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Stories/comics you wrote/drew when you were younger!

Once, aged between 8 and 11, I came up with an incredibly crappy comic based on a ripoff of Pokémon I made, called Monstermon, or Monster Monsters. At the time, I was adamant that I would create eleven million of the critters, so you can imagine how great the comic was XD I used to just staple together about thirty sheets of paper and then draw til it was filled up, rather than actually plan out issues. Once I stapled together about three pads of paper and decided I'd do a 300-or-so page issue. Suffice to say I got about two pages in and gave up. XD

From age 11, I made a comic based on Happy Tree Friends (basically just the innocent creatures randomly dying format). This was a modest success, lasting for about two years and 250 issues before I realised it was getting crapper than it was than it started.

Just after that I made a comic about a sheep who was a superhero with ninja powers. His name was "ninja sheep". I don't think I need explain why that didn't last.
 
HAHAHAHAHAHA

When I was in fifth grade, I wrote these stories about Yu-Gi-Oh characters (The Dark Magician and one of Yugi's other cards, some elf guardian thing I don't remember?) going out and killing people and stripping and being gay for each other. It was basically the work of a retarded kid who'd just learned what things like 'ballsack' meant and was trying to be funny. And funny it was to the entire fifth-grade class!

Well, the school found it, made copies of it, went through one copy and highlighted everything inappropriate in it, and gave it to my parents on parent-teacher conference night. I was in deep shit with both the school and my parents, needless to say. But my dad left the copy of the story that he was given in my room, and going through it again with all the inappropriate stuff highlighted made it even funnier. xDD They'd even highlighted every instance of words like 'bra' and 'naked'.

They got all concerned about me after that, though, and I had to stat seeing the guidance counselor every couple weeks. :[
 
Age 10-11, I made comics about some superhero animals I made. They were called "Sweetanimals"(it's getting worse...) and the leader was "Gothmouse"(I was really into the goth stuff back then, but just the clothing style really) The others were called stuff like "Doggie", "Psycho"(I thought it had something to do with "psychic"), "Lovepet"(now that I think back on it, it sounds kinda pervy...), "Gothcat", "Flycat", "Supercat" (were a "team-in-a-team" of three, kinda like Sonic Heroes) and I can't really remember anything else. The villains were "Starkitty", "Warizia"(the only decent name really), "Slimy/Slimecat/whatever"(he was covered in poisonous slime) and others.

Oh, and Starkitty's mum was really mad at him. XD
But seriously, I sucked at name-making. Most of them were just a noun and the animal they were.
 
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Now that I think of it, on the subject of Monstermon, my sister made up a weird Pokémon-type thing called Forkmon. It was a fork that could fly.
 
Spaekle Oddberry said:
HAHAHAHAHAHA

When I was in fifth grade, I wrote these stories about Yu-Gi-Oh characters (The Dark Magician and one of Yugi's other cards, some elf guardian thing I don't remember?) going out and killing people and stripping and being gay for each other. It was basically the work of a retarded kid who'd just learned what things like 'ballsack' meant and was trying to be funny. And funny it was to the entire fifth-grade class!

Well, the school found it, made copies of it, went through one copy and highlighted everything inappropriate in it, and gave it to my parents on parent-teacher conference night. I was in deep shit with both the school and my parents, needless to say. But my dad left the copy of the story that he was given in my room, and going through it again with all the inappropriate stuff highlighted made it even funnier. xDD They'd even highlighted every instance of words like 'bra' and 'naked'.

They got all concerned about me after that, though, and I had to stat seeing the guidance counselor every couple weeks. :[
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Oh, I know of the earmarking/highlighting thing... I once made pretend report cards with a friend... And she had them in her binder at school, and the teacher found them and made a huge deal about it. xD She highlighted random bad parts and made copies.
My other friend had a notebook that had some slightly bad language and pictures of her characters doing violent things, as well as a couple of her characters who happened to be gay for each other. Yeah, the school apparently has something against sympathetically-portrayed homosexuality. (They were hugging and holding flowers- how terrible! ) There were also many things related to a roleplay she was doing with a friend. It got confiscated and pages with things considered bad were earmarked and discussed.
The funny thing is that the page with a small drawing of guys kissing in a bigger scene was completely missed.
References to 'earmarked pages' became an inside joke.
Edit: Also, I really, really want to read your immature, long story if you still have a copy.
 
Spaekle Oddberry said:
HAHAHAHAHAHA

When I was in fifth grade, I wrote these stories about Yu-Gi-Oh characters (The Dark Magician and one of Yugi's other cards, some elf guardian thing I don't remember?) going out and killing people and stripping and being gay for each other. It was basically the work of a retarded kid who'd just learned what things like 'ballsack' meant and was trying to be funny. And funny it was to the entire fifth-grade class!

Well, the school found it, made copies of it, went through one copy and highlighted everything inappropriate in it, and gave it to my parents on parent-teacher conference night. I was in deep shit with both the school and my parents, needless to say. But my dad left the copy of the story that he was given in my room, and going through it again with all the inappropriate stuff highlighted made it even funnier. xDD They'd even highlighted every instance of words like 'bra' and 'naked'.

They got all concerned about me after that, though, and I had to stat seeing the guidance counselor every couple weeks. :[
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You have to show everyone the story. I don't care if the writing sucks, everyone would have sucked at some random age.
 
Cryptica might have said this already, but...

I remember writing a story from the point of view of a tyrannosaurus called "ME." And then I wrote a sequel called "Me 2." XD

That was back when we didn't know that tyrannosauruses walked horizontally and not vertically.
 
man, this brings back memories, when i was a kid i was a big fan of captain underpants, and i made my own super hero based of that called captain dirty belly button...I wish i still had some of the old comics i made to put on here, i just loved making them!

Another one that i made in 4th grade for a friend was my how to be stupid trilogy. its pretty much self explainitoy, the charactor i had in it was called Dummy.
 
I wrote this thing called Q.T girl ( I did not know how to spell cutie at the time) She was my fictional super hero...Thats right peeps there was a time when I was not a tomboy
 
^ I didn't know you were a Tomboy now XD

I wrote something when I was little...*goes into old school books that my dad kept*...

Oh, found something. I did a picture of a stick figure, climbing a tree that was only her size to get cherries that were the size of half the tree. My anatomy was horrible.
 
When I was but a wee 7th grader (2 years ago) I began spoofing some of my favorite games in a comic, simple heads-equal-bodies style. It eventually evolved into a Torchic traveling the multiverse and a universal threat. I don't know, the idea came around Tales of Phantasia's section.

Final Fantasy 6 section summary said:
I crossed Space and Time, and learned many things. Most importantly, I helped save the world more than once. Even though I was a minor influence to the heroes that were born in these other dimensions, they were good friends. Friends I could have never made as a human. They were most priceless people in the world, those who rescued me from danger and those who simply wanted me by their side in the heat of battle. One of these people was the one named Terra.

I first ran into Terra (or rather, she ran into me) when she was in a confused state of mind. She had lost all sense and was flying randomly around the continent. I witnessed her being brought away by a mysterious Masked Man, and ran to tell the closest people I could find. Fortunately, they knew her. Unfortunately, I couldn’t talk human the way I can now. One of them, Celes, used a one-time spell to give me that gift, and I explained everything. From then on, I was an honorary part of their team. Once Terra had been brought back to her senses, she cared for me, even if it didn’t seem like it.
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Also, Legend of Zelda's Link was a villian.
 
I remember Dannichu's fanfic from when I was like, eleven! :D

I used to write millions of Mary Sueish OT fics :( and I randomly wrote in prose then switched to script format for battles. I have no idea why. I was odd. Most of them involved Vulpix and Bulbasaur.

And death. Gory deaths of people who used to bully the shit out of me in primary school. :B I was soooort of a twisted fuck until I started high school.
 
Dannichu said:
oh my god my old Pokemon fanfiction x.x

It was... it wasn't terrible at the time (for an 11-12 year old), but looking back, they had no (real) plot whatsoever and were entirely in script form.

Classics included Fun in Cyberspace, Pokemon Survivor, Quest for the Wine Gums, Mission Unlikely and The Madness of Vermillion City.

...I know >>
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Oh, but those were so awesomely random! D:

Anyway... oh, the things I wrote when I was little... xD Actually, I didn't write all that much before fifth grade. I vaguely remember a failed attempt at Pikachu vs Charizard in some story I wrote in third grade, a Kirby fanfic I wrote in fifth grade and a story about the death of my cat in sixth (o.O). I made up fake Pokémon that I called Pikaswing and Pikaslide. Pikaswing went around on a giant swing and attacked people by swinging at them by surprise. Pikaslide was its evolution. My friend and I used to roleplay Pokémon in my pool over the summer, and I made up some Water/Psychic thing called Sacado that was the Water starter of some crappy region. She'd also give me and my sister "rides" on one of my swings, which were basically elaborate Pokémon roleplays that failed at life.

xD *goes searching through old stuff file*

Er. My description in sixth grade was not half bad. I always thought it was extremely crappy. xD

... I suppose I spoke too soon. Failed attempts at writing. xD ahaha Kirby shit is shit.

ew what the fuck is this a Hamtaro fanfic? It fails at life. Oh, no wonder, I was in fourth grade. xD

And in sixth grade I made up a world and started writing its calendar. The world was called Kazippa. o.O ... and apparently I made an item called a "wooga-wooga" wtf the months were called Zobikki, Copicksa and Zanippacoloosa.

Ew another Hamtaro fanfic. My cousin and I came up with this. I think we wanted to publish it. *gags*

Ewwww I sucked so horribly back then *gag*
 
Some years ago, I remember making a very Sue-ish Pokemon fanfic(i mean, the main character got a talking Sneasel for a starter, she caught an Eevee in the second chapter, and it evolved into an Umbreon in the next one...)
 
Let's see...

There was the thing with the living stuffed animals and gloves, when I was 4 or 5...

Then the potato-aliens, whose enemies were demons who want to turn them into potato chips, when I was 5...

And the cow-aliens with laser guns and flying surfboards who fought living hunks of beef and mutant alligators, when I was 6 or 7.

And the crappy Pokémon fanfic that ended up being 70 or so chapters long (which, somehow, people liked... even though it really, really sucked), which I wrote when I was in 7th or 8th grade... it was before Gold/Silver came out, so a lot of the stuff about G/S/C Pokémon was really wrong (the one I remember was that Togepi evolved into Ho-Oh--I apparently liked the "Togepi will be the Gold/Silver Magikarp" theory that was floating around back then) and it had some really weird new types and such (Food-type is probably the one people would remember, if they'd ever heard of it at all.) And, probably worst of all, it had the anime characters in it. Yeah, they all pretty much got killed and/or humiliated (Ash got eaten by a giant mutated Pikachu monster, and Misty ended up secretly being an experimental Pokémon... with moves like Splash and Lick) but they were still there...
 
Don't remember much of what I wrote other than this (not) epic story I wrote in the 6th grade during my dinosaur-and-Michael-Myers craze. Yes, it did involve both those things (dinosaurs and Michael Myers), but the dinosaurs were changed to people. It was...odd.

Then I wrote this other story about a Beatles-loving goth kid named Randy and this "prep" girl named Loreli and how they were psychic and had to go to a special Harry Potter-like school for psychic people, called Indigo University. Randy was British, randomly. And by the end of the story, he went from goth kid to John Lennon clone. o.O

Hah, and I remember this game my friend and I played in which we used pokemon figures as Inu Yasha characters and played out horribly-awful senarios with them. XD Oh my goodness, I was a dumb child.
 
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