It took me a bit to figure out that there's drop-down navigation; you might want to draw attention to it in some way. Maybe a white border around it or move it below the banner? It's right above the banner and I only look below the banner at first.... I hate drop-down navigation as a rule, preferring some sort of sidebar, but that's more of a personal taste thing. Also, the font that you used for 'menu' is pretty illegible.
You spelled 'grammar' wrong on your affiliation page. Also, do people still do anti-Pokemon sites? I think that's died down, by now. I hate the word "webmistress" (as well as pretty much every other word marked as female) but that's something that just bothers
me and I don't think that really matters.
Why do you say your birthdate and location but not your name on the About page and cite security reasons? It's often easier to figure out stuff about a person with a birthdate and location than it is for a full name. I'm not saying give out your name; just ... ditch the bit about security. Also, why do you have a physical description before everything else? I think that's one of the things people care about least.
You wrote 'confned' in the fifth paragraph. Reword "He is the first friend I was able to make him like Pokémon. My other best friends is also a video game fanatic who spends his time moding Half-Life 2 and filming movies." since your grammar there is kind of ... er. Yeah.
Anybody who you need to say "And to clear things up, I am not a terrorist and not all Muslims are terrorists." to is a really special snowflake who needs to be punched in the face. I'd nix that bit.
OKAY looking at the DP Review, I'd like to first say that
'utilize' is the dumbest word ever. Just use 'use'.
"Suprisingly enough, the professor's lab is not in the starting city in Diamond and Pearl. This is one of the best changes in the fourth generation." Why? Wouldn't the gameplay changes be more notable?
"Unlike the previous games, you were not left confused." Pokemon's always been exceedingly linear and pretty obvious about what to do next. Why's DP's more blatant linearity a good thing? Also ... how is the plot well-written? You claim this and go nowhere with it. Also, Pokemon. Pokemon is almost never about plot. Pokemon and plot go together like canned vegetables and tiny bits of rats and bugs: unfortunately, the two meet rather frequently and nobody's very happy about it.
"The problem I had with the training of Pokémon in this game was that Pokémon were easier to train and gained experience points faster than the previous generation. Battling with trainers was also very easy, but in my opinion, gave less experience points than battling wild Pokémon. The Battle Tower in Sinnoh is my favorite tower out of all the Battle Towers. You are allowed to participate in single battles and doubles battles. I liked the double battle feature the most. You are allowed to double battle with a friend over Wi-Fi or with a person you have met in your travels. A feature in Diamond/Pearl allows you to rest after a battle in the Battle Tower. You get to save and shut off your DS to continue your Battle Tower challenge later." ... buh? Battle Tower's been like that for a while. Also, how do you get the idea that trainers give less EXP than wild Pokemon...? There's a 1.5x modifier on trainer Pokemon EXP. o_O
"I know most Pokémon are based on real animals, but Pokémon in Sinnoh bear such a strong resemblance to their animal counterparts that it is hard to say that Sinnoh's Pokémon are "creative.""
... I don't see it.
"unlike the other Champions, used a variety of Pokémon differing from type." This comment makes Blue sad. :(
"It is an unique game because its gameplay is unlike any of the other Pokémon games." No, that makes Dash unique for the Pokemon series. Racing games in general are nothing new. Dash is just the first one with Pokemon characters. It's kind of like saying that Puzzle League, Puzzle Challenge, and Pinball are unique.
Why doesn't your PMD2 review mention roguelikes at all?
"The Mystery Dungeon series is the only Pokémon series to incorporate sleeping. " So what do you do in random people's houses in the main series while healing your Pokemon?
"The only place that you can use Waterfall without the Beacon Badge or the HM08: Waterfall is the Distortion World." I don't think you're using waterfall there, though. Aren't you just swimming up it?
"Chansey and Blissey share the spot for the highest amount of HP at Level 1. Their HP, at Level 1, is 16. The only possible way to have a Level 1 Chansey or Blissy is by hacking." ... or hatching a Chansey from an egg in DP without having given its parents hold the item for Happiny. Also, you spelled 'Blissey' wrong. Why not just say that Chansey and Blissey have the highest base HP out of all Pokemon?
"Kanto, Johto, and Sinnoh all end with an "oh" sound. The only region not to follow this pattern is Hoenn." You might as well just mention that they're all based off parts of Japan.
"Celebi is the only event Pokémon that is not obtainable in the English versions of Gold, Silver, and Crystal. The only way to obtain Celebi is by using a Gameshark." ...? Was there no Celebi event?
Sorry about this being pretty negative. :/
