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[Mewtwo]

Boochu isn't supposed to be a sprite, and I'm still learning =D

 

[Worst Username Ever]

Any reason why it's not the perfect, Mewtwo? Like, what's wrong with it? I doubt it's perfect, but if I don't know what's wrong with it, how can I fix it and get better?

WUE, I've seen neons before. They were usually that, but the good ones were animated with things like this-

Yeah, thanks. Neons were one of these "probably made before but never seen one" things.

 

[Kai Lucifer]

A pixel-over of the new form of Rotom [Frost Form], released on Serebii today. C+C Please?

 

[Zulo]

It's a fridge!

Good idea, and pretty good graphix. The sparks lack something though. Shouldn't they be kinda pillowshaded-ish? Sparks don't really cast shadows, they give off light.

 

[Flora]

Okay, so I was bored and tried a random revamp from Gold. The result:

Comments/Critique? (I personally think the shading could be better on it.)

 

[Zulo]

...then why don't you fix it?

Well, the brown outline is obviously all dark. Use the lighter outline in some places. Revamps aren't recolors, bla bla bla you can read the whole speach a few pages back. Try to fix the bright circles of color, they really don't look right.

 

[Flora]

...then why don't you fix it?

Well, the brown outline is obviously all dark. Use the lighter outline in some places. Revamps aren't recolors, bla bla bla you can read the whole speach a few pages back. Try to fix the bright circles of color, they really don't look right.

Because I wasn't quite sure how. ^^;

I did attempt to do some shading (obviously it didn't turn out well), though. As I'm pretty sure I said before, I'm not that good at scratch shading.

Fixing it up now. I'll edit when it's done.

EDIT:

I think the tail looks better. And I fixed the outline to be lighter.

 

[Reventhas]

Better. The right hand(our right) has too much shading in comparison to the rest of the arms though...
I have another mug:

 

[Lucas₇₅₅]

Nice. Do you make these from scratch? On th right (our right) side of the head, there's a little bump.

 

[Hikari Nijino]

Anyone have some crits for this?:

I suck at this.

 

[Mewtwo]

Actually, you Skitvee is pretty good!*insert non-exsisting critique for it here*

 

[Zulo]

Hitmontop is better, but I circled some mistakes-

Looks overwhelming...

Red- outlines are switched shades
Green- spotty
pink- too light.

It's not actually that bad. Just needs a few fix-ups on the outlines.

Sorry Reventhas, but I don't know what those are even supposed to look like. It looks fine to me though.

The skitvee is good, simple, but good.

 

[Garfield Grunt]

Map. By Me.

 

[Lucas₇₅₅]

That's neat. No crit, because it's pretty hard to screw up on those.

 

[Flora]

Okay, I'd already had it somewhat fixed up from the Spriters' Club thread, so now I hope it's better. ^^

You're all probably tired of seeing this by now. ^^

 

[Lucas₇₅₅]

Fix the shading to our right of the neck on the bottom (anatomically) of the head.

 

[wolftamer9]

- baddery and generion. C+CC?

 

[Zulo]

Spotty outlines on genarion. Also, you didn't use the light outlines on the face. Like the idea though, keep trying!

 

[Lucas₇₅₅]

More shading. Shade the area near the leg. And in the part where the leg goes into the body in a circle like thing, the circle thing should be outlined with the outline highlight. The position looks awkward, too. The legs look stiff.

The outline of the yellow on the tail is spotty. The helmet looks 2-D, and the rest of the body could use a bit more shading.

 

[GilferKnight]

here are some sprites i just did... recolors and what not...