved on.

    But that critique makes an implication I find. First, he said that there's "bad detail". In other words, show your readers the story, don't just tell them (basically, add more detail so that an image may form).

    Also, since it's "unoriginal", you will have to make the story more unique. For instance, a kid goes to the lab to get his starter Pokémon and afterward he leaves his hometown to battle, train and catch Pokémon as well as compete in the Pokémon League while stopping the bad guys from taking over the world. Boring and definitely unoriginal. How would you make it more original? If it were me, I would have the kid NOT be interested in going off on a journey but then he's asked to go somewhere and then a series of weird events unfold, which results in him competing in the League, despite the fact that he doesn't want to, and the bad guys could be random guy hunting the kid down.

    As for "The main character is late, doesn't that remind you of a certain ash ketchum?".... Okay, I don't get the 'late' part but, basically, give the character his/her own personality; don't make him/her similar to any other character.
    Don't let those "smashing" critiques make you feel all depressed to the point of suiciding. :( The only comments that you have to ignore are the ones that won't help you move forward (in other words, the one-liners, just ignore those). If you get a detailed review from somebody which states what you should improve on, listen to them whether they sound harsh or not. After all, the person who wrote the review took their sweet valuable time to give you their critique and they are in fact helping you to write better.

    In short, you have to learn how to take criticism, whether they're negative or positive. If you're serious about writing the story, then just write it out and hopefully somebody will come to tell you on how to improve on it.
    Well, if one starts to believe they're some sort of animal, I would have to say yes. It'd be best if you ask other people of what a furry is, too, so then you would get a better understanding of it.

    Concerning your story... as much as I would like to help, I'm really busy as well. ;~; Why not try asking people around Fanfiction.net? They have people there who could help correct your work; these people are called beta-readers. I know BlazieAura is one of them.
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