Stories/comics you wrote/drew when you were younger!

[Mercury]

Ah, sweet memories.

When I was about 6 or 7, I wrote a little book, which I called 'The Polypods'. It had about 8 chapters, all one page, with a little picture I drew underneath. Polypods were little aliens with different amounts of legs. I wrote a sequel, and now they're a trilogy. 'The Polypods' 'Return to Zeno' and 'Eruption!'. I started a fourth one not long ago, but it's only half done. And it all started when I traced a picture of our Maths homework. My mum made me take the first two into school, and I was put into an assembly for it. Go me!

Also, me and my older cousin came up with a game type thing. They're about a frog called Bert Botcher. The first one is called 'Attack of the Super Babies' and the second is called 'Revenge of the Chocolate Brownie Monsters'. Yes I know, random. But we were bored so we do have an excuse. Kind of.

 

[Darksong]

Finally got photo:

Girl is named Elli, crying "Hello, world!" Zoom in if you have to.

Then, on the speech bubble to the left of the window, "Elli! Time for breakfast!" And then, "I never should have built the stairs."

With dialogue, I was very uncreative.

EDIT: Whoops, I forgot to mirror it. Sorry.

 

[Flazeah]

Ehehe. When I was younger - much younger, but I can't remember exactly how old I was - I wrote a little book-ish kind of thing in a small book with some blank pages called "The Book That Says How to Look After Guinea-Pigs" or something. And in the book, there were several strange and awful bits of advice, such as "if your friend throws your guinea-pig over the fence, hit your friend". Why your friend would throw your guinea-pig over the fence, I don't know.

 

[Vladimir Putin's LJ]

TINY AND FAT

The story of someone... who is tiny... and someone who is fat. And they, um... did stuff?

Not sure what else it was about. :-/ I even forgot when I drew the last comic (well, more like scribble; I can't draw for my life), but it was about a tiny guy and a fat guy. I think there was supposed to be a villain type guy who might have been thin...

i'd watch/read this.

I used to have a comic called 'Strangelife'. It was about a group of teenagers from different countries in a drom and they, er, had adventures I guess. Even though I'm very embarassed by the story now I still remember all the characters with fondness because they were the first people I ever made up and they lasted for years 'v'
The main character was called Brendan Blackberry. He was British, working class, very tall, with blue eyes and shaggy brown hair. He was clumsy and got into all sorts of wacky, innuendo-filled (for an eleven-year-old :v) situations. He was best friends with Silver and had a crush on Flora.
Silver was a blonde, super handsome rich dude. He has blonde hair and blue eyes, and he was Olga's fiancé. I think he was like half-Japanese, half-American.
Olga was Russian, very flirtatious, very pretty and very, very rich. Her dad was in the caviar business or something, and she was to marry Silver. He didn't care about her being a tease because he had multiple girlfriends at the same time, too :v
And finally, Flora. She was Australian, hot-headed and middle-class. She used beat up Brendan quite often but she had a crush on him, too.

Then there was Cat Paws, which is just creepy as hell. You had Kojiro, who was this sixteen-thousand year old demon cat-boy (I swear I hadn't (and still haven't) ever read Inuyasha) from a paralel world. He lives with Akane, a sixteen-year-old girl, in his cat form. Then he assumes his human form and tells her about how they're supposed to fight other demon-people for a year so he can pass his graduation exam or something. They meet lots of other people, discover Akane's best friend, goth-girl Mutsumi, also has a demon boy, a dog-man named Friedrich, and get up to all sorts of wacky adventures.
Then Kojiro gets kidnapped by his evil brother, Musashi, who had some sort of creepy incestual crush on him. Akane, Mutsumi, Friedrich and a bunch of other people have to travel to the paralel demon-world, cilmb this evil tower Musashi built and fight him. They meet two people (who are basically this world's Team Rocket) called Shizhao and Asuka, who are part of an organization called Atrox and try to thwart them for some reason. They become allies in the end, though.
Then they get to the top of the tower, kill Musashi and Akane marries Kojiro a few years later.
ugggh

Cat Paws did have positive effects, though. Shizhao and Musashi survived the character scrap, and they were used in a later story called Another Vision of the World, but Musashi is still creepy by being some sort of paedo. I'd just gotten into Yaoi so I thought this was pretty normal.

They survived another scrap. Musashi got re-named Miles because I got out of my shitty wapanese phase, and he became a sociopathic serial killer. He's still alive in my head, I just need to do more research to make a comic about him.
Shizhao evolved into Donald. Who is cool. Yep.

I still think Strangelife isn't that bad, and I might even consider using it again if I find a way to not make the story and characters to generic and mundane.

THE EDN

 

[Not Meowth]

"if your friend throws your guinea-pig over the fence, hit your friend". Why your friend would throw your guinea-pig over the fence, I don't know.

Seems like sound advice to me.

 

[spaekle]

Edit: Also, I really, really want to read your immature, long story if you still have a copy.

You have to show everyone the story. I don't care if the writing sucks, everyone would have sucked at some random age.

Unfortunately I don't still have the story itself, but I think I remember it well enough.

It was a series of four volumes that were about two or three pages long each. The story was written out in something resembling script format, so the chapters were relatively short and didn't take long to read.

Picture references: Dark Magician | Celtic Guardian (that was the one, thanks Flora!)

(I'm sorry if I create any disturbing images or ruin these characters for anyone. xD)

It started out with a reporter going to the Dark Magician's house to interview him; the Dark Magician answers the door in a bathrobe, which is a very terrible and disgusting thing (?). A big deal is made about that and how the Dark Magician likes to wear his bathrobe in public; the first volume ends with Dark Magician killing the reporter.

The second volume was basically the same thing only with the Celtic Guardian; a reporter comes to his house and this time finds him trying on a bikini. Celtic Guardian bursts into tears and admits that he's both gay and a stripper. (Note that I was still kind of "TEEHEE GAY PEOPLE" at the time of writing this. Oh, how times change.) The reporter asks him a bunch of inappropriate questions like how big his balls are. At some point the Dark Magician makes a cameo, and a long-lasting partnership between Magician and Guardian is forged. The reporter in this volume gets killed by both of them.

I don't really remember the third volume other than that it involved them stripping a whole lot, and I think a couple more reporters probably died in the process. In the end they decided to go to 'The Hop', probably because we were singing that "Let's Go to the Hop" song in chorus at the time of my writing the story.

In the fourth and final volume, our heroes go to The Hop and dance naked. They get ganged up on by reporters, who are both angry at them for killing so many of their fellow reporters and disgusted that the Dark Magician and Celtic Guardian wear bathrobes in public and strip, respectively. There's a great big showdown, and eventually Dark Magician and Celtic Guardian emerge victorious.

At the end of the story, there was a long Epilogue-type paragraph about what happened next. It basically said that the Dark Magician and the Celtic Guardian decided that killing people was really fun and so they set out to kill everyone in the world. The Dark Magician still wore his bathrobe, and the Celtic Guardian still stripped. They both lived happily ever after, I guess.

After I finished writing these I wrote some sequel-type things with Zelda characters in them, and I purposely tried to step up the inappropriate-ness (as much as I could being 11, anyway) for the sake of being funnier. I never really liked those very much, though, and after I got in trouble for the first ones I decided it'd be best to just stop it.

 

[Flareth]

O_O

the epilogue was awesome. Mass-murder. :D

Eh.....

I made a story called "When Dogs and Dragons Take Over the World". There were 3 dogs, but 1 I can remember: Shella. They grow giant and meet up with Scott, Ben, and Patrick, the dragons. Then it turns out it was all a bad dream. It spwaned 2 sequels I believe.

Where else are you gonna get:

"They ate buildings like a bakery with no cakes inside"

Eh...that was close enough. Pay attention to the "Bakery with no cakes inside" part.

 

[Evolutionary]

Unfortunately I don't still have the story itself, but I think I remember it well enough.

It was a series of four volumes that were about two or three pages long each. The story was written out in something resembling script format, so the chapters were relatively short and didn't take long to read.

Picture references: Dark Magician | Celtic Guardian (that was the one, thanks Flora!)

(I'm sorry if I create any disturbing images or ruin these characters for anyone. xD)

It started out with a reporter going to the Dark Magician's house to interview him; the Dark Magician answers the door in a bathrobe, which is a very terrible and disgusting thing (?). A big deal is made about that and how the Dark Magician likes to wear his bathrobe in public; the first volume ends with Dark Magician killing the reporter.

The second volume was basically the same thing only with the Celtic Guardian; a reporter comes to his house and this time finds him trying on a bikini. Celtic Guardian bursts into tears and admits that he's both gay and a stripper. (Note that I was still kind of "TEEHEE GAY PEOPLE" at the time of writing this. Oh, how times change.) The reporter asks him a bunch of inappropriate questions like how big his balls are. At some point the Dark Magician makes a cameo, and a long-lasting partnership between Magician and Guardian is forged. The reporter in this volume gets killed by both of them.

I don't really remember the third volume other than that it involved them stripping a whole lot, and I think a couple more reporters probably died in the process. In the end they decided to go to 'The Hop', probably because we were singing that "Let's Go to the Hop" song in chorus at the time of my writing the story.

In the fourth and final volume, our heroes go to The Hop and dance naked. They get ganged up on by reporters, who are both angry at them for killing so many of their fellow reporters and disgusted that the Dark Magician and Celtic Guardian wear bathrobes in public and strip, respectively. There's a great big showdown, and eventually Dark Magician and Celtic Guardian emerge victorious.

At the end of the story, there was a long Epilogue-type paragraph about what happened next. It basically said that the Dark Magician and the Celtic Guardian decided that killing people was really fun and so they set out to kill everyone in the world. The Dark Magician still wore his bathrobe, and the Celtic Guardian still stripped. They both lived happily ever after, I guess.

After I finished writing these I wrote some sequel-type things with Zelda characters in them, and I purposely tried to step up the inappropriate-ness (as much as I could being 11, anyway) for the sake of being funnier. I never really liked those very much, though, and after I got in trouble for the first ones I decided it'd be best to just stop it.

Aha aha aha, very good.

 

[Flora]

Wooooooow, Spaekle, that's one scary story.

(Hehe, glad my neighbor gave me that puzzle then.)

 

[Mad MOAI]

Ah, perfect timing :D

I had a fake comedy TV show centered around a guy called Mr. Hall. The seasons were called:

Mr. Hall
Mr. Hall 2
Mr. Hall 3
Mr. Hall and his Wife
Mr. Hall's Family
All About Mr. Hall
Mr. Hall's Do's and Always's
Mr. Hall Strikes Again
3 Strikes for Mr. Hall
The Clock Struck 11 but not Mr. Hall
Mr. Hall's Show of Really Really Really Really Long Show Titles of Doom

I only made one half of an episode for the season named "Mr. Hall." I recently found the paper with all the season names on it, so I'll try to start it up again.