One-Shot Eric Damon Chronicles: Part One: "The Feral Girl of Sinnoh"

[Zeph]

Ok, fine! I am TRYING to improve!

Then please, for your own good, read GameFreakerZero's post carefully, probably more than one time, and take into account what he (and others) say. In my honest opinion, you have potential, and your fanfics could be good one day, if you actually learn to use construction criticism instead of casting it away as insults.

 

[Zuu]

I'm not saying this fic is better than anything else he's written but JESUS CHRIST GUYS HOW ASSHOLISH DO YOU HAVE TO BE

all you do is fucking jump on his topics. there is borderline flaming in these topics and it's not coming from him.

 

[OrangeAipom]

The only thing I see as flaming is Ketsu's post, to be honest.

 

[Zuu]

topics is plural, dude

also a bunch of people are essentially calling him stupid and bashing his writing ~.~

 

[Music Dragon]

I'm not saying this fic is better than anything else he's written but JESUS CHRIST GUYS HOW ASSHOLISH DO YOU HAVE TO BE

all you do is fucking jump on his topics. there is borderline flaming in these topics and it's not coming from him.

Although, to be honest, I think people would be doing him a favour if they managed to poke a hole in Celestial Blade's pathologically inflated ego. And I'm not just saying that because I dislike him.

 

[Zuu]

Although, to be honest, I think people would be doing him a favour if they managed to poke a hole in Celestial Blade's pathologically inflated ego. And I'm not just saying that because I dislike him.

I feel like they might have already done that. But hey, I could be wrong. I'm just doing what feels right to me.

 

[Music Dragon]

I feel like they might have already done that. But hey, I could be wrong. I'm just doing what feels right to me.

Yes, I know, and I agree with you (I'm willing to bet most of those who posted in this topic are just criticizing him because it makes them feel superior, anyway). But I can definitely relate to people who've grown tired of him.

 

[Retsu]

I'm 17 years old, y'know!

All the more reason for you to stop writing like a ten year old.

 

[Zuu]

Yes, I know, and I agree with you (I'm willing to bet most of those who posted in this topic are just criticizing him because it makes them feel superior, anyway). But I can definitely relate to people who've grown tired of him.

Well, I didn't say that I'm not tired of it. But it doesn't annoy me as much as people posting just to feel like internet tough guys.

I know I'm a huge hypocrite but I'm trying to fix that. :|

 

[Ibiku]

Hmm... *reads over celestials story*
It could use some buffing out....

Um, I'm the kind of preson who likes to rewrite thing over and over and over and over... So I was wondering if you would give me perrmission to rewrite you story. I'll give credit to you and stay true to the concept, but of course I will add some things in.

May a rewrite your story for fun Cesletial, giving full credit to you of course?

 

[Elfin]

You should let her do it! Ibiku is a really good writer. *coughcoughMIDNIGHTARCHIVEcoughhackcough*

 

[Evolutionary]

Yeah, let her do it and learn from her :)

 

[Celestial Blade]

Go ahead.

 

[Ibiku]

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! I'm so happeh! thank you Celestial! When I finish it I'll post it back here.

I must say though that quite a few things might change. after I post the rewrite You can ask me to change anything if it seems "off" from the story.

THANKIES! *gives you a hug*

 

[Celestial Blade]

Uh... you're Welcome?

 

[Celestial Blade]

Part Two will be called "Giovanni's Downfall", fyi.